Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid run-on structures and use linking words (for example, 'and', 'which', 'so') correctly. Also choose precise vocabulary (e.g., 'gain knowledge', 'improve my confidence and vocabulary').

Ví dụ: I enjoy reading because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, I read novels to unwind and non-fiction to gain knowledge, which has improved my confidence and expanded my vocabulary for daily conversations.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: give a clear preference and then reasons with linking words ('however', 'because', 'for example'). Correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'read the newspaper', 'I enjoy reading the newspaper at home'). Be specific about situations and advantages of each format.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. I enjoy reading newspapers on paper at home because it feels relaxing and easier on my eyes. However, I usually read articles on my phone when I’m busy because it is convenient and I can access them anywhere.

Gợi ý: Use a clear topic sentence and correct tense and grammar. State two distinct situations with linking words ('when', 'because', 'while'). Be specific about strategies you use to read carefully (e.g., note-taking, eliminating distractions) and when you skim instead.

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully during exams or when I study for work because I must understand details and avoid mistakes. In contrast, I skim articles or emails when I’m short on time and only need the main idea.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference and explain reasons with specific examples. Avoid vague or unclear phrases ('receiver', 'understand the whole world'). Use linking words ('because', 'for example', 'however') and limit to 2–4 sentences. Mention when you would choose detailed reading instead.

Ví dụ: I prefer scanning because it helps me find key information quickly during exams or when researching. However, I use detailed reading for complex texts, such as academic papers, when I need to fully understand ideas and take notes.

× I am fond of reading books because it helps me to relax and unwind from my hectic work as well as not only I feel knowledge but also with my confidence and vocabulary which is very useful in my daily routine.

✓ I am fond of reading books because it helps me relax and unwind from my hectic work, and not only does it increase my knowledge, but it also improves my confidence and vocabulary, which are very useful in my daily routine.

Conjunction and sentence structure errors: the original mixes 'as well as' and 'not only... but also' incorrectly and has faulty clause order. Use parallel structure for 'not only... but also' and proper subject-verb inversion after 'not only'. Also use commas to separate clauses and ensure noun-verb agreement ('vocabulary' and 'confidence' with plural verb 'are' when described by 'which are'). Suggestion: use 'not only does it increase my knowledge, but it also improves my confidence and vocabulary' to keep parallelism and clarity.

× Sometimes I prefer to read on a newspaper.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to read a newspaper.

Preposition error: we say 'read a newspaper' or 'read the newspaper', not 'read on a newspaper'. Remove 'on' and include the appropriate article. Suggestion: use 'read a newspaper' for general preference.

× When I was at home during my free time, I also enjoyed newspaper read.

✓ When I was at home during my free time, I also enjoyed reading newspapers.

Incorrect word order and verb form: 'newspaper read' is ungrammatical. Use the gerund 'reading' plus plural 'newspapers' or singular 'the newspaper'. Maintain consistent tense and correct verb form. Suggestion: 'enjoyed reading newspapers'.

× Currently, on the other hand, I prefer the screen on my mobile phone because it's very convenient and accessible.

✓ Currently, on the other hand, I prefer the screen of my mobile phone because it is very convenient and accessible.

Preposition and noun phrase use: 'screen on my mobile phone' is understandable but 'screen of my mobile phone' is more natural. Also avoid contraction in formal test answers but not required; use 'it is' for clarity. Suggestion: 'prefer the screen of my mobile phone'.

× I really remember doing my exam time, I really make it more carefully 'cause I read fully focused on my topic without any distractions and sometime I'm not carefully read because I have lot of time.

✓ I clearly remember during exams I read very carefully because I focus fully on the topic without any distractions, but sometimes I do not read carefully because I have a lot of time.

Multiple sentence structure and tense issues: 'remember doing my exam time' is awkward — use 'remember during exams'. 'I really make it more carefully' is incorrect; use 'I read very carefully'. Colloquial ''cause' should be 'because'. 'sometime I'm not carefully read' has wrong word order and verb form; use 'I do not read carefully'. Include article 'a' before 'lot of time'. Suggestion: break into clear clauses: 'I clearly remember during exams I read very carefully... but sometimes I do not read carefully because I have a lot of time.'

× Well to be honest, I prefer scanning because it helps me a lot in my exam time I focus on scanning or receiver and uh sometimes I usually because it helps me to understand the whole world.

✓ Well, to be honest, I prefer scanning because it helps me a lot during exams; I focus on scanning, and sometimes I usually do it because it helps me understand the main ideas.

Run-on sentence and unclear word choice: the original is a run-on with poor cohesion. 'exam time' should be 'during exams'. 'receiver' is incorrect word choice — likely 'skimming' or 'reading quickly' but unclear; replaced with 'scanning'. 'understand the whole world' is exaggerated and unclear; changed to 'understand the main ideas'. Also add punctuation and conjunctions for clarity. Suggestion: use semicolon or separate sentences and replace unclear words with 'main ideas' or 'overall content'.