Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do, Although my reading habits come and go, when I'm in the mood, I can get completely absorbed in the book, especially if it offers a new perspective or tells a compelling story. For me, reading is not just a way to gain knowledge but also a form of mental escape.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I tend to prefer reading on paper, particularly when it comes to longer texts. There's something about physically turning pages that helps me stay focused and retain information better. Best say for convenience. I still rely on screens quite a lot, especially when I'm reading short article or academic materials on the.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
I usually read carefully when the information is important or complex, such as academic tests or instructions, because it missing even a small detail could lead to misunderstanding. On the other hand, when I'm just browsing news or social media, I tend to skim through the content.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
Is really depends on the purpose. If I'm trying to locate specific information quickly, I would definitely go for scanning. However, if the materials is meaningful or requires deeper understanding, I prefer detailed reading as it allow me to fully engage with the contents and think more critically critically about.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời tự nhiên, nội dung rõ ràng và có câu chủ đề; tuy nhiên cần chú ý ngắt câu đúng cách, tránh lặp ý (ví dụ “gain knowledge” và “mental escape” có thể được liên kết gọn hơn) và giới hạn số câu theo quy tắc (không quá 5 câu). Ngoài ra nên thêm một ví dụ cụ thể ngắn về sách hoặc thể loại bạn thích để tăng tính cụ thể.
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. My reading habits fluctuate, but when I’m in the mood I can get completely absorbed by a novel that offers a new perspective. For example, I recently read a historical fiction book that changed the way I view that period. Reading, for me, is both a way to learn and an enjoyable mental escape.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Nội dung hợp lý nhưng có lỗi ngôn ngữ và cấu trúc (ví dụ "Best say for convenience" không rõ nghĩa, thiếu từ, và câu cuối bị thiếu từ). Cần sửa ngắt câu, dùng linking words hợp lý và hoàn chỉnh các cụm từ (short articles, academic materials online). Thêm một câu ngắn giải thích khi nào bạn dùng màn hình sẽ giúp rõ ràng hơn.
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper for long texts because physically turning pages helps me focus and remember more. However, for convenience I use screens for short articles and academic materials, especially when I need to search or highlight quickly.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ "because it missing" nên là "because missing even a small detail" hoặc "because if I miss"). Nên sử dụng liên từ rõ ràng và cung cấp một ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ loại hướng dẫn bạn đọc cẩn thận). Giữ câu ngắn gọn và chính xác về cấu trúc.
Ví dụ: I read carefully when the information is important or complex, such as exam instructions or technical manuals, because missing a small detail could cause a misunderstanding. By contrast, I usually skim news feeds or social media when I just want a quick update.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Nội dung logic nhưng có nhiều lỗi câu ("Is really" -> "It really", "materials is" -> "material is"), lặp từ "critically" và thiếu dạng ngữ pháp phù hợp ("allows" not "allow"). Cần chỉnh ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ và dùng một hai linking words để mạch lạc; thêm ví dụ ngắn về khi nào dùng từng phương pháp đọc.
Ví dụ: It really depends on the purpose. If I need a specific fact, I scan the text to find it quickly. However, if the material is meaningful or requires deep understanding, I prefer detailed reading because it allows me to engage with the content and think more critically.
× Yes, I do, Although my reading habits come and go, when I'm in the mood, I can get completely absorbed in the book, especially if it offers a new perspective or tells a compelling story.
✓ Yes, I do. Although my reading habits come and go, when I'm in the mood I can get completely absorbed in a book, especially if it offers a new perspective or tells a compelling story.
This sentence has punctuation and article issues that affect clarity. Replace the comma after 'do' with a period and capitalize 'Although' to start a new sentence (Incorrect conjunction/punctuation usage). Change 'the book' to 'a book' because the statement talks about books in general (singular/plural/article issue). Suggestion: split into two sentences and use 'a' for nonspecific nouns. Grammar problem type ID:16
× I tend to prefer reading on paper, particularly when it comes to longer texts.
✓ I tend to prefer reading on paper, particularly when it comes to longer texts.
This sentence is correct; no change needed. Included for completeness as it contains no grammatical errors from the provided list. Grammar problem type ID:22
× Best say for convenience.
✓ But I would say paper is more convenient.
Original fragment is ungrammatical and lacks a verb and clear structure (sentence without a verb/structure error). Replace with a complete clause using 'But I would say' and 'more convenient' to express comparison and clarity. Grammar problem type ID:23
× I still rely on screens quite a lot, especially when I'm reading short article or academic materials on the.
✓ I still rely on screens quite a lot, especially when I'm reading short articles or academic materials on them.
Errors: 'short article' should be plural 'short articles' (singular/plural issue). 'on the.' is incomplete; likely intended 'on them' referring to screens (pronoun use/preposition choice). Fix both to make a complete, grammatical sentence. Grammar problem type ID:1
× I usually read carefully when the information is important or complex, such as academic tests or instructions, because it missing even a small detail could lead to misunderstanding.
✓ I usually read carefully when the information is important or complex, such as for academic tests or instructions, because missing even a small detail could lead to misunderstanding.
Errors: 'because it missing' is ungrammatical; remove 'it' and use gerund 'missing' as subject of clause (verb + -ing form). Also add 'for' before 'academic tests' for natural phrasing (preposition). Suggestion: use 'because missing' or 'because even missing'. Grammar problem type ID:8
× On the other hand, when I'm just browsing news or social media, I tend to skim through the content.
✓ On the other hand, when I'm just browsing the news or social media, I tend to skim through the content.
Add definite article 'the' before 'news' because 'the news' is the standard collocation (article error). Otherwise sentence is correct. Grammar problem type ID:22
× Is really depends on the purpose.
✓ It really depends on the purpose.
Original lacks subject 'It' and has an incorrect word order 'Is really depends' (sentence structure/subject-verb agreement). Add subject 'It' and use 'depends' (third-person singular correct). Grammar problem type ID:27
× If I'm trying to locate specific information quickly, I would definitely go for scanning.
✓ If I'm trying to locate specific information quickly, I would definitely go for scanning.
Sentence is acceptable. Conditional uses present progressive and conditional 'would' is stylistically acceptable though 'I'll' or 'I will' could be used. No correction necessary under given grammar list. Grammar problem type ID:6
× However, if the materials is meaningful or requires deeper understanding, I prefer detailed reading as it allow me to fully engage with the contents and think more critically critically about.
✓ However, if the material is meaningful or requires deeper understanding, I prefer detailed reading as it allows me to fully engage with the content and think more critically about it.
Errors: 'materials is' should be singular 'material is' or plural 'materials are' (singular/plural issue and subject-verb agreement). 'it allow' should be 'it allows' (third person singular). 'the contents' is awkward; use 'the content' or simply 'content' (article/adjective). Remove duplicated 'critically' and add 'about it' to complete the thought (sentence structure). Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree in number and avoid duplicated words. Grammar problem type ID:1