Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Well, I like reading. I enjoy short novels and articles because they help me relax and learn new things. Umm, and I also read before bed. For example, I usually read a chapter of a book or an online article every night.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer reading on papers because it is easier on my eyes and it can protect my eyes and also I can quickly take notes. For example, I usually read novels or articles on paper and I read news or short articles on my phone.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
Will I need to I need to read carefully when it's something important like a correct or examination instruction because a small mistakes can cause big problems. For example, I always check exam rules twice. On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I look at social media.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
OK umm I prefer scanning because it is faster and it helps me find important information quickly. For example I when I read the news or look for factors for report I can I scan and it is more carefully if something is.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答总体自然且相关,但存在填充词(例如“Umm”)和部分重复表达。建议去掉多余的犹豫词,保持句子简洁,并使用一到两个更具体的细节来丰富内容(如喜欢的书籍类型或学到的具体知识)。注意句子长度不要超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially short novels and magazine articles because they help me relax and pick up new ideas. I often read before bed and typically read one chapter of a novel or a short online feature every night.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答清晰且理由明确,但有重复(“easier on my eyes”与“protect my eyes”意义重叠)且有小语法问题(paper应为paper or paper books)。建议合并相近理由,并用一两个连接词提升连贯性,同时修正小错误。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because it's gentler on my eyes and makes it easy to jot down notes. For instance, I read novels and longer articles in print, while I use my phone for quick news updates.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答包含有用对比,但有语法和表达错误(多余开头短语、‘correct’用词不当、单复数错误)。建议简化主题句,修正语法并用明确原因支持对比,保持句子流畅。
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when the information is important, such as exam instructions or legal documents, because small mistakes can have serious consequences. Conversely, I skim social media posts since they are informal and low-risk.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚但句子混乱、有口语填充词并且示例不完整或含糊(语法错误与断句)。建议去掉填充词,完善示例并说明何时会改为精读,使用连接词增强逻辑。
Ví dụ: I usually prefer scanning because it's quicker and helps me pick out key facts. For example, I scan news articles or sources when preparing a report, but if I find something important, I switch to detailed reading to ensure accuracy.
× For example, I usually read a chapter of a book or an online article every night.
✓ For example, I usually read a chapter of a book or an online article every night.
该句没有现在分词使用错误,保持不变(仅保留以确认无需修改)。
× Well, I prefer reading on papers because it is easier on my eyes and it can protect my eyes and also I can quickly take notes.
✓ Well, I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes, it can protect my eyes, and I can quickly take notes.
«papers» 用法不当。英语中谈论以纸张形式阅读时常用不可数名词 paper,而非复数 papers。将 papers 改为 paper,另外为句子流畅性在并列部分用逗号和连词连接。建议:记住某些材料名词(paper, glass, wood)作一般材料或媒介时常用不可数形式。
× For example, I usually read novels or articles on paper and I read news or short articles on my phone.
✓ For example, I usually read novels or articles on paper, and I read news or short articles on my phone.
原句在标点和连词处需要调整以改善可读性;news 本身为不可数名词,不能用复数形式。此处已保留 news 单数形式,但通过添加逗号改进句子结构。建议:news 永远作不可数名词,不加复数-s。
× Will I need to I need to read carefully when it's something important like a correct or examination instruction because a small mistakes can cause big problems.
✓ I need to read carefully when it's something important, like exam instructions or correction notices, because a small mistake can cause big problems.
原句中存在多处结构问题:开头出现多余疑问式 'Will I need to',应为陈述句;'a correct' 用法错误且不自然,改为 'correction notices' 或直接 'corrections';'examination instruction' 一般用复数 'instructions';'a small mistakes' 主谓与数不一致,应为 'a small mistake'。建议:避免句子开头出现不必要的疑问形式,确保名词单复数一致并使用自然搭配(exam instructions, correction notices)。
× For example, I always check exam rules twice.
✓ For example, I always check exam rules twice.
该句无数错误,保持原样。'exam rules' 使用复数正确,因规则通常有多项。
× On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I look at social media.
✓ On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I look at social media.
句子语法正确,无需修改。
× OK umm I prefer scanning because it is faster and it helps me find important information quickly.
✓ OK, umm, I prefer scanning because it is faster and it helps me find important information quickly.
句子本身结构正确,仅需在口语填充词后加逗号以改善书面呈现。建议:口语中的填充词可在书面语中用逗号隔开。
× For example I when I read the news or look for factors for report I can I scan and it is more carefully if something is.
✓ For example, when I read the news or look for facts for a report, I can scan, and I will read more carefully if something is important.
原句结构混乱且存在多处词汇和数的一致性错误:多余或错位的 'I'、'factors' 用词不当,应为 'facts' 表示事实或要点;缺少冠词 'a report';'I can I scan' 多余重复,改为 'I can scan';'it is more carefully if something is' 语序和词类错误,意图应为在有重要内容时会更仔细阅读,改为 'I will read more carefully if something is important'。建议:写句子前先理清主从句,确保主语、谓语不重复,选择正确名词(facts)并补全冠词。