Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like reading very much. I prefer reading educational books for example like the historical books from history books. I can access more variety of views to see what the same historical things or people and help me cultivate my.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer reading on a paper that which that is to say paper books. Paper books is good for our eyes. If we read on the electronic devices, the lights will be harmful to our eyes and also can make us distracted.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
Well, when I need to prepare for my final exam or meeting exam, I need to read my textbook and PowerPoints more carefully because it's test may include some detailed things. But however when when the IT varied the other book.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I tend to combine in two type of reading. Then I need to read the to get the main idea of an essay. I may use the scanning reading As for the prepare for the final exam or other things I may read.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答应更自然、简洁并直接回应问题。避免重复(例如“historical books from history books”),句子结构要完整并有明确的主题句和支持细节。可以用一到两句说明喜欢的类型和原因,加入具体例子或个人感受以丰富内容,同时控制在最多五句内。注意语法(如动词时态、冠词)和连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially history books. They help me understand different perspectives on past events and shape my thinking—for example, a recent book on the Ming Dynasty changed how I view political leadership.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅并避免语法错误和口头重复(如“that which that is to say”)。先给出直接答案,然后用一到两句具体原因支持,使用连接词(because, so)保持逻辑。可以提供一个简短对比或个人经验。注意主谓一致和冠词使用。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading paper books because they are easier on my eyes and help me focus. For instance, I find myself distracted by notifications when I read on a tablet.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰的结构和完整句子。先用一两句明确说明什么时候需要细读并给出原因,再说明什么时候可以略读并举例。避免重复词(如“when when”)和不完整的表达(如“the IT varied the other book”)。使用连接词(for example, while)使逻辑清楚。
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when preparing for exams because tests often include detailed facts and concepts. However, when I'm reading for leisure, like a light novel, I usually skim to get the main idea.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答应更有条理:先直接回答偏好(combined/depends),然后分两部分具体说明何时用扫读何时精读,并用连接词(for general understanding / for study)和具体例子。纠正不完整句和重复,保持句子数量在五句以内。
Ví dụ: I usually use both methods depending on my purpose. For general understanding or when I’m short of time, I scan to capture the main idea, but for exam preparation I read in detail to learn facts and understand arguments.
× I prefer reading educational books for example like the historical books from history books.
✓ I prefer reading educational books, for example, history books.
句中多余或错误使用介词和重复词("from history books" 与前面的"historical books" 重复),且缺少逗号分隔插入语。建议去掉重复成分并用逗号分隔例子。
× I can access more variety of views to see what the same historical things or people and help me cultivate my.
✓ I can access a wider variety of views to understand historical events and people, which helps me cultivate my perspective.
原句结构混乱,缺少完整谓语和宾语(如"what the same historical things or people" 不明确),并且句尾不完整("cultivate my." 没有对象)。建议重组句子,明确主语、谓语和宾语,补全被省略的信息。
× I prefer reading on a paper that which that is to say paper books.
✓ I prefer reading on paper; that is to say, paper books.
原句中"a paper" 使用错误,习惯用法为不加冠词的"on paper"表示以纸质形式。句子还有多余的指示词"that which that",应删除并用分号或逗号分隔解释成分。
× Paper books is good for our eyes.
✓ Paper books are good for our eyes.
主语"Paper books" 是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式"are",因此需改为"are good"以保持主谓一致。
× If we read on the electronic devices, the lights will be harmful to our eyes and also can make us distracted.
✓ If we read on electronic devices, the light will be harmful to our eyes and can also make us distracted.
介词短语"on the electronic devices" 中不需要定冠词,常用表达为"on electronic devices"。此外主句中"the lights" 改为单数更自然(泛指屏幕光),并调整语序把"can also" 放在动词前。
× Well, when I need to prepare for my final exam or meeting exam, I need to read my textbook and PowerPoints more carefully because it's test may include some detailed things.
✓ Well, when I need to prepare for my final exams or midterm exams, I need to read my textbooks and PowerPoints more carefully because the tests may include some detailed material.
原句中"meeting exam" 词不当,应为"midterm exam(s)" 或类似表达;"it's test" 是错误的词组,正确应为"the tests"。需注意名词单复数一致(exams, textbooks)和使用恰当词汇(detailed material)。
× But however when when the IT varied the other book.
✓ However, when the topic varies or when I read other books, I don't need to be as careful.
原句重复"when when" 并且"the IT varied the other book" 不合语法也不通顺("IT" 可能意为"it"或"topic"),需根据上下文改为清晰表达,如讨论话题变化或其他书籍时阅读态度不同。
× I tend to combine in two type of reading.
✓ I tend to combine two types of reading.
动词后不应加介词"in"且名词应为复数"types"。原句中"combine in" 是错误搭配,应直接接宾语。
× Then I need to read the to get the main idea of an essay.
✓ Then I need to read quickly to get the main idea of an essay.
原句缺少方式状语或动词形式("read the" 后面缺宾语或副词),为表达略读以抓主旨,应使用"read quickly"或"scan"等完整结构。
× I may use the scanning reading As for the prepare for the final exam or other things I may read.
✓ I may use scanning to get the main idea. As for preparing for the final exam or other tasks, I may read in detail.
原句中"the scanning reading" 结构错误,应使用动名词"scanning"表示动作;"prepare" 应用动名词形式"preparing"作介词宾语;句子需分成两部分以提高清晰度。