Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words (umm, uh). Use linking words (for example, because) to connect ideas and give specific examples of the kinds of books you read.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. Every evening after I finish my errands, I sit on the sofa and read for about an hour because it helps me relax. For example, I often read contemporary fiction and short stories that let me escape from my daily routine.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear contrast and cleaner phrasing. Begin with a direct answer, then explain reasons using linking words (because, however). Reduce hesitations and correct small grammar (e.g., 'contains many books'). Include one concrete example of when you choose each format.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because the texture feels more real and it makes me more comfortable. However, when I travel I use my Kindle because it’s lightweight and can contain many books in one device.

Gợi ý: Clarify and structure the response: state clearly the types of material that need careful reading and why. Use linking words (for example, when, because) and give a specific example of a technical text versus a fiction text. Eliminate repetitions and hesitations.

Ví dụ: I read carefully when the material is technical or instructional because I need to understand specific steps or facts. For example, I read work manuals and how-to guides thoroughly. In contrast, I skim fiction or light articles when I just want entertainment.

Gợi ý: Give a concise direct answer and explain reasons with clear examples. Use linking words (because, for instance) and avoid unclear phrases. Compare scanning and detailed reading with specific contexts (e.g., scanning for news, detailed for study).

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand and remember information. For instance, I read academic articles or novels in detail, while I only scan newspapers or fashion magazines to get the main points quickly.

× Yes, I like reading every evening after I finish all my errands I will sit I would sit on sofa and take a book to enjoy some time of reading reading different different themes of.

✓ Yes, I like reading every evening after I finish all my errands; I sit on the sofa and take a book to enjoy some time reading different themes.

The original sentence has faulty verb forms and repetition. 'I will sit I would sit' is incorrect because this is a habitual present action, so simple present 'I sit' is required (Grammar problem type 10: verb in the present participle form was identified because 'reading' is used oddly and other verbs need present simple). Also missing article 'the' before 'sofa' and repeated words 'reading different different themes of' were corrected to 'reading different themes'. Use a semicolon or a period to separate independent clauses. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions, include necessary articles, and avoid repetition.

× I prefer to read on paper because the texture of a of a paper, uh, give me a sense of reality and, and makes me comfortable.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because the texture of paper gives me a sense of reality and makes me comfortable.

The phrase 'a of a paper' is incorrect and redundant; use 'paper' or 'a piece of paper'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'give' should be 'gives' because 'the texture' is singular (Grammar problem type 17: incorrect use of the definite article and 27: subject-verb agreement). Combined corrections: remove extra articles, use singular verb 'gives'. Suggestion: Use 'the texture of paper' or 'the texture of a book' and ensure verb agrees with singular subject.

× But sometimes when I go out, uh, I will take my Kindle. Uh, because it is a less heavy and umm, can contains many books in a in just one device.

✓ But sometimes when I go out, I take my Kindle because it is less heavy and can contain many books in just one device.

Errors: unnecessary future 'I will take' for habitual action should be simple present 'I take' (Grammar problem type 2: third person singular issue partly), 'a less heavy' is incorrect phrase — use 'less heavy' or 'lighter', and 'can contains' is wrong form; after modal 'can' use base verb 'contain' (Grammar problem type 4: modal verb usage and 2: third person singular). Suggestion: Use 'I take' for habitual action, 'lighter' or 'less heavy', and 'can contain' after 'can'.

× Uh, because it is a less heavy and umm, can contains many books in a in just one device.

✓ Because it is lighter and can contain many books in just one device.

Redundant or incorrect prepositions 'in a in just one device' should be 'in just one device' (Grammar problem type 11). Also 'a less heavy' corrected to 'lighter'. Suggestion: Remove extra prepositions and choose concise phrasing.

× When the book is, umm, is some uh, it's about some, uh, technical technique on my walk or is uh, is something uh, about, uh, like the others experience, uh, in their life.

✓ When the book is about a technical topic or about other people's experiences in life,

The original sentence is disfluent and contains repetition and wrong collocations: 'technical technique' is redundant and awkward, 'on my walk' is nonsensical here, and 'the others experience' should be 'other people's experiences' (Grammar problem type 26). Suggestion: Use clearer nouns ('technical topic'), correct possessive form ('other people's experiences'), and remove irrelevant phrases.

× I will read them carefully because I think I can learn more from them.

✓ I read them carefully because I think I can learn more from them.

Context is habitual preference, so use simple present 'I read' instead of 'I will read' (Grammar problem type 6). Suggestion: For habits and general truths use simple present tense.

× If I read carefully, I can, uh, I can, uh, I can learn more about if, if the story is about, uh, fiction or some.

✓ If I read carefully, I can learn more, especially if the story is fiction.

Sentence is repetitive and unfinished. Use concise conditional structure: 'If I read carefully, I can learn more' and specify 'if the story is fiction' (Grammar problem type 6). Suggestion: Remove repetition and complete the conditional clause.

× I prefer detailed reading, umm because umm uh scanning a scanning a book.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because scanning a book

Remove duplication 'scanning a scanning a' and adjust prepositions by continuing sentence to contrast activities (Grammar problem type 11). Suggestion: Keep contrast clear: 'I prefer detailed reading because scanning a book...'

× A scanning reading is uh, just use uh to read just it's just re used to read newspapers, magazine and umm magazines about the fashion uh, but we can't really learn.

✓ Scanning is just used for reading newspapers and magazines about fashion, but we can't really learn much from them.

Problems: 'A scanning reading' is incorrect; use 'scanning' or 'skimming'. Repetition 'just' and 'magazine and umm magazines' fixed. Also 'can't really learn' needs object 'much from them' (Grammar problem type 26). Suggestion: Use 'scanning' or 'skimming', avoid repetition, and include object for 'learn'.

× Comes in from them we read a real books uh detect, uh, with umm uh with with with detect.

✓ We learn less from them than from reading real books in detail.

Original is unintelligible and contains incorrect word order and choice: 'comes in from them' and 'detect' repeated — unclear verbs/adjectives (Grammar problem type 13). Rewritten to express intended contrast: learning less from skimmed articles than from detailed reading of books. Suggestion: Use clear comparative structure 'less... than...' and appropriate verbs like 'learn'.