Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并且语法更准确。首先给出简洁的主题句表达喜欢读书，然后补充与专业相关的细节，使用正确的专业术语并避免重复。注意语法（例如 because 的位置）、单复数和词序，句子不宜过长。可以用1–2个支持细节来增强内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. Because I study Human–Computer Interaction, I mainly read books and papers about user experience and VR/AR, which help me apply theories to my system implementations.

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁并注意时态与词汇选择。先直接回答偏好，然后给出一到两个具体理由（例如方便检索、携带、导师提供电子书）。避免重复表达（prefer…prefer）和拼写错误（real → really）。

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen. As a graduate student I often access conference papers and ebooks in digital libraries, which is more convenient for searching and storing references.

Gợi ý: 需要更清晰地分两部分回答：何时需要仔细阅读，何时可以略读。使用明确的连接词（for example, when, because）并提供具体例子如数据、方法或结果。修正重复和语法错误，控制在3–4句内。

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when a paper contains detailed data or methodology, because those parts affect how I design experiments. For general background or familiar topics, I usually skim to get the main ideas quickly.

Gợi ý: 回答要更逻辑清晰，先说明通常倾向哪种阅读方式并给出理由，再说明在何种情况下会选择精读。避免模糊或不连贯的表达，减少口语重复（the same the same），用明确例子说明何时需要精读（讨论、结果、方法）。

Ví dụ: I usually scan articles to quickly find relevant sections, especially when topics are repetitive. However, when I need to understand discussions, results or methods that are important for my research, I read those parts in detail.

× Yes, I like reading and because my major is human counter interaction so I read the book in the topics around the user experience and all the VRAR.

✓ Yes, I like reading. Because my major is human-computer interaction, I read books on topics related to user experience and VR/AR.

句子时态和句子结构不清。原句用现在时表达喜好时应分成完整句子；另有词语拼写和搭配问题（human counter → human-computer； read the book in the topics → read books on topics related to）。建议：将复杂信息拆成短句，用现在时描述常态（I like; I read），并使用正确的名词搭配与介词（read books on topics related to）。

× So I must use the theory from another contribution to my system system implementation.

✓ So I must use theories or contributions from others in my system implementation.

原句结构混乱，语序和名词形式错误（another contribution to my system implementation 不自然），并有重复单词（system system）。建议：把意思分清：是“别人的理论/贡献”影响“我的系统实现”，用复数或可数形式（theories / contributions from others），并放在合适位置（in my system implementation）。

× To be honest, I prefer to read on a screen because I'm the graduate student and I real usually read the conference paper on the digital library and also my professor access to read some ebooks such as usability or the user evaluation.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to read on a screen because I'm a graduate student and I usually read conference papers in digital libraries. Also, my professor provides access to some e-books on usability and user evaluation.

原句时态和习惯表达混用，词序混乱且有拼写错误（real → really，the conference paper → conference papers，digital library → digital libraries），以及动词搭配错误（professor access to read → professor provides access to）。建议：用现在时描述习惯（I usually read），使用不定冠词a，复数形式表示一般性（papers, libraries），并用正确动词短语（provide access to）。

× So I prefer to read on the screen.

✓ So I prefer to read on a screen.

使用冠词和表达习惯上的小问题。一般泛指在屏幕上阅读时应使用不定冠词 a screen 或直接说 on screens，而不是特指 the screen。建议：使用 a screen 表示泛指。

× I usually need to read carefully when the paper has some detail or the potential information such as the experience data or the experience methodology, and it can help us to design our our other studies and can avoid cause mistakes.

✓ I usually need to read carefully when a paper has detailed or potentially important information, such as experimental data or methodology. It can help us design other studies and avoid mistakes.

原句信息冗长且重复（our our），名词形式和搭配不当（detail → detailed，potential information → potentially important information，experience data/methodology 用词不准，应为 experimental 或 experience-related），句子并列结构不顺。建议：将句子拆成两句，使用形容词化或副词化（detailed, potentially），修正名词搭配，并去除重复词。

× I usually scan in reading when I need to study.

✓ I usually scan when I read if I need to study.

原句中“scan in reading”搭配错误。应使用动词短语scan + when/if 子句，或用 scanning as 名词形式，但更自然的是 I usually scan when I read。建议：使用正确动词结构并保持时态一致。

× The reality works because it is the same the same topics surrounding bus.

✓ This works in practice because the topics are often the same across papers.

原句语序混乱，有重复（the same the same），并且bus 无意义（可能为 papers 或 'books' 的误写）。建议：澄清意思，使用常见表达（works in practice; topics are often the same across papers/books），删除重复词。

× If I need to raise more details about the UH discussions or results into important for this research and the important contribution, I can choose the detailed readings.

✓ If I need to provide more details about the discussions or results that are important for this research and its contributions, I choose detailed reading.

原句中动词搭配和从句结构不正确（raise more details about the UH discussions or results into important 不通顺），UH 可能为错写。并且名词短语冗长。建议：把定语从句放在被修饰词后（results that are important），使用正确动词（provide/provide more details; choose detailed reading），使句子简洁明确。