Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
I enjoy reading many books because they helps me relax and reduce stress. For example, I often read a book before sleeping.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer to read on a screen because many books are so heavy for me. On the other hand, screen is very light.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
When I read an important paper, I carefully read it. For example, when I attended meeting, I read paper carefully.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I prefer scanning because I can they do quickly. I don't have leading time but I want to read many books.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 文法と語形の誤り(例えば 'helps' → 'help')を修正し、より自然で簡潔な表現を使ってください。また、主題文に続けて短い理由と具体例を1〜2文でまとめ、最大5文以内に収めると良いです。語彙は“relax and reduce stress”のままで十分ですが、代わりに“unwind”などの語も使えます。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and unwind after a long day. For example, I often read a few pages before going to sleep, which makes it easier to fall asleep.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表現の繰り返しや不自然な比較を避け、対比をはっきりさせてください。冠詞や代名詞の使い方('screen is' → 'screens are' または 'a screen is')を直すと自然になります。理由をもう一つ添えて具体性を高めましょう。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen because e-books are much lighter and more portable than physical books. In addition, I can adjust the font size and read comfortably in different lighting conditions.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 時制と冠詞、語順の誤りを直してください(例:'when I attended a meeting' → 'when I attend meetings')。また、より自然な主語と動詞の使い方で理由を付け加えると良いです。必要な場面と不要な場面を対比して述べると明確になります。
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I review important documents, such as reports or contracts, because small mistakes can have big consequences. On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I browse casual articles or social media posts, since they're only for quick information.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 文法的誤り('I can they do quickly' や 'leading time')を修正し、明確な理由を1〜2文で述べてください。'scan' と 'detailed reading' の違いを具体例で示すと説得力が増します。語彙を正しく使い、文を簡潔にしてください。
Ví dụ: I prefer scanning because it allows me to get the main ideas quickly when I'm short on time. If a text seems important, I switch to detailed reading to understand it thoroughly.
× I enjoy reading many books because they helps me relax and reduce stress.
✓ I enjoy reading many books because they help me relax and reduce stress.
The plural pronoun 'they' requires a plural verb. 'Helps' is singular and does not agree with 'they'. Use 'help' to match the plural subject. Suggestion: identify the subject (they) and ensure the verb is plural as well.
× For example, I often read a book before sleeping.
✓ For example, I often read a book before sleeping.
This sentence is acceptable, but 'before sleeping' can be improved stylistically to 'before sleeping' or 'before I go to sleep'. No grammatical change is necessary.
× I prefer to read on a screen because many books are so heavy for me.
✓ I prefer to read on a screen because many books are too heavy for me.
The phrase 'so heavy for me' is unidiomatic; 'too heavy for me' correctly expresses excessive weight. This is an issue with word choice and collocation rather than article usage, but it best fits 'Article errors' in the provided list because of small determiner/phrase misuse. Suggestion: use standard collocations like 'too heavy for me'.
× On the other hand, screen is very light.
✓ On the other hand, the screen is very light.
When referring to a specific object class in context, English uses the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before 'screen' is ungrammatical here. Suggestion: include 'the' when referring back to an already mentioned or specific item.
× For example, when I attended meeting, I read paper carefully.
✓ For example, when I attended the meeting, I read the paper carefully.
Countable nouns 'meeting' and 'paper' require the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific meeting and paper. Also, 'attended meeting' is missing 'the'. The past tense 'attended' is correct. Suggestion: add 'the' before specific countable nouns.
× When I read an important paper, I carefully read it.
✓ When I read an important paper, I read it carefully.
Adverb placement: English typically places adverbs like 'carefully' after the object or after the verb phrase. 'I carefully read it' is understandable but less natural than 'I read it carefully'. Suggestion: place adverbs of manner after the object for natural flow.
× I prefer scanning because I can they do quickly.
✓ I prefer scanning because I can do it quickly.
The sentence has a pronoun and word-order error. 'They' is incorrect for referring to 'scanning' (an action) or 'it' (the reading). Also the word order 'can they do' is wrong. Use 'I can do it quickly' where 'it' refers to scanning. Suggestion: use the correct object pronoun 'it' for actions/nouns and maintain normal auxiliary + subject + main verb order.
× I don't have leading time but I want to read many books.
✓ I don't have a lot of free time, but I want to read many books.
'Leading time' is not a correct collocation in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'free time' or 'enough time'. Also, the sentence needs a comma before 'but'. Suggestion: replace 'leading time' with 'a lot of free time' or 'enough time' depending on intended emphasis and punctuate compound sentences properly.