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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like reading?

Thí sinh

Actually not really, because readings spend usually more time to read and I prefer to watch video on the Internet since it's more flexible and attract attractive.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Thí sinh

Actually I prefer to read both on paper and screen since it has different convenience. For example with a paper can protect my eyes and read ice cream more convenient.

Giám khảo

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Thí sinh

Actually, it's up to the scenario. For example, when I read the textbook, I will read carefully and when I read something on the Internet like drama, I will.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Thí sinh

Actually, it's up to the situations. Uh, As for me time is really valuable so I usually prefer scanning, but every time I read textbook or guidelines I will.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Do you like reading?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Cần sửa ngữ pháp, cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: tiết kiệm thời gian, dễ tiếp thu), dùng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh lỗi như "readings spend" và từ thừa như "attract attractive".

Ví dụ: I don't enjoy reading very much. I prefer watching videos online because they save time and present information in a more engaging way, so I can learn faster.

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Cần câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác, dùng từ phù hợp và tránh lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ "read ice cream" vô nghĩa). Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề (I prefer...), sau đó nêu hai lý do cụ thể cho mỗi loại, sử dụng liên từ để so sánh.

Ví dụ: I prefer both paper and screens because each has advantages: paper is gentler on the eyes and easier for lengthy study, while screens are convenient for quick access and searching information.

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Cần hoàn thiện câu chưa kết thúc và trình bày rõ ràng: nêu khi nào đọc kỹ và khi nào không, kèm lý do cụ thể. Dùng liên từ (for example, whereas) để phân biệt hai tình huống và tránh câu bị bỏ lửng.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation: for instance, I read textbooks carefully because I need to understand concepts, whereas I skim online entertainment content like dramas because I'm just browsing.

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Điểm: 44.0

Gợi ý: Cần câu trả lời hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng, tránh tiếng lắp và câu bỏ dở. Nêu câu chủ đề (I usually prefer...), giải thích lý do và nêu ngoại lệ cụ thể. Dùng từ chính xác như 'scan' hoặc 'skim' và 'detailed reading'.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer scanning because I'm short on time, but I do detailed reading when studying textbooks or following important guidelines to ensure I don't miss anything.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Actually not really, because readings spend usually more time to read and I prefer to watch video on the Internet since it's more flexible and attract attractive.

Actually, not really, because reading usually takes more time, and I prefer watching videos on the Internet since they're more flexible and attractive.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'readings' is incorrect noun form and should be the gerund 'reading' (use of verb as noun) and 'spend usually more time to read' has wrong word order and verb choice; use 'usually takes more time'. 'Watch video' needs plural 'videos' and the verb form 'watching' (verb + -ing) after 'prefer'. 'Attract attractive' is redundant and incorrect; use adjective 'attractive' referring to 'videos' and add pronoun 'they're'. Suggestions: use gerund for activities (reading), correct word order (subject + adverb + verb), use 'prefer + verb-ing', match number (videos), and avoid redundancy.

Article errors

× Actually I prefer to read both on paper and screen since it has different convenience.

Actually, I prefer to read both on paper and on a screen since each has different advantages.

Problems: missing articles before 'paper' and 'screen' and wrong collocation 'different convenience'. Use 'on paper' is fine but parallel structure prefers 'on paper and on a screen'. 'It has' is unclear because plural referents need 'each' or 'they have'. Replace 'different convenience' with 'different advantages' or 'conveniences'. Suggestions: add appropriate articles or determiners, keep parallel structure, and choose correct noun collocations.

Sentence structure errors

× For example with a paper can protect my eyes and read ice cream more convenient.

For example, using paper can protect my eyes and make reading more comfortable.

This sentence is ungrammatical: 'with a paper can protect my eyes' lacks subject and verb agreement; 'a paper' is wrong article and noun form; intended meaning is 'reading on paper protects my eyes'. 'Read ice cream more convenient' is garbled—likely 'reading more convenient'. Correction uses gerund 'using paper' as subject and 'make reading more comfortable'. Suggestions: ensure clear subject-verb structure, use correct noun phrases, and avoid typos/word substitutions.

Sentence structure errors

× Actually, it's up to the scenario. For example, when I read the textbook, I will read carefully and when I read something on the Internet like drama, I will.

Actually, it depends on the situation. For example, when I read a textbook, I read carefully, but when I read something on the Internet, like a drama, I don't always read carefully.

Issues: 'up to the scenario' is non-idiomatic; use 'depends on the situation'. Tense inconsistency: 'when I read the textbook, I will read carefully' should be present simple for habitual actions ('I read carefully'). The sentence ends abruptly 'I will.' which is incomplete. Also need articles before 'textbook' and 'drama'. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual behaviors, use complete clauses, and choose idiomatic phrases.

Sentence structure errors

× Actually, it's up to the situations. Uh, As for me time is really valuable so I usually prefer scanning, but every time I read textbook or guidelines I will.

Actually, it depends on the situation. For me, time is really valuable, so I usually prefer scanning, but whenever I read a textbook or guidelines, I read carefully.

Problems: 'up to the situations' is non-idiomatic; use 'depends on the situation'. Capitalization 'As' after filler is incorrect in flow. Missing commas for clarity. 'Every time I read textbook or guidelines I will' is incomplete and lacks articles; should use 'whenever' and present simple ('I read carefully') for habitual action. Suggestions: use 'depends on the situation', include articles before nouns, use present simple for habits, and complete the clause with the intended action.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

AttractiveAppealing; Good-looking
CreamLotion; Best; Off-white
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
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