Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
I enjoy it. I, uh, read books whenever I have time and I like, and I like, uh, all kinds of uh, uh, books like, uh. Romantic novels a fiction.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer to read on a screen or reading on paper means you have to go out and buy books in a physical bookshop. A reading on a screen can save a lot of time and money.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
Will it depends on the purpose. If I am prepared for my exam, it's important to read carefully and find the vital points. When it's just for fun, it can escape some paragraphs.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
It depends on the purpose. If I'm prepared for exams, it's important to. A read in details also that I can find a main points.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、简洁,避免频繁的填充词(如“uh”)和重复。首先直接给出主题句,然后用一到两句具体说明喜爱的类型和原因或举例。句子控制在最多五句内,注意语法(如“romantic novels and fiction”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read whenever I have free time, and I like a wide range of books, especially romantic novels and contemporary fiction. For example, I recently read a romance that explored relationships in modern cities, which I found very engaging.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答应更平衡并使用连接词,例如首先给出偏好,然后解释原因并做简短对比。注意语法和连贯性(如“reading on paper means”改为“reading on paper often means”)。控制在三到四句内。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and often cheaper. For example, I can download ebooks instantly and carry many titles on my phone. However, I sometimes enjoy paper books for the tactile feel and easier annotation.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅并修正语法错误(如“It depends on the purpose.”)。用清晰的连接词对比两种情况,并给具体细节说明如何阅读(例如标记重点、略读)。避免像“escape some paragraphs”这样的不自然表达,改为“skip some parts”。
Ví dụ: It depends on my purpose. If I'm studying for an exam, I read very carefully and underline key points or take notes. But when I'm reading for pleasure, I often skim or skip parts that are less interesting.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更完整且语法正确,先给立场,再解释为什么并举例。避免不完整句子,如“It’s important to.”要接完整内容。用连接词如“because”或“so that”来增强逻辑性。
Ví dụ: It depends on the purpose. For exams, I prefer detailed reading because it helps me find and remember main points. For everyday tasks like checking news, I usually scan quickly to get the general idea.
× I enjoy it. I, uh, read books whenever I have time and I like, and I like, uh, all kinds of uh, uh, books like, uh. Romantic novels a fiction.
✓ I enjoy it. I read books whenever I have time and I like all kinds of books, such as romantic novels and fiction.
句中有多余的填充词“uh”导致断句不清,并且短语“Romantic novels a fiction”结构错误。应移除多余语气词,并使用适当的并列或列举结构(例如“such as”或“and”)把类别并列起来。建议练习去掉填充词,使用简单连词连接名词短语。
× I prefer to read on a screen or reading on paper means you have to go out and buy books in a physical bookshop. A reading on a screen can save a lot of time and money.
✓ I prefer to read on a screen because reading on paper means you have to go out and buy books in a physical bookshop. Reading on a screen can save a lot of time and money.
原句时态和句子结构混乱。应使用现在时描述习惯性偏好,并用连词(because)连接原因。此外不需要不定冠词“A”在“reading on a screen”前。建议使用简单句或用连词明确因果关系,并保持现在时一致。
× Will it depends on the purpose. If I am prepared for my exam, it's important to read carefully and find the vital points. When it's just for fun, it can escape some paragraphs.
✓ It depends on the purpose. If I am preparing for my exam, it's important to read carefully and find the vital points. When it's just for fun, I can skip some paragraphs.
“Will it depends”时态和语序错误,应该用一般现在时表达通常情况;“If I am prepared for my exam”对习惯性或将来的准备应使用进行时或更自然的“preparing”;“it can escape some paragraphs”中主语和动词搭配错误,应该用“I can skip some paragraphs”。建议练习主语与动词的一致性并使用合适动词(skip)表达省略阅读内容。
× It depends on the purpose. If I'm prepared for exams, it's important to. A read in details also that I can find a main points.
✓ It depends on the purpose. If I'm preparing for exams, it's important to read carefully. Detailed reading also helps me find the main points.
原句中“it's important to.”不完整,应补全动词结构“to read carefully”。“A read in details”结构错误,应为“Detailed reading”或“Reading in detail”;“find a main points”主谓与数不一致,应为“find the main points”或“find a main point”。建议注意主谓一致、可数名词单复数以及使用正确的名词短语(例如“detailed reading”或“reading in detail”)。