Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Используйте грамматически правильные и более естественные выражения, избегайте слов с ошибками (например, «feeding» вместо «reading»). Дайте краткий топик и затем одно-два конкретных поддерживающих предложения, используйте связки («because», «for example») и корректную форму глаголов.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me relax and reduce stress because I can escape into different stories. For example, I often read e-books since they are convenient and cheaper than paper books.

Gợi ý: Сформулируйте одно чёткое утверждение в начале, затем приведите 1–2 причины, используя связки («although», «because», «so»). Исправьте грамматику (например, «paper book are» → «paper books are») и используйте подходящую лексику («harmful to eyesight» вместо «harmful for our eyesight»).

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and cheaper. Although screens can be harmful to eyesight, I find e-books easier to carry and store.

Gợi ý: Дайте прямой ответ на вопрос («I need to read carefully when...»), затем объясните почему с конкретным примером. Избегайте некорректных выражений («until top end books») и исправьте согласование глаголов («helps» → «help»). Используйте связки («because», «for instance», «when»).

Ví dụ: I usually need to read carefully when the material is complex or in English because I want to understand details and improve my language. For instance, I read The Hunger Games slowly to follow the gripping plot and fascinating characters.

Gợi ý: Начните с ясного ответа («I prefer detailed reading»), затем приведите 1–2 конкретные причины, исправьте грамматику и словосочетания («detail drilling» → «detailed reading», «many book has» → «many books have»). Используйте связки («because», «so that») и держите ответ в пределах 1–3 предложений дополнительных деталей.

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me improve my English vocabulary and understand the story better. Many books have gripping plots and interesting characters, so reading carefully makes the experience more rewarding.

× Guess I'm really keen on feeding.

✓ I guess I'm really keen on reading.

The student used 'feeding' which is incorrect for expressing interest in the activity of reading; 'reading' is the correct gerund. Also the sentence needs the subject 'I' before 'guess'. Use 'I guess' as a parenthetical phrase. Suggestion: say 'I guess I'm really keen on reading.'

× It helps me to relax and reduce my stress.

✓ It helps me relax and reduce my stress.

After 'helps' the infinitive with to or the bare infinitive can be used; both 'helps me to relax' and 'helps me relax' are correct, but consistency and conciseness favor the bare infinitive here. Suggestion: use 'helps me relax.'

× I really like read ebook because it's convenient and cheaper than paper books.

✓ I really like reading e-books because they're convenient and cheaper than paper books.

After 'like' use the gerund 'reading' not the base form 'read'. Also 'ebook' should be 'e-book' or 'ebook' with consistent spelling, and 'it' should agree with plural 'e-books' or be changed to singular. Use 'they're' if plural. Suggestion: 'I really like reading e-books because they're convenient and cheaper than paper books.'

× I prefer it books on screen but it's really harmful for our eyesight.

✓ I prefer books on screen, but it's really harmful to our eyesight.

The phrase 'it books' is ungrammatical; remove 'it'. Use 'harmful to' rather than 'harmful for' when referring to negative effects on eyesight. Suggestion: 'I prefer books on screen, but it's really harmful to our eyesight.'

× But paper book are really expensive and it's not convenient for me.

✓ But paper books are really expensive and they're not convenient for me.

Mismatch between singular 'book' and plural verb 'are'. Use plural 'paper books' to agree with 'are'. Also 'it' should match plural subject as 'they're'. Suggestion: 'But paper books are really expensive and they're not convenient for me.'

× I think I always need to read carefully because all books are essential for me and helps me to relax.

✓ I think I always need to read carefully because all books are essential to me and help me relax.

Subject-verb agreement: 'books' is plural so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. Use 'essential to me' rather than 'for me'. After 'help' the bare infinitive 'relax' is more natural. Suggestion: '...and help me relax.'

× I really like until top end books, for instance The Hunger Games.

✓ I really like high-end books, for instance The Hunger Games.

'until top end' is ungrammatical and likely intended to mean 'top-end' or 'high-end'. Use 'high-end books' or 'top-end books' as adjective+noun. Suggestion: 'I really like high-end books, for instance The Hunger Games.'

× The plots really gripping and character are fascinating.

✓ The plots are really gripping and the characters are fascinating.

Missing verb 'are' after 'plots' and singular 'character' should be plural 'characters' to match 'plots'. Add 'the' before 'characters' for clarity. Suggestion: 'The plots are really gripping and the characters are fascinating.'

× I prefer detail drilling because it when I read books on English it helps me to improve my vocabulary and uh, it's gripping for me because many book has gripping plots and fascinating characters.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because when I read books in English they help me improve my vocabulary, and they're gripping for me because many books have gripping plots and fascinating characters.

Multiple errors: 'detail drilling' should be 'detailed reading' (correct adjective+noun). 'on English' should be 'in English' (preposition). 'it when I read' is ungrammatical; use 'when I read' without 'it'. Subject agreement: 'books' plural requires 'they help' not 'it helps'. Use bare infinitive 'help me improve'. 'many book has' should be 'many books have'. Replace 'it's gripping' with 'they're gripping' to match plural. Suggestion: 'I prefer detailed reading because when I read books in English they help me improve my vocabulary, and they're gripping for me because many books have gripping plots and fascinating characters.'