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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like reading?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like reading. It can it can let me feel relaxed after a busy day, it can learn new things and I usually reading book before go to bed or when I am in.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Thí sinh

I prefer to read on paper because it feels better for my eyes and I like all the real book in my hand. It can let me destruction.

Giám khảo

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Thí sinh

I need to read carefully when I read a important document like contracts or examination.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Thí sinh

It depends on what I am reading. If the important documents I will look at detail, but is a e-mail or or chat I I prefer screen.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like reading?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答比较简短且有语法与表达错误。建议:1) 开头用一句主题句直接回答,例如“I enjoy reading.” 2) 用连接词(and, because, so)把支持细节连贯起来;3) 注意时态和动词形式(e.g. "it helps me relax", "I usually read");4) 控制在最多5句内,避免重复。练习时把每个理由用一到两句具体化,例如说明喜欢的书籍类型或具体场景。

Ví dụ: I enjoy reading because it helps me relax after a busy day and I can learn new things. For example, I often read fiction before going to bed, and non-fiction when I want to learn practical skills.

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答清楚但有用词和表达错误("let me destruction"不通)。建议:1) 开始用明确立场句,例如“I prefer reading on paper.” 2) 提供两到三个具体原因并用连接词衔接(because, and, moreover);3) 使用正确表达("it's easier on my eyes", "I like holding a real book");4) 若能简短比较纸质与电子阅读的优劣更好。

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because it's easier on my eyes and I enjoy holding a real book. Also, paper books help me focus better compared with screens, which can be distracting.

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为准确但句子有语法问题(冠词和词形)。建议:1) 使用更自然的主题句,如“I need to read carefully when the material is important.” 2) 给出具体例子并用连接词扩展(e.g. contracts, exam papers, legal documents);3) 简要说明不需要仔细阅读的情形并给出原因(e.g. casual messages, social media)。

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when the material is important, such as contracts, exam papers, or legal documents, because mistakes can have serious consequences. For casual messages or social media posts, I usually skim them.

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答有逻辑但表达混乱且有重复词。建议:1) 用完整连贯的句子,如“It depends on the purpose.” 2) 清晰区分两种阅读方式并用连接词(if, but)说明条件;3) 避免重复并注意代词与冠词的使用("an email");4) 可补充何时选择快速浏览和何时仔细阅读的具体理由。

Ví dụ: It depends on the purpose. If I'm reading important documents, I prefer detailed reading to avoid mistakes, but for emails or chats I usually scan them quickly to save time.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× It can it can let me feel relaxed after a busy day, it can learn new things and I usually reading book before go to bed or when I am in.

It can let me feel relaxed after a busy day, it lets me learn new things, and I usually read a book before going to bed or when I am in bed.

句中有多处动词形式错误: 1) “it can it can” 为重复,应去掉重复。 2) “it can learn new things” 主语是“it”(指 reading),但更自然用一般现在时“lets me learn”表示“阅读让我学到新东西”;原句用“can”不太合适且语义不通。 3) “I usually reading book” 中动词应为原形“read”,且需冠词“a book”。 4) “before go to bed or when I am in” 中“go”应为动词不定式“going”或用一般现在“go”,且短语不完整,“when I am in” 应补全为“when I am in bed”。 改进建议:注意动词时态和形式(原形、-ing、被动/主动),阅读后逐句检查主语和动词是否搭配,并补全不完整的短语。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I prefer to read on paper because it feels better for my eyes and I like all the real book in my hand.

I prefer to read on paper because it feels better for my eyes and I like holding real books in my hand.

问题在于形容词/名词搭配和单复数: 1) “all the real book” 中“book”应为复数“books”,且“all the” 与“real”搭配不自然,表达应为“I like holding real books”或“I like real books in my hands”。 2) “in my hand” 更自然为复数“in my hands”或用动名词结构“holding”。 改进建议:注意可数名词单复数和固定搭配,想表达“拿在手里”可用“hold/holding … in my hands”。

Sentence structure errors

× It can let me destruction.

It can distract me.

原句结构和词汇错误:“let me destruction” 中“destruction”是名词,且搭配不对,应使用动词“distract”表示“让我分心”;若想用“let”结构,可说“it makes me distracted”,但更自然为“it can distract me”。 改进建议:确认要用动词还是名词,常见表达可查词典并注意固定搭配。

Incorrect use of articles

× I need to read carefully when I read a important document like contracts or examination.

I need to read carefully when I read an important document like a contract or an exam/paper.

问题在冠词使用: 1) “a important” 前应使用元音音素开头的单词“important”,正确冠词为“an important”。 2) “like contracts or examination” 搭配不一致,若指单个文件应用“a contract” 或“an exam/examination paper”;也可改为复数形式“contracts or examinations”。 改进建议:注意不定冠词选择(a/an 根据发音),并保持名词数的一致性(单复数要匹配)。

Sentence structure errors

× It depends on what I am reading. If the important documents I will look at detail, but is a e-mail or or chat I I prefer screen.

It depends on what I am reading. If it is an important document, I will look at it in detail, but if it is an email or a chat message, I prefer reading on a screen.

句子结构混乱并有多处错误: 1) “If the important documents I will look at detail” 缺少谓语和连词,正确结构为“If it is an important document, I will look at it in detail.” 2) “but is a e-mail or or chat I I prefer screen” 缺少主语和动词,且重复单词“or or”和“I I”。“a e-mail” 冠词错误,应为“an email” 或直接“an email” 但“email”以元音音素开头时用“an”。此外表达“我更喜欢在屏幕上阅读”应为“I prefer reading on a screen”或“I prefer the screen.” 改进建议:写复杂句时按从句-主句顺序组织,检查每个从句是否有完整主谓结构;避免重复并注意冠词与代词(it)指代的一致性。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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