Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は簡潔であるが、発音ミス（leading → reading）や文法ミス（comics makes → comics make）、冗長な表現がある。まずは明確なトピック文を使い、理由を2つまでに絞り、接続詞でつなぐ練習をすると良い。具体例（好きなコミックのタイトルや好きな要素）を一つ加えると効果的。発音は重要なので“reading”“comics”“relaxed”“exciting”等の単語を個別に練習すること。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading, but mainly comics. I like them because they help me relax and the stories are exciting, for example, I often read One Piece for its adventurous plot.

Gợi ý: 意図は伝わりにくく、語順や語彙の誤用が多い。まず“prefer to read on paper/screen”という明確なトピック文を作る。次に理由を1〜2点述べ、接続詞（because / so / therefore）でつなぐ。例として行動（bookstoreへ行く）を簡潔に表現する練習をする。発音と動詞（read）を正確に発音する練習も必要。

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy going to bookstores and turning real pages, and it feels more comfortable than reading on a screen.

Gợi ý: ほとんど意味が伝わらず混乱がある。まず質問の二部構成（いつ注意深く読むか／いつそれほど注意しないか）に沿って、簡潔に答える練習をする。例えば“study or work-related materialsは詳細に読む”“小説や漫画はラフに読む”のように対比を明確にする。理由を述べる際は短い文を使い、接続詞でつなぐ。

Ví dụ: I read carefully when the material is for work or study because I need to understand details. On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I'm reading comics for fun.

Gợi ý: 意思は伝わるが語彙ミス（deleting → reading）と構成の乱れがある。まず明確なトピック文で好み（scanning or detailed）を示し、理由を1〜2点述べる。コミックなら“detailed reading”の利点（絵や言葉の細部を楽しめる）を具体的に述べると良い。不要なフィラー（umm, uh）を減らす練習も有効。

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because comics often have subtle artwork and wordplay that I might miss with a quick scan.

× Yes, I like leading, but only comics, because comics makes me feel relaxed and they're so exciting too, so I like comics.

✓ Yes, I like reading, but only comics, because comics make me feel relaxed and they're very exciting, so I like comics.

The student used 'leading' instead of 'reading' (spelling/word choice). Also 'comics makes' is incorrect for plural subject; it should be 'comics make' to match plural noun with plural verb. Suggestion: use the correct verb 'read' or noun form 'reading' and ensure the verb agrees with the plural subject (comics + make).

× I prefer to lead and ask clean because if I want to lead their paper I want and I go to the bookstore or rental store but screen.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because if I want to read a physical copy I can go to a bookstore or a rental store, but I also read on a screen sometimes.

Many verbs are misspelled ('lead' for 'read') and sentence structure is broken. 'Ask clean' and 'their paper I want' are unclear; they likely intended 'read on paper'. Also need articles ('a bookstore') and clearer contrast with 'screen'. Suggestion: use 'read' not 'lead', include necessary articles, and structure the contrast with 'but' or 'however'.

× When I leave the one more time I lead the other presented page and I laid one more Saint Pete, but I don't think it is imp not important I.

✓ When I leave something, I usually read the next page or go back one more time, but I don't think it is very important.

This sentence is confused with incorrect words ('leave' likely 'leave' misused, 'lead' for 'read', 'laid' wrong form) and poor structure. 'imp not important I' is garbled; corrected to 'very important'. Suggestion: simplify: state the idea step by step, use correct verb forms ('read' not 'lead/laid') and clear adverbs ('usually').

× I prefer detailed deleting because come there, it's our umm. Word or photo in the comics? Comics the uh.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because there are both words and pictures in comics.

'detailed deleting' is incorrect; should be 'detailed reading'. The sentence has filler sounds and fragments. Use 'there are' for existence of multiple elements (words and pictures). Suggestion: replace fillers with clear phrase, use 'detailed reading' and the structure 'there are words and pictures'.