Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
I don't enjoy reading very much, I often find it boring and instead it instead of helping me to relax and clear my mind it made me feel restless. So I prefer do something more reactive and like going for a walk or watching sports video.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer to read on a screen 2 papers because it's more convenient and and portable. It's allowing me to use to read in my mobile phone or in my computer.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
I have to read the carefully when I'm taking an examination because any details about the about the the question is important while solving these problems. The other time I choose to read uncarefully.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I prefer scanning rather than detailed reading because I read faster and I could get the main reason of the text I read it.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 在回答中注意句子简洁与流畅,避免重复和语法错误;先直接回答问题,然后用一到两句具体理由支持,并用连词使表达更连贯。可改进发音和时态一致性。
Ví dụ: No, I don't enjoy reading very much. I often find it boring and it doesn't help me relax; instead, it makes me feel restless. Therefore, I prefer doing more active things, such as going for a walk or watching sports videos.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接明确并避免词汇或数字错误(如“2 papers”)。用一到两句具体原因支持,并注意语法(时态、主谓一致)和连词使用。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and portable. For example, I can read on my phone or computer whenever I have free time, which saves space and is easy to carry.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 避免重复词(如“the about the the”),先用一句话直接回答两个情形,再用一两句具体说明原因或例子。注意用词准确,如用“carefully”与“不需要仔细阅读”的自然表达。
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I'm taking an examination because every detail can affect my answers. However, when I'm reading for pleasure or quickly checking messages, I usually skim and don't read every detail.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答应更自然并纠正语法问题(如“main reason”应为“main idea”),用连接词说明原因并给具体例子。保持句子简短清晰,避免多余词。
Ví dụ: I prefer scanning because it helps me read faster and grasp the main idea of a text. For instance, when I look for important information in an article, I scan headings and the first sentence of each paragraph.
× I don't enjoy reading very much, I often find it boring and instead it instead of helping me to relax and clear my mind it made me feel restless.
✓ I don't enjoy reading very much; I often find it boring. Instead of helping me to relax and clear my mind, it makes me feel restless.
句子中副词和形容词以及句子结构混乱导致时态和连接词使用不当。原句把并列想法放在同一长句里,且使用了过去时“made”而前后是一般现在时的习惯性情况。建议将句子分成两句或用分号连接,使用一般现在时(makes),并在“Instead of”后用逗号隔开。从而使表达更清晰自然。
× So I prefer do something more reactive and like going for a walk or watching sports video.
✓ So I prefer doing something more active, like going for a walk or watching sports videos.
原句结构不正确:动词prefer后应接动名词(doing)或不定式(to do),但此处应用动名词;'reactive'用错,语境应为'active'或更贴切的形容词;'watching sports video'应为复数或可数名词'sports videos'。建议记住常用搭配:prefer doing sth / prefer to do sth,选择恰当形容词并注意名词单复数。
× I prefer to read on a screen 2 papers because it's more convenient and and portable.
✓ I prefer to read on a screen rather than on paper because it's more convenient and portable.
原句有数字'2'显然是错误,且'article'和名词形式问题:应使用'paper'(作为不可数名词指纸质媒介)而不是'papers';比较结构用'rather than'更自然;双写'and'是重复。建议用'rather than on paper'并注意不可数用法和删除多余单词。
× It's allowing me to use to read in my mobile phone or in my computer.
✓ It allows me to read on my mobile phone or on my computer.
原句结构不正确:'allow'后不接现在分词表示普遍事实,用一般现在时'allows';'use to read'多余且错误;介词搭配应为'read on my mobile phone/on my computer'而不是'in'。建议简化为'subject + allows + object + to-infinitive'或直接'subject + allows + me + to + 动词',但这里更自然用'allows me to read'或直接'allows me to read on...'。
× I have to read the carefully when I'm taking an examination because any details about the about the the question is important while solving these problems.
✓ I have to read carefully when I'm taking an examination because any detail about the question is important while solving these problems.
原句存在多重问题:多余的定冠词'the'和重复词'about the the';'read the carefully'中'the'不应出现;'details'与后文'is'主谓不一致,改为'single detail'或将'is'改为'are'。为简洁,改为'single detail ... is'或'details ... are'。建议去掉多余词,修正主谓一致,并注意'read carefully'不加定冠词。
× I have to read the carefully when I'm taking an examination because any details about the about the the question is important while solving these problems.
✓ I have to read carefully when I'm taking an examination because any detail about the question is important while solving these problems.
原句中'any details ... is'主谓不一致:'details'为复数应接'are',或将'nany detail'用作单数接'is'。我选择改为'single detail ... is',以保持一致并使句子更自然。建议注意'any'后可跟单数或复数,但要匹配谓语动词。
× The other time I choose to read uncarefully.
✓ Other times I choose to read carelessly.
原句用法和词形有问题:'The other time'不自然,复数情形用'Other times'或'At other times';'adverb'应为'carelessly'而不是形容词'uncarefully'(虽可理解但不常用)。建议使用'Other times I choose to read carelessly'或'At other times, I read more casually'。
× I prefer scanning rather than detailed reading because I read faster and I could get the main reason of the text I read it.
✓ I prefer scanning rather than detailed reading because I read faster and can get the main idea of the text.
原句时态和结构问题:'I could get'应使用一般现在时'can get'与前文一致;'main reason'用词不当,常用'main idea'或'main point';结尾多余的' I read it'重复并且不必要。建议使用一致的现在时,改正搭配并删除重复部分。