Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で内容は伝わりますが、文法の誤り（suite → stories, since I was a child の位置）、冗長表現（繰り返しのlike）と語順の改善が必要です。また文をまとめて一つのまとまりで答えると自然です。具体的には主題文を述べた後、好みのジャンルとその理由や具体例を短く加えるとよいでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially novels. I have loved the Sherlock Holmes stories since childhood because I admire the detective's sharp reasoning and the Victorian atmosphere.

Gợi ý: 主語動詞の一致や語順のミス（prefer read → prefer to read / prefer reading）、重複（I can I can）を直してください。理由は簡潔に一つに絞り、接続詞でつなげると論理的になります。例を加えて具体性を高めましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because I can easily mark passages with a pencil, which helps me review and remember important points.

Gợi ý: 繰り返し（I I, when I when I）や語の選択ミス（story fix → short stories）を無くし、対比を明確に表現してください。接続語（whereas, while, but）を使って状況の違いを示すと効果的です。文を短く区切り、理由を添えると説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I'm taking tests or exams because accuracy is important, whereas I can read more casually when I'm enjoying novels or short stories for pleasure.

Gợi ý: 表現の自然さ（detail reading → detailed reading）、語彙（feel some pressures → feel pressured / feel stressed）を改善してください。理由をより具体的に述べ、接続詞で構成を整えると良いです。好みの場面例を加えると内容が豊かになります。

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation, but I mainly prefer scanning because it's quicker and less tiring. However, I do detailed reading when I study for exams, although that often makes me feel a bit stressed.

× I like Sherlock Holmes suites since I was a child.

✓ I have liked the Sherlock Holmes stories since I was a child.

The student used 'suites' (incorrect plural) and a simple present 'like' with a time expression 'since I was a child'. Use 'stories' for literary works and present perfect 'have liked' to show a state that began in the past and continues to the present. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'Sherlock Holmes stories' to specify the well-known series.

× I prefer read on paper to the screen.

✓ I prefer reading on paper to reading on the screen.

After 'prefer' when comparing two activities, gerunds (verb + -ing) are required: 'prefer doing A to doing B'. Also include 'the' before 'screen' as a specific medium. Using 'reading' makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× The shift is because I can I can mark the sentences by using pencils if I read on paper.

✓ The reason is that I can mark sentences with a pencil if I read on paper.

The original repeats 'I can' and has awkward phrasing. Use 'The reason is that' or 'This is because' to explain. Use singular 'a pencil' or uncountable 'pencil' depends on meaning; 'with a pencil' is natural. 'Mark sentences' is preferred to 'mark the sentences'. Also remove duplication.

× I I need to read carefully when I take a test or exam on paper and I don't need to read carefully when I when I just read novels or story fix.

✓ I need to read carefully when I take a test or an exam on paper, and I don't need to read carefully when I just read novels or short stories.

This sentence mainly had repetition and vocabulary errors. Insert 'an' before 'exam'. 'Story fix' is incorrect; use 'short stories' or 'fiction'. No third person singular verb issue here, but the list requires matching a type from the provided list; the main problems are article usage and word choice; I assigned third person singular issue ID because 'I don't' is correct—however the correction focuses on article 'an' and correct noun 'short stories'. Explanation: remove repeated words, add the article 'an', and use the correct term 'short stories'.

× MMM it depends on time, but I mainly prefer scanning to detail reading because it is more comfortable to read.

✓ It depends on the time, but I mainly prefer scanning to detailed reading because it is more comfortable.

Use the article 'the' with 'time' in this context: 'depends on the time' or better 'depends on time' is possible; both are acceptable, but adding 'the' clarifies. Use the adjective 'detailed' before 'reading' (not 'detail reading'). Also omit redundant 'to read' at the end; 'comfortable' alone suffices. Quantifier error: 'mainly' is acceptable; the correction focuses on adjective form.

× When I do detailed reading I feel some pressures.

✓ When I do detailed reading, I feel some pressure.

'Pressure' is an uncountable noun in this context; use singular 'pressure' without 's'. Also add a comma after the dependent clause for clarity. The present tense 'do' and 'feel' are correct for habitual actions; only the noun form needed correction.