Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Actually not because reading is too boring for me and I always want to do something else when I am reading, but when I ask good. My teacher always set a test for us to read a book and they want us to share it to everyone.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
OK, but this question I prefer to read on paper because it is convenient for us to take all notes on paper and it is easier to 10 page, but on the screen it is difficult for us to make something because I am not good at on good at computer.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
In my spare time I would reading some fiction and if you read fiction you can know that you don't need to read carefully because you can know the content very well. But in the test the the article is very difficult, so you need to read carefully at the test to know the information.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I prefer scanning because at many times we don't have ignored times for us to read to read. So scanning will be a bad method for us to know the content of the article especially at the test. In the test there are only a few times for us to read.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: 回答不够直接且表达混乱,有许多语法错误和重复。要先用一句主题句直接回答(Yes/No + brief reason),然后用一到两句具体支持细节;注意句子完整性、时态和主谓一致,避免多余和含糊的词。可以练习将长句分成更小、清晰的句子,并使用连接词如 "because", "but", "however" 来组织想法。
Ví dụ: No, I don't enjoy reading much because I find it boring and often get distracted. However, I sometimes read when my teacher assigns a book for class and asks us to present it to everyone.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答较有条理但句子不连贯且有词语错误(如数字或重复词)。需要先直接给出偏好,然后用一到两句具体原因并用连词连接。注意用正确词汇表达(e.g. "flip pages", "take notes", "use a computer")并避免重复。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because it's easier to flip through pages and take notes by hand. I also find screens tiring and I'm not very comfortable using digital devices for long reading sessions.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 总体结构还可以,表达目的清晰,但语法(如时态、冠词、重复词)与用词需改进。建议先用一句主题句区分两种情况,再用具体例子说明为什么需要或不需要仔细阅读,使用连接词如 "when", "because", "however"。
Ví dụ: I don't usually read fiction carefully in my spare time because I want to enjoy the story and can understand the plot without focusing on every detail. However, I read carefully during tests because the passages can be difficult and I need to find specific information.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答前后矛盾且表达混乱(先说偏好扫描,随后又说扫描是不好的方法)。应先明确立场,然后解释原因并避免自相矛盾。练习用清晰的对比句(e.g. "I prefer scanning because..., but for tests I need detailed reading because...")。注意词汇与句子逻辑。
Ví dụ: I generally prefer scanning because it lets me find key information quickly when I have limited time. However, for exams I sometimes switch to detailed reading because I need to understand complex ideas and answer questions accurately.
× Actually not because reading is too boring for me and I always want to do something else when I am reading, but when I ask good.
✓ Not really, because reading is too boring for me and I always want to do something else when I read.
原句句子结构混乱且含义不清。“Actually not”在口语中可改为“Not really”。“when I am reading”可简化为一般现在时“when I read”表示习惯性动作。句中“but when I ask good”无意义,疑为误写,应删除或改为合适表达。建议写句子时把原因和习惯动作分清,使用简单现在时描述习惯。
× My teacher always set a test for us to read a book and they want us to share it to everyone.
✓ My teacher always sets a test for us to read a book and wants us to share it with everyone.
原句存在时态和主谓一致问题以及介词和代词使用不当。主语是单数“teacher”,谓语应为三单“sets/wants”。“share it to everyone”应为“share it with everyone”。建议注意主语单复数一致,并使用正确介词搭配。
× OK, but this question I prefer to read on paper because it is convenient for us to take all notes on paper and it is easier to 10 page, but on the screen it is difficult for us to make something because I am not good at on good at computer.
✓ I prefer to read on paper because it is convenient to take notes on paper and it is easier to turn pages; on a screen it is harder because I'm not good with computers.
原句有代词、词序和重复短语错误。“this question I prefer”词序不当,改为“I prefer”。“take all notes”可简化为“take notes”。“it is easier to 10 page”显然是拼写或表达错误,应为“turn pages”。“not good at on good at computer”重复且介词使用错误,改为“not good with computers”。建议写句子时检查代词位置、避免重复并使用常见搭配。
× In my spare time I would reading some fiction and if you read fiction you can know that you don't need to read carefully because you can know the content very well.
✓ In my spare time I would read some fiction, and if you read fiction you don't need to read carefully because you usually understand the content well.
原句中“would reading”是动词后接-ing形式错误,正确应为“would read”或简单现在“read”。另外“you can know that you don't need”用法冗长,改为“you don't need...because you usually understand...”。建议注意情态动词或助动词后接动词原形,避免不必要的重复表达。
× But in the test the the article is very difficult, so you need to read carefully at the test to know the information.
✓ But in the test the article is very difficult, so you need to read carefully during the test to get the information.
原句有重复冠词“the the”,且“to know the information”搭配不自然,改为“to get the information”。同时建议把“at the test”改为更常用的“during the test”。注意避免重复单词并使用自然搭配。
× I prefer scanning because at many times we don't have ignored times for us to read to read.
✓ I prefer scanning because often we don't have enough time to read carefully.
原句“at many times we don't have ignored times for us to read to read”结构混乱并有重复。应表达“我们常常没有足够的时间仔细阅读”,可用“often we don't have enough time to read carefully”。建议用简洁的结构表达频率和时间短缺。
× So scanning will be a bad method for us to know the content of the article especially at the test.
✓ So scanning would be a bad method for us to understand the content of an article, especially in a test.
原句中“know the content”用词稍显不自然,改为“understand the content”。“at the test”改为“in a test”更地道。将情态“will”改为“would”与假设语气更匹配。建议选择更准确的动词并注意介词搭配。
× In the test there are only a few times for us to read.
✓ In the test there is only a short amount of time for us to read.
原句“a few times”用来表示次数不合适,应表示时间长度,改为“a short amount of time”。同时注意主谓一致“there is”。建议区分“次数”(times)和“时间长度”(time/amount of time)。