Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (articles, plural forms), and give one or two specific examples or reasons. Use linking words like "also" or "because" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love reading. It expands my knowledge and helps me do better at school and in everyday life. For example, I read history books to understand past events and science articles to keep up with new discoveries.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct comparisons ("prefer X to Y"), simplify wording, and give a brief specific reason with an example of how you mark or control text. Use one linking word like "because".

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen to reading on paper because it is easier to search, highlight, and zoom text. For instance, I often use the highlight tool on my tablet to save important passages for later study.

Gợi ý: Make the contrast clearer and use natural expressions: state a topic sentence, then explain two situations with linking words like "when" and "but" or "whereas." Correct awkward phrasing ("learn by heart" -> "memorize" or "study carefully").

Ví dụ: I read carefully when I need to memorize facts or understand complex instructions, for example when studying for an exam. But when I only want a general idea, I skim the text to find the main points.

Gợi ý: Be concise and specific: give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why with a concrete example or result. Avoid vague endings and grammar errors ("remember longer" -> "remember information for longer"). Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand ideas deeply and remember information for longer. For example, when I read a textbook chapter carefully and take notes, I can recall the material more easily during tests.

× I really love reading because reading can expand my knowledge and make me more intelligent when I study at school or in the life.

✓ I really love reading because it can expand my knowledge and make me more intelligent when I study at school or in life.

The phrase 'in the life' is incorrect; the correct prepositional phrase is 'in life' (general condition). Also replace the repeated noun 'reading' with the pronoun 'it' for clarity and concision.

× So I really enjoy reading with different type of the books.

✓ So I really enjoy reading different types of books.

'Different type of the books' is incorrect: 'type' should be plural 'types' to match 'different', and the article 'the' is unnecessary. Use 'reading different types of books' for correct adjective-noun agreement and natural word order.

× Personally, I prefer reading on the screen than on paper because I feel that more easy to control what I read on screen and I can mark this passage when I read it and can control this.

✓ Personally, I prefer reading on a screen to reading on paper because I find it easier to control what I read on a screen, and I can mark passages when I read them.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than B' (comparison structure). 'More easy' is incorrect; use 'easier' (comparative form). Use 'a screen' and parallel structure 'reading on a screen' and 'reading on paper'. Replace 'this passage' and 'this' with plural/general forms and correct pronoun agreement.

× When I need to learn by heart and remember the keyword in the message, I always read it carefully and read details in the passage.

✓ When I need to learn something by heart and remember the keywords in a message, I always read it carefully and read the details in the passage.

Use 'learn something by heart' for natural phrasing. 'Keyword' should be plural 'keywords' if more than one; use 'a message' for general reference. 'Read details' should be 'read the details' to use the definite article with specific items.

× But when I just need to know the information in the message, I just read it.

✓ But when I only need to get the information in a message, I just skim it.

'Just' is repeated; replace one with 'only' for clarity. 'Read it' is vague; use 'skim it' to contrast careful and quick reading. Use 'a message' for general reference.

× I prefer detailed reading because it can make me expand my knowledge and I can remember longer than scanning.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps me expand my knowledge and remember things longer than scanning does.

'Make me expand' is unnatural; use 'helps me expand'. 'Remember longer' needs an object—'remember things longer'. Add 'does' after 'scanning' for clarity in comparison.

× So I always spend my time to reading details and catch the keyword on the message and it can make me more.

✓ So I always spend time reading the details and catching the keywords in a message, and it helps me improve.

'Spend my time to reading' is incorrect; use 'spend time reading'. Use gerunds 'reading' and 'catching' in parallel. 'Catch the keyword on the message' -> 'catch the keywords in a message'. 'It can make me more' is incomplete; specify what 'more' means, e.g. 'helps me improve'.