Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Am I? I do not prefer to read a books a lot because sometimes it seems to be quite boring. So whenever I have spare time I usually prefer to do some craft work and instead of reading books and sometime listen to the music which they me stressless.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
As I told earlier, I do not prefer to read books, but if I have a opportunity to read books, I just choose a screen books because it was a more convenient than the paper books because sometimes we are reading the books and we have we have to do some other work. So it was very difficult to find out that particular page again and again. So reading book on screen have been more beneficial.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
So if we talk about the reading books whenever we have we we are in our room with the spacious and comfortable places. When there is a no entrance of other masses, that will be the careful places to study. But when?
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
So whenever I buy a book, I usually prefer to scan the barcode. So I just also know about the summary of the particular book. Is it? Is it beneficial for me or I can understand it? So detailed reading cannot be that much beneficial. Scan learning is more beneficial.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Start with a direct, concise answer and avoid hesitations. Correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and simplify sentences. Add one or two clear supporting reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') and avoid redundancy. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.
Ví dụ: No, I don't read much. I find many books boring, so in my spare time I prefer doing crafts or listening to music because those activities help me relax.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Answer the question directly, then give concise reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and fix subject-verb agreement and articles. Use specific examples (e.g., portability, search function) to support your preference.
Ví dụ: If I must choose, I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient. For example, I can search for keywords, carry many books on one device, and quickly return to the exact page when I multitask.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence that directly answers when careful reading is needed. Use linking words to contrast situations (e.g., 'when' vs 'when not') and provide specific conditions (quiet place, purpose like exams). Fix grammar and avoid vague phrases.
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I study for exams or learn something new because I need to remember details. On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I browse for fun or skim articles for general ideas in busy places.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Directly state your preference, then explain why with specific reasons and examples. Clarify what you mean by 'scan' (skim summaries, read reviews) and correct tense and article errors. Keep it concise and logical using linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.
Ví dụ: I prefer scanning or skimming summaries before I buy a book because it saves time and helps me decide if the book suits my interests. For example, I read the back cover and a few reviews to decide whether to read the whole book.
× Am I? I do not prefer to read a books a lot because sometimes it seems to be quite boring.
✓ No, I don't. I do not prefer to read books a lot because sometimes they seem quite boring.
The first short response 'Am I?' is incorrect for the question 'Do you like reading?' Use 'No, I don't.' Also 'a books' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'books' without 'a'. 'It seems' should agree with plural 'books' so use 'they seem'. Remove extra 'a' before 'lot'. Use contractions or full forms consistently.
× So whenever I have spare time I usually prefer to do some craft work and instead of reading books and sometime listen to the music which they me stressless.
✓ So whenever I have spare time, I usually prefer to do some craft work instead of reading books, and sometimes I listen to music because it relieves my stress.
Sentence was run-on and had incorrect word order. 'Instead of' should link activities; place 'instead of reading books' before the conjunction. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Listen to the music' should be 'listen to music' (no article). 'Which they me stressless' is ungrammatical; use 'because it relieves my stress' or 'it makes me feel less stressed.' Ensure subject 'I' appears before verbs.
× As I told earlier, I do not prefer to read books, but if I have a opportunity to read books, I just choose a screen books because it was a more convenient than the paper books because sometimes we are reading the books and we have we have to do some other work.
✓ As I said earlier, I do not prefer to read books, but if I have an opportunity to read, I choose e-books or a screen because they are more convenient than paper books, since sometimes we have to do other work while reading.
Use 'an opportunity' (vowel sound requires 'an'). 'Screen books' is unclear; 'e-books' or 'reading on a screen' is better. Article 'the' before general 'paper books' is unnecessary; use 'paper books'. Verb tense and agreement: 'it was a more convenient' should be 'they are more convenient' to match plural subject and present reference. Remove redundant words 'we are' and duplicate 'we have'.
× So it was very difficult to find out that particular page again and again.
✓ So it is very difficult to find that particular page again and again.
Tense should match present habitual action: use present 'is' instead of 'was'. 'Find out' is unnecessary; use 'find'. The phrase 'again and again' is fine.
× So reading book on screen have been more beneficial.
✓ So reading books on a screen has been more beneficial.
Subject-verb agreement: 'reading books' (or 'reading on a screen') is singular concept requiring 'has been' or use plural subject with 'have been'. Better: 'reading books on a screen has been more beneficial.' Include article 'a' before 'screen' or use 'on screens'.
× So if we talk about the reading books whenever we have we we are in our room with the spacious and comfortable places.
✓ So if we talk about reading books, whenever we are in a spacious and comfortable room,
Remove extra 'the' before 'reading books' and duplicate words. Use 'a spacious and comfortable room' not 'our room with the spacious and comfortable places'. Keep noun and adjectives order natural.
× When there is a no entrance of other masses, that will be the careful places to study.
✓ When there is no entrance for other people, that will be a quiet place to study.
'a no entrance' is wrong; use 'no entrance' or 'no entrance for other people'. 'Masses' is inappropriate; use 'people'. 'Careful places' is incorrect; likely meant 'quiet place' or 'a place where I can study carefully.' Use singular/plural consistently.
× But when?
✓ But when would that be?
Single-word 'But when?' is terse and unclear. In context, ask 'But when would that be?' or 'When would that happen?' to form a complete question.
× So whenever I buy a book, I usually prefer to scan the barcode.
✓ So whenever I buy a book, I usually prefer scanning the barcode.
Both forms are possible, but after 'prefer' with general habits, use gerund 'prefer scanning' or 'prefer to scan'. 'Prefer to scan the barcode' or 'prefer scanning the barcode' are both acceptable; choose gerund to match habitual preference.
× So I just also know about the summary of the particular book.
✓ So I can also learn the summary of a book that way.
'I just also know about' is awkward; use 'I can also learn' or 'I also find out' to express ability. 'The particular book' is overly specific; use 'a book' or 'that book'. Maintain natural word order.
× Is it? Is it beneficial for me or I can understand it?
✓ This helps me decide whether it will be beneficial for me and whether I can understand it.
Broken questions should be combined into a coherent sentence. 'Is it beneficial for me or I can understand it?' is ungrammatical. Use 'whether' to connect alternatives and correct verb forms.
× So detailed reading cannot be that much beneficial.
✓ So detailed reading is not that beneficial.
Use present simple 'is not' rather than 'cannot be' for habitual opinion. 'That much beneficial' is unnatural; use 'that beneficial' or 'very beneficial.' Place 'not' before adjective.
× Scan learning is more beneficial.
✓ Skimming is more beneficial.
'Scan learning' is not idiomatic; use 'skimming' or 'scanning' (both are gerunds describing reading techniques). If you mean quickly looking through text, 'skimming' is best.