Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng và tự nhiên, nhưng mắc lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm một vài chỗ (ví dụ: "reading very good" thay vì "reading is very good"; "breathing" sai nghĩa). Nên sửa cấu trúc câu để ngắn gọn hơn (tối đa 4-5 câu), bổ sung linking words khi cần và dùng cụm từ chính xác hơn. Ví dụ cụ thể: nêu một thể loại hoặc cuốn sách yêu thích, khi nào đọc và lợi ích cụ thể. Hãy chú ý phát âm động từ và sử dụng “I often” đúng chỗ.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy reading. I find that reading broadens my perspective and helps me relax after a busy day. For example, I usually read fiction for about 30 minutes before bed, which helps me unwind and sleep better. Overall, reading is both enjoyable and beneficial for me.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời rõ ràng, có lí do và ví dụ minh họa, dùng từ vựng phù hợp. Cần sửa vài lỗi nhỏ như "on the paper" -> "on paper", và có thể thêm một linking word để mạch lạc hơn. Giữ câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp ý. Thêm so sánh ngắn giữa hai lựa chọn sẽ làm câu thuyết phục hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because it is more comfortable for my eyes and helps me concentrate. For instance, printed books don't have phone notifications, so I get less distracted and remember the information better. In contrast, reading on a screen often makes me lose focus quickly.

Gợi ý: Ý tưởng hợp lý nhưng diễn đạt lủng củng, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: "paper contents" không tự nhiên; "walk in a scan" sai cấu trúc; "waste our time" ý ngược lại). Cần mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi dùng linking words (e.g., "however", "for routine tasks"). Nên đưa ví dụ cụ thể về loại tài liệu cần đọc kỹ (hợp đồng, hướng dẫn) và khi nào chỉ cần quét nhanh (tin tức, email quảng cáo).

Ví dụ: We need to read carefully when the text contains important information, such as contracts, instructions, or exam questions, because mistakes can have serious consequences. However, for routine materials like short news articles or promotional emails, skimming is usually enough to get the main idea quickly.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, cấu trúc lặp và từ không phù hợp (ví dụ: "I think can I scan... I can waste a lot of time" mâu thuẫn). Cần phát biểu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích lí do với linking words và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc đơn giản, mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: I prefer scanning because it helps me find the key information quickly, especially when I am doing research or reading long articles. For example, when searching for statistics, I skim headings and the first sentence of each paragraph to locate the data I need without reading everything in detail.

× I think reading very good because it can help me enhance my perspective and reduce stress.

✓ I think reading is very good because it can help me broaden my perspective and reduce stress.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and adjective; also 'enhance my perspective' is awkward—'broaden my perspective' is more natural. Use 'is' to form a correct subject-linking verb structure. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× After a busy day I often breathing before going to bed or when I have free time at the weekend.

✓ After a busy day I often read before going to bed or when I have free time at the weekend.

The verb 'breathing' is incorrect in context; the student likely means an activity related to reading. Using the base verb 'read' fits the present simple frequency adverb 'often'. Present participle '-ing' was misused. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× From my perspective, I prefer to read on the paper because my eyes feel less tired and more comfortable.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer to read on paper because my eyes feel less tired and more comfortable.

The definite article 'the' before 'paper' is unnecessary when speaking generally about the medium. Use the uncountable form 'on paper' for general preference. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× For example, when I read a printed book, I'm not distracted by notification on my phone, so I retain information better.

✓ For example, when I read a printed book, I'm not distracted by notifications on my phone, so I retain information better.

'Notification' should be plural 'notifications' to match general occurrences; also consider adding 'the' before 'notifications' only if referring to specific ones. Here plural form is appropriate. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I think we'd need to read carefully when we have a paper contents any important information, and we don't need to read carefully when we walk in a scan some information so we can, umm, waste our time.

✓ I think we need to read carefully when a paper contains any important information, and we don't need to read carefully when we scan some information quickly so we don't waste our time.

Multiple issues: 'we'd need' (would) is inappropriate—use 'we need' for general truth. 'paper contents any' is wrong order and form: use 'a paper contains any'. 'walk in a scan' is incorrect—likely 'scan some information'. 'waste our time' meaning was reversed; add 'don't' to make sense. Corrections address noun-verb agreement and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I prefer scanning reading because I think can I scan some important information I can waste a lot of time and uh, can uh, find me some important information I want to find.

✓ I prefer scanning because I think I can find important information faster and not waste a lot of time.

Original sentence has poor word order and repetition. 'Scanning reading' is incorrect—use 'scanning'. The clause 'I think can I scan' is ungrammatical; reorder to 'I think I can find...'. Remove filler words and redundant phrases to make a clear, concise sentence. Grammar problem type ID: 26