Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I really enjoy reading. This is probably because when I have free time, I usually reading to broaden my horizons and gain more knowledge about everything about my life so that uh, it's also help me realize and return the battery.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I prefer to read our spring. The main reason for this is I think it's very convenience and I can share idea from that story or that topic with my friends so we can discuss about that topic.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
That's the way question from your perspective. I think when we read from the main topic, the main plot of the story, we need to read carefully to remember it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I usually enjoy skimming when I reach for entertainment because I don't have much time I skiing to get the main ideas or the plot so I can finish more books quickly.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và mạch câu: sửa lỗi động từ (ví dụ 'reading' → 'read'), loại bỏ tiếng ồ ừ không cần thiết và rút gọn câu để tự nhiên hơn. Thêm một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể, có liên kết logic. Ví dụ tập trung vào loại sách và lợi ích cụ thể để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy reading. In my free time I read mostly non-fiction books about psychology and personal development because they help me understand myself better and improve my daily habits. Reading also relaxes me and recharges my energy.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi từ vựng và phát âm dẫn tới hiểu lầm ('our spring' → 'on a screen'), sửa ngữ pháp (concord, articles), và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Nên nêu rõ một lý do chính và một ví dụ cụ thể về việc chia sẻ nội dung với bạn bè.
Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer to read on a screen. It is more convenient because I can carry many books on my phone, and I can easily highlight passages and share interesting quotes with my friends for discussion.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Tránh trả lời mơ hồ hoặc hỏi lại không cần thiết. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó nêu ví dụ cụ thể lúc cần đọc kỹ (ví dụ: tài liệu học tập, hợp đồng) và khi không cần (ví dụ: tin tức tóm tắt). Dùng liên từ để liên kết ý và cung cấp chi tiết hơn.
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I study or sign important documents, such as course materials or contracts, because details matter. However, I don't read carefully when I skim news headlines or social media posts to get a quick idea.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi phát âm/chính tả ('skimming' not 'skiing'), chia câu thành câu chủ đề và câu giải thích, dùng linking words như 'because' và 'so' đúng chỗ. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về hoàn cảnh hoặc thể loại sách bạn skim để làm rõ ý.
Ví dụ: I usually prefer skimming for entertainment because I don't have much time; skimming helps me grasp the main ideas and the plot quickly, so I can read several novels each month.
× Yes, of course I really enjoy reading. This is probably because when I have free time, I usually reading to broaden my horizons and gain more knowledge about everything about my life so that uh, it's also help me realize and return the battery.
✓ Yes, of course I really enjoy reading. This is probably because when I have free time, I usually read to broaden my horizons and gain more knowledge about everything in my life, and it also helps me recharge my energy.
The main error is using the base verb with -ing (reading) after 'usually' where the simple present (read) is required; this is a Verb + -ing form error. 'Usually' is an adverb of frequency that should be followed by the base form for habitual actions. Also, 'help' must be inflected to 'helps' to agree with singular 'it'. 'About everything about my life' is redundant; use 'in my life'. 'Return the battery' is incorrect idiom — use 'recharge my energy'. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual actions (I usually read), ensure subject-verb agreement (it also helps), avoid redundant prepositions, and choose appropriate collocations ('recharge energy').
× To be honest, I prefer to read our spring. The main reason for this is I think it's very convenience and I can share idea from that story or that topic with my friends so we can discuss about that topic.
✓ To be honest, I prefer to read on paper. The main reason for this is that I think it's very convenient and I can share ideas from a story or topic with my friends so we can discuss that topic.
Errors include wrong pronoun/word choice ('our spring' is incorrect — likely meant 'on paper') and plural/uncountable noun forms ('idea' should be 'ideas'). Also 'it's very convenience' mixes a pronoun contraction with an adjective; use 'convenient'. 'Discuss about' is incorrect in English; the verb 'discuss' does not take 'about'. Suggestions: choose correct collocations ('read on paper'), match singular/plural nouns with context ('ideas'), use correct adjective forms ('convenient'), and omit unnecessary prepositions after 'discuss'.
× That's the way question from your perspective. I think when we read from the main topic, the main plot of the story, we need to read carefully to remember it.
✓ That's the question from your perspective. I think when we read the main topic or the main plot of a story, we need to read carefully to remember it.
'That's the way question' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is 'That's the question'. This is a sentence structure error. Also 'read from the main topic' is awkward; use 'read the main topic' or 'read about the main topic'. Adding articles ('a story') improves clarity. Suggestions: simplify the phrase to 'That's the question', use correct noun phrases ('the main plot of a story'), and place modifiers in natural order.
× I usually enjoy skimming when I reach for entertainment because I don't have much time I skiing to get the main ideas or the plot so I can finish more books quickly.
✓ I usually enjoy skimming when I read for entertainment because I don't have much time; I skim to get the main ideas or the plot so I can finish more books quickly.
Errors include incorrect forms 'reach for entertainment' and 'skiing' instead of 'read for entertainment' and 'skim'. This is a Verb + -ing form and word choice issue: 'skimming' is fine after 'enjoy', but later 'I skiing' incorrectly uses -ing without an auxiliary. Use simple present 'I skim' for habitual actions. Also 'reach for entertainment' should be 'read for entertainment'. Suggestions: use correct verbs ('read', 'skim'), use simple present for habitual statements, and ensure parallel structure in the sentence.