Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 발음과 문법 오류를 고치고, 부적절하거나 무관한 표현(예: "And kiss me")을 제거해야 합니다. 답변은 직접적이고 자연스러워야 하며 최대 5문장 안으로 유지하세요. 주제문(예: I enjoy reading)으로 시작하고, 이유와 예시를 연결어로 덧붙이세요. 예문에서 'think books' 대신 'think about books' 또는 'enjoy books'처럼 정확한 표현을 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: I enjoy reading, especially literature, because I find the stories and characters fascinating. For example, I often read novels that explore human relationships, which helps me understand different perspectives. Therefore, reading is both entertaining and educational for me.

Gợi ý: 문법과 어휘 선택을 정확히 고치고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요. 'wear on paper' 같은 잘못된 표현을 바로잡고 이유(촉감, 편리함 등)를 논리적으로 연결어로 설명하세요. 주제문→이유→예시 순으로 구성하고 불필요한 말을 줄이세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I like the physical sensation of turning pages, which helps me focus. However, recently I have been using a screen more often because it is convenient for reading on the go and allows me to adjust the font size.

Gợi ý: 문장의 논리와 내용이 혼란스럽습니다. 먼저 명확한 주제문을 말한 뒤, 구분되는 상황(주의 깊게 읽어야 할 때 vs 그렇지 않을 때)을 구체적이고 간결하게 설명하세요. 개인 정보나 무관한 문구('but I'm Lucas')는 제거하세요. 'I need to read carefully when I have to teach'처럼 직접적 표현을 사용하고, 이유와 예시를 덧붙이세요.

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I have to teach or present material to others because I must understand details and be able to explain them accurately. On the other hand, I can read less carefully when I read for fun, such as light fiction, where I just enjoy the story without focusing on every detail.

Gợi ý: 의사 전달을 명확히 하고 문장을 단순화하세요. 'detailed within the scanning' 같은 모호한 표현을 피하고, 한 가지를 분명히 선택해 이유와 예시로 뒷받침하세요. 연결어를 사용해 논리적 흐름을 만드세요. 또한 'I'm not good at scanning' 대신 더 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because I like to focus on the details and fully understand the text. I am less comfortable with scanning because I have less practice and often miss important points when I read quickly.

× I like reading and I love to think books, especially literature, because they're very fun.

✓ I like reading and I love to think about books, especially literature, because they are very enjoyable.

The verb phrase 'think books' is incorrect; you need 'think about books' to express reflecting on books. 'Fun' is commonly used for people or events; 'enjoyable' is more appropriate for books. Also replace the contraction 'they're' with 'they are' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'think about' with the object and choose appropriate adjective: 'enjoyable'.

× And kiss me.

✓ (Remove sentence)

This fragment 'And kiss me' is unrelated to the question and is a sentence fragment lacking context; it disrupts coherence. Recommendation: remove it or replace with a relevant comment about reading. Fragments should be avoided in formal responses.

× I prefer to wear on paper because it has I like the feel when I turn the next pages of paper book, but umm.

✓ I prefer paper because I like the feel when I turn the pages of a paper book.

Multiple structural issues: 'prefer to wear on paper' is incorrect — 'prefer paper' or 'prefer to read on paper' is correct. 'It has I like the feel' is ungrammatical; revise to 'I like the feel'. 'The next pages of paper book' should be 'the pages of a paper book'. Remove filler 'umm'. Suggestion: keep the phrase simple and follow Subject-Verb-Object order.

× Recently I use a screen to read because it's comfortable.

✓ Recently I have been using a screen to read because it's comfortable.

The simple present 'I use' is odd with 'recently' (a time marker indicating recent change); present perfect continuous ('have been using') is appropriate to show an action that began recently and continues. Use continuous aspect to convey ongoing habit.

× I think, uh, I need to read carefully when I have to teach someone about the book because I have too aware of everything in the world, but I'm Lucas.

✓ I think I need to read carefully when I have to teach someone about a book because I need to be aware of all the details.

Phrase 'I have too aware' is ungrammatical; correct expression is 'I need to be aware' or 'I must be aware'. 'About the book' can be 'about a book' for generality. Remove irrelevant 'but I'm Lucas'. Suggestion: use modal 'need to' + base verb 'be aware' to express necessity.

× I prefer detailed within the scanning because I'm not good at scanning and I don't have, uh, experience of scanning, reading and. Focus on books details so.

✓ I prefer detailed reading rather than scanning because I'm not good at scanning and I don't have much experience with it, so I focus on the details in books.

'Prefer detailed within the scanning' is incorrect structure; use 'prefer detailed reading rather than scanning'. 'Experience of scanning, reading and.' is incomplete; use 'experience with it' or 'experience with scanning'. 'Focus on books details' needs 'focus on the details in books'. Also combine fragments into a complete sentence and remove filler. Suggestion: compare two activities using 'rather than' and use 'experience with' + noun.