ReadingPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like reading?

Thí sinh

No, I dislike reading. I like to watch films and play computer games. Sometimes if I need to read something, I can read it.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Thí sinh

If I were to make a choice, I prefer to may read on paper. I think reading on paper is suitable for people to protect their eyes.

Giám khảo

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Thí sinh

When I'm reading advertisements or watching films, I think I need not to be careful. When I'm reading important documents, I think I will be careful.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Thí sinh

Detailed reading. If I read the important things, for example documents, I prefer detailed reading. If I need read unimportant things like films, advertisements, I prefer scanning.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like reading?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简单,语法和连贯性有不足。应在开头给出明确主题句,然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持观点,避免重复并改进语法,例如时态和条件句的表达。可练习使用连接词如 'because', 'so', 'however' 来使答案更连贯。

Ví dụ: I don't enjoy reading much because I find films and video games more engaging. However, I will read when necessary, for example when I need information for work or school, and I usually focus on summaries rather than long texts.

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达有语法错误和多余词(如 'may' 与虚拟语气混用),句子可以更简洁明确。建议开头直接给出偏好,接着用具体理由支持(例如眼睛疲劳、记笔记方便等),并用连接词如 'because' 或 'since'。

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and makes it simpler to underline or take notes. For long study sessions, paper helps me concentrate better than a screen.

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰但语法需改进(如否定结构和时态),可以用更自然的表达并加上具体例子说明何为“重要文件”。用连接词如 'whereas' 或 'but' 增强对比。

Ví dụ: I don't usually read carefully when I see advertisements or subtitles in films because they are brief and informal. But I read carefully when dealing with important documents, such as contracts or official emails, because mistakes could have serious consequences.

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且内容相关,但语言有些重复并需改进语法和流畅度。建议给出开头主题句,随后用具体对比和例子支持,并使用连接词(e.g., 'for example', 'while')使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading for important materials, such as legal documents or academic articles, because I need to understand every detail. For less important content, like film summaries or ads, I usually scan to get the main idea quickly.

Ngữ pháp

Modal verb usage

× If I were to make a choice, I prefer to may read on paper.

If I were to make a choice, I would prefer to read on paper.

句中同时使用了情态动词 may 和一般现在时的 prefer,且在虚拟语气(If I were to...)的从句后,主句应使用与虚拟语气一致的情态形式(would prefer)。建议去掉 may 并把 prefer 改为 would prefer,构成与虚拟语气相匹配的结构。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think reading on paper is suitable for people to protect their eyes.

I think reading on paper is better for protecting people's eyes.

原句中使用了 suitable for people to protect their eyes 的结构不自然。英文更常用的表达是 'better for protecting people's eyes' 或 'is better for people's eyes'。此外 'people to protect their eyes' 的不定式结构不符合意义。建议改用更地道的介词短语或动名词结构。

Modal verb usage

× When I'm reading advertisements or watching films, I think I need not to be careful.

When I'm reading advertisements or watching films, I think I don't need to be careful.

need 作情态用法时后面接动词原形(need do),但在现代英语里更常见且自然的表达是使用助动词 do: don't need to。原句中的 need not to 混合了两种用法,因此应改为 don't need to be careful。

Future tense issue

× When I'm reading important documents, I think I will be careful.

When I'm reading important documents, I am careful.

此句描述的是习惯性或一般情况,不是将来事件,因此不应使用将来时 will be。用一般现在时或现在进行时更合适:'I am careful' 或 'I try to be careful'。建议根据语境改为一般现在时以表达经常性的行为。

Verb + -ing form

× If I need read unimportant things like films, advertisements, I prefer scanning.

If I need to read unimportant things like film blurbs or advertisements, I prefer scanning.

need 后面缺少不定式 to,正确结构为 need to read。此外 'films' 与 'unimportant things' 搭配不太自然,建议使用 'film blurbs' 或直接说 'films' 的上下文改为 'movie descriptions'。总体修正为加上 to 并调整名词以更自然表达。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CarefulCautious; Prudent; Attentive
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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