Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で内容も明確ですが、文法の誤りや冗長さがあり、語順や前置詞の使い方を修正する必要があります。また、リンク表現を使って流れを良くし、文を短め（最大5文）に整えるとより自然になります。具体的には“busy for preparing”→“busy preparing”や“because I'm busy for preparing for my university tests”を“because I'm busy preparing for university entrance exams”に直すとよいです。さらに、過去と現在を対比するときは接続語（for example, when）を用いると明瞭になります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading, but currently I don't have much time because I'm busy preparing for university entrance exams. When I was in high school, however, I used to read on the train every day because my commute was long.

Gợi ý: 内容の対比は良いですが、時制や語の選び方に誤りがあります（“prefer”は現在形と過去形の一致、“had sure opportunities”は不自然）。また、結論が曖昧で最後の文が未完成に見えます。接続詞（however, but）を適切に使い、理由を具体的に説明すると効果的です。例えば“used to prefer paper, but now I read more on screens because assignments are digital”のように整理しましょう。

Ví dụ: I used to prefer reading on paper because I found it more enjoyable and easier to concentrate. However, at university I read more on screens because most of my assignments and materials are provided digitally.

Gợi ý: 意図は伝わりますが、前置詞や表現（“relate on”→“related to”, “my careless of reading”→“carelessness when reading”）の誤りが目立ちます。内容を論理的に整理し、例（試験日を間違えた経験）を簡潔に述べ、最後に一般的な状況（興味あるものは詳細に読まない）を明示してください。また文を短くして、接続語（especially, however）でつなぎましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually read everything carefully, but I pay special attention to materials related to exams because they affect my grades. For example, in high school I once misread my exam date due to carelessness, so now I double-check important information. Conversely, I don't focus too much on light, entertaining articles.

× I like reading, but these days I don't have enough time to read books because I'm busy for preparing for my university tests.

✓ I like reading, but these days I don't have enough time to read books because I'm busy preparing for my university tests.

Use of preposition 'for' before 'preparing' is incorrect here. After 'busy' we use the -ing form without 'for' (busy preparing). Suggestion: remove 'for' and write 'busy preparing'.

× When I was a high school student, I used to read books every day on a train because I had a long commute.

✓ When I was a high school student, I used to read books every day on the train because I had a long commute.

The phrase 'on a train' is not strictly ungrammatical but 'on the train' is more natural when referring to a habitual journey (the commute). Suggestion: use 'the train' for a habitual, specific means of transport.

× When I was a high school student, I prefer reading on paper because I found it more enjoyable and easier to concentrate.

✓ When I was a high school student, I preferred reading on paper because I found it more enjoyable and easier to concentrate.

The sentence mixes past time marker 'When I was' with present tense 'prefer'. Verb tense should match time reference. Use past tense 'preferred' for a past situation.

× However, after entering university, I had sure opportunities to read printed books because my teacher always gave me the assignment on the computer, so I prefer.

✓ However, after entering university, I had some opportunities to read printed books because my teacher always gave me assignments on the computer, so I preferred them.

Multiple issues: 'sure opportunities' is unnatural — use 'some opportunities'. 'the assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match 'always gave me'. 'so I prefer' is incomplete and mismatches past context; change to 'so I preferred them'. Suggestions: use 'some', make 'assignments' plural, and keep past tense consistency.

× I usually try to pay attention to everything I read, but especially materials that relate on exams.

✓ I usually try to pay attention to everything I read, but especially to materials that relate to exams.

'Relate on exams' is incorrect preposition use. The correct collocation is 'relate to' (relate to something). Also add 'to' after 'especially' to link the phrase properly.

× When I was a high school student, I misunderstood my exam date because of my careless of reading.

✓ When I was a high school student, I misunderstood my exam date because I was careless when reading.

'Because of my careless of reading' is ungrammatical. Use adjective 'careless' with a verb phrase ('I was careless when reading') or use the noun 'carelessness' ('because of my carelessness when reading'). Suggestion: rewrite to 'I was careless when reading' for clarity.

× On the other hand, I don't need to much focus on the interesting things.

✓ On the other hand, I don't need to focus too much on interesting things.

Word order and choice: 'to much' is incorrect; use 'too much'. 'Need to focus' is the correct verb phrase order. Also 'the interesting things' is unnecessary article; 'interesting things' is more natural here.