Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarifiez et simplifiez votre réponse en évitant les répétitions et en structurant mieux les idées. Par exemple, commencez par une phrase directe, puis donnez deux détails spécifiques (types de livres et bénéfices). Évitez les répétitions («I I») et réduisez la longueur pour rester naturelle.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading fiction and history books because they broaden my knowledge and help me relax after a busy day.

Gợi ý: Donnez une réponse claire et corrigez les petites erreurs grammaticales. Ajoutez un lien logique entre idées (par exemple: "because... and..."). Mentionnez un inconvénient brièvement si pertinent, sans alourdir la réponse.

Ví dụ: I prefer physical books because they are easier on my eyes and make note-taking simple, although some of them can be quite heavy to carry.

Gợi ý: Rendez la réponse plus générale et structurée: commencez par une phrase thème (when and why careful reading is needed), puis donnez one clear example. Évitez formulations confuses et vérifiez les noms propres («S Orion») ou remplacez-les par un exemple générique.

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I'm doing academic research or preparing an assignment, for example when studying for a marketing essay so I can accurately summarize and cite the sources.

Gợi ý: Améliorez la grammaire et la fluidité en utilisant une phrase topic claire et un lien de cause à effet. Remplacez "details reading" par «detailed reading» et évitez formulations lourdes comme "immerse myself inside".

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the context better and lets me fully immerse myself in the text.

× I love reading fiction, novel, documentary, history books because I I believe reading brings me a lot of knowledge and I can feel relief, stress relief.

✓ I love reading fiction, novels, documentaries, and history books because I believe reading gives me a lot of knowledge and helps me feel relief from stress.

Mixed use of singular/plural nouns and awkward adjective/adverb use. Use plural forms for countable categories (novels, documentaries), add 'and' before last item, remove duplicate 'I', and use 'gives me' and 'helps me feel relief from stress' for natural phrasing.

× I prefer reading physical books because they are very friendly to my eyes and I can easily take notes even though it's some books are very heavy.

✓ I prefer reading physical books because they are easy on my eyes and I can easily take notes, although some books are very heavy.

Incorrect phrase 'friendly to my eyes' and wrong use of 'it's some books'. Use idiomatic 'easy on my eyes' and replace 'even though it's some books' with 'although some books' to correct article and pronoun usage and sentence flow.

× If I have to do the research on the S Orion essay for my study in marketing, for example, I really need to read very carefully to recite an article correctly.

✓ If I have to do research for the S Orion essay for my marketing studies, for example, I really need to read very carefully to accurately summarize an article.

Awkward phrasing 'do the research on' and 'study in marketing'. Use 'do research for' and 'marketing studies'. 'Recite an article correctly' is odd; 'accurately summarize an article' fits the intended meaning and improves sentence structure.

× I prefer details reading because it allows me to have the better understanding of the context and immerse myself inside the reading.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it allows me to have a better understanding of the context and to immerse myself in the text.

Use adjective 'detailed' not 'details' before 'reading'. Use 'a better understanding' (remove 'the'). Use 'immerse myself in' rather than 'inside the reading' and add infinitive 'to immerse' for parallel structure.

× I love reading fiction, novel, documentary, history books because I I believe reading brings me a lot of knowledge and I can feel relief, stress relief.

✓ I love reading fiction, novels, documentaries, and history books because I believe reading brings me a lot of knowledge and helps me feel relieved from stress.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice: plural nouns for categories and use 'helps me feel relieved' (or 'helps relieve my stress') for correct verb-noun relationship and natural expression.