Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like reading. Specializes in my favorite topic, metacognitive, cognitive example.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer to rest on screen because it helps me learn. And understand it deeper.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
When I feel like this topic are I need prepare for my homework, I will read carefully.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I think it's will depend on this topic. At least when I read the topic about communities or meta communities I like, I will prefer detail reading. But when I miss borrow problem I will prefer scanning.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: Cần trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn (Yes, I enjoy reading), sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể và ví dụ liên quan. Tránh cấu trúc ngắt quãng và từ không đúng ngữ cảnh (‘Specializes in’ không phù hợp). Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu và dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially books about metacognition. I find these books useful because they help me understand how I learn. For example, I recently read an article that explained strategies to remember information more effectively.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Cần sửa lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp (“rest” -> “read”) và nối câu để tự nhiên hơn. Trả lời trực tiếp, nêu lý do cụ thể tại sao đọc trên màn hình hữu ích, đồng thời giới hạn trong tối đa 5 câu. Nếu có thể, thêm ví dụ ngắn hoặc so sánh với giấy để làm rõ quan điểm.
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen because I can search for terms and highlight digital notes easily. This makes studying more efficient and helps me understand topics in depth compared with printed pages.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Cần cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và sửa ngữ pháp (“are” không đúng; sắp xếp ý: khi cần chuẩn bị bài tập thì đọc kỹ). Nên có câu chủ đề rồi giải thích cụ thể khi nào không cần đọc kỹ, dùng liên từ như “when” hoặc “because” để nối ý. Giữ câu súc tích và rõ ràng.
Ví dụ: I read carefully when I need to prepare for homework or exams because I must understand details. However, I don’t read carefully when I’m browsing casual articles or news, since I just want a general idea.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Cần dùng cấu trúc trực tiếp và sửa ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác (“miss borrow problem” unclear). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề (It depends on the topic), tiếp đó nêu hai trường hợp cụ thể với liên từ “for example” hoặc “however”. Viết rõ khi bạn chọn scanning và khi chọn detailed reading, kèm ví dụ ngắn.
Ví dụ: It depends on the topic. For example, I prefer detailed reading for subjects I care about, such as community studies, because I want to understand theories. However, I use scanning when I’m looking for specific information or solving quick problems.
× Specializes in my favorite topic, metacognitive, cognitive example.
✓ My favorite topics are metacognition and cognitive science.
The original is a fragment and misuses the verb 'Specializes'. It lacks a clear subject and uses incorrect noun forms. Use a complete sentence with subject 'My favorite topics' and plural verb agreement, and use correct nouns 'metacognition' and 'cognitive science'. Suggestion: form a full sentence (subject + verb + object) and check noun forms.
× I prefer to rest on screen because it helps me learn.
✓ I prefer to read on a screen because it helps me learn.
The student used 'rest' instead of 'read' and omitted the article before 'screen'. The verb should be 'read' for the context. Use the article 'a' with 'screen'. Suggestion: choose the correct verb and include articles with singular countable nouns.
× And understand it deeper.
✓ and understand it more deeply.
This is a sentence fragment starting with 'And' and using incorrect comparative adverb 'deeper' after 'understand'. Use a complete clause connected to the previous sentence and the adverb 'more deeply' to modify 'understand'. Suggestion: combine with previous sentence or make it a full sentence and use proper adverb form.
× When I feel like this topic are I need prepare for my homework, I will read carefully.
✓ When I feel that this topic is something I need to prepare for my homework, I will read carefully.
Multiple issues: 'topic' is singular so verb should be 'is' (subject-verb agreement), missing conjunction 'that' for the clause, and incorrect verb form 'prepare' needs 'to prepare for'. Rearranged for clarity. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree, include necessary subordinating conjunctions, and use correct infinitive forms.
× I think it's will depend on this topic.
✓ I think it will depend on the topic.
Incorrect combination 'it's will' mixes contraction and auxiliary. Use either 'it's' (it is) or 'it will', but here 'it will depend' is correct. Also use 'the topic' or 'the specific topic' for clarity. Suggestion: do not combine contractions with auxiliary 'will' and choose the correct determiner.
× At least when I read the topic about communities or meta communities I like, I will prefer detail reading.
✓ At least when I read topics about communities or meta-communities that I like, I prefer detailed reading.
Use plural 'topics' to match general reference, hyphenate 'meta-communities' and use 'that I like' for relative clause. 'Prefer detailed reading' uses adjective 'detailed' rather than noun 'detail'. Also 'prefer' is more natural than 'will prefer' for habitual preference. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and pluralization for general statements.
× But when I miss borrow problem I will prefer scanning.
✓ But when I encounter minor problems, I prefer scanning.
The phrase 'miss borrow problem' is unclear and ungrammatical. Likely meaning is 'minor problems' or 'small mistakes' encountered while reading. Use 'encounter' or 'come across' and 'minor problems'. Also prefer present simple for habitual preference. Suggestion: replace unclear phrase with appropriate collocation and use correct verb 'encounter'.