Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct small grammar and word-choice errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid capitalizing words unnecessarily and correct relative clause phrasing (e.g., “times when my mom gave me books”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. When I was a child my mother often gave me books instead of toys, which sparked my interest in stories. As a result, reading became a way for me to daydream and escape reality.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and tense consistency, remove redundancies, and improve coherence with linking words. Be specific about reasons (cost, convenience, tactile experience) and avoid small errors like extra words (“I when”). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer both, depending on the genre. For example, I read Japanese comics on a screen because printed copies are expensive and digital versions are more convenient. However, I prefer paper novels because I enjoy turning the pages and the physical feel of a book.

Gợi ý: Make the response more direct and grammatical: state the times clearly and use linking words to contrast. Provide a specific example of a situation requiring careful reading (e.g., studying notes) to enrich the content.

Ví dụ: I usually read carefully during my free or relaxed time, such as quiet evenings at home. In contrast, I rarely read when I’m very busy with school during weekdays, unless I need to study for exams, when I focus on detailed reading.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and natural phrasing, avoid vague expressions like “emerge with” and use linking words to organize reasons. Give one or two concrete benefits of detailed reading (e.g., better comprehension, emotional engagement).

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because it improves my comprehension and helps me connect emotionally with the characters. For example, reading a novel slowly allows me to notice themes and appreciate the author’s language, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

× I remember those times for my mom which gave me books instead of toys.

✓ I remember the times when my mom gave me books instead of toys.

Use 'the times when' or 'times when' instead of 'times for' and use a relative clause 'when' rather than 'which' for time. Also remove unnecessary 'which'. Improve word order for natural English usage.

× That's where I started to like reading because it lets me Daydream and escape reality.

✓ That's where I started to like reading because it lets me daydream and escape reality.

The verb 'started' is past but the general effect 'it lets me daydream' is present — that's acceptable because it's a general truth. Main issue: 'Daydream' should be lowercase 'daydream' (not capitalized). Use consistent casing and common noun form.

× I prefer both, but it depends on the genre that I wanted to read.

✓ I prefer both, but it depends on the genre I want to read.

Use present tense 'want' to match current preference. Remove unnecessary 'that'. 'Depends on' takes a noun phrase; 'the genre I want to read' is concise and correct.

× For example, I when I wanted to read Japanese comics, I like reading it on screen as it is very expensive in printed copies.

✓ For example, when I want to read Japanese comics, I like reading them on a screen because printed copies are very expensive.

Remove the duplicated 'I' and use present tense 'want' for habitual preference. Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'comics' (plural). Use 'on a screen' and 'printed copies' plural; move to natural word order 'because printed copies are very expensive'.

× However, when it comes to novels, I like to read it in books because I like to turn and pages and explore it.

✓ However, when it comes to novels, I like to read them in books because I like turning pages and exploring them.

'Novels' is plural (or treated as a category), so use pronoun 'them'. 'Read in books' is fine; more natural: 'read them in books'. Use gerund forms 'turning' and 'exploring' and remove extraneous 'and' and 'it'.

× I treat reading as a hobby, so I read when it is my alone time or when it is my relaxed time.

✓ I treat reading as a hobby, so I read during my alone time or when I am relaxing.

Use 'during' for periods of time rather than 'when it is'. 'Alone time' is correct but 'my relaxed time' is unnatural; use 'when I am relaxing' or 'when I want to relax'. Simplify structure for natural phrasing.

× When it is not, I do not read when I'm very busy with my school, especially on weekdays.

✓ When I'm very busy with school, especially on weekdays, I don't read.

Simplify and reorder the sentence for natural flow. Use present continuous 'I'm very busy' and contraction 'don't' fits conversational tone. Omit redundant 'with my school' — 'busy with school' is idiomatic.

× I prefer detailed reading because it makes you emerge with what you read, it makes you feel what you feel about that book, and it makes you also understand what you're reading and what makes reading so enjoyable.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps you engage with what you read, feel the emotions of the book, and better understand the text, which makes reading enjoyable.

'Makes you emerge with' is incorrect; use 'helps you engage with'. Combine and simplify clauses to avoid repetition. Use 'feel the emotions of the book' or 'feel what the book evokes'. Use 'better understand' for clarity and 'which makes reading enjoyable' to link cause and effect.