Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 句子结构和表达需要更自然流畅，避免语法错误和冗余。注意动词短语搭配（e.g. "broaden my horizons"），修正双连词（"not only... but also"）。此外回答可稍作拓展，给出具体例子以增加内容的丰富性，但总句数不超过五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading, particularly science fiction and horror novels. They not only introduce me to new ideas about technology and society, but also broaden my horizons by exposing me to different perspectives. For example, reading an Isaac Asimov story made me think differently about robotics and ethics.

Gợi ý: 注意语法时态和句子完整性（例如"prefer to read"，不要遗漏不定式to；避免时态错误如"went just went to sleep"）。回答中给出一两个具体原因或短例子以显得更自然，但保持简洁。

Ví dụ: I prefer to read on a screen because it's more convenient and I can adjust the brightness and font size. For example, I often read short novels on my phone for 20–30 minutes before going to sleep.

Gợi ý: 表达要更准确流畅，避免重复（如重复使用"need"）和口语碎片。可以用对比连接词（e.g. "whereas", "but"）使逻辑更清晰，并给出简短具体的例子说明场景。

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I'm studying or reviewing technical materials because I must understand details and remember facts. By contrast, I skim novels or light stories to enjoy the plot without focusing on every sentence.

Gợi ý: 注意措辞和搭配（例如不是"materials you are building"，可用"materials they are"或"I'm reading"）；改正名词和动词形式（"detailed reading"应为"detailed reading"或"reading in detail"），并用简洁连词使句子更自然。给出一两个具体情境以增强说服力。

Ví dụ: It depends on the material. For important documents like official reports or study texts, I read in detail to avoid missing anything. For light reading such as short stories or novels, I usually scan to get the main idea quickly.

× It can not only teach me more knowledge but also and broaden my horizon.

✓ It can not only teach me more knowledge but also broaden my horizons.

问题类型：动词 + -ing 形式/句子结构。句子中出现“but also and broaden”结构重复且不正确，应为并列连词“not only ... but also ...”连接两个动词短语，第二个动词用原形而不是加入多余的“and”。另外“horizon”通常用复数形式“horizons”。建议用法：使用固定结构“not only + 动词短语 + but also + 动词短语”，并注意可数名词的单复数。

× I prefer read on the screen, I think it's more convenient.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen; I think it's more convenient.

问题类型：动词现在分词形式/句子结构。“prefer”后面通常接动名词（reading）或不定式，两部分应连贯；同时冠词使用需注意，通常说“on a screen”或“on the screen”（泛指建议用不定冠词）。另外原句中逗号拼接两个独立句子导致句子碎片，建议用分号或分成两句。

× For example, I will read some novels before I went just went to sleep.

✓ For example, I read some novels before I went to sleep.

问题类型：过去时用法。句中混用了将来时“will read”和过去时“went”，造成时态不一致。根据语境应使用过去时或一般习惯时，选择一致的时态：若描述习惯应用一般现在时（I read / I usually read），若描述过去某次则用过去时。此处改为过去时并去掉多余的“just”。建议：保持句中时态一致，避免重复词。

× On the one hand, when I need to read some study materials, I need to read really carefully, and when I need to some stories or some novels, I can scan them quickly.

✓ On the one hand, when I need to read study materials, I need to read very carefully; when I need to read some stories or novels, I can scan them quickly.

问题类型：介词/动词搭配错误及句子结构。“need to some stories”缺少动词“read”，且“read really carefully”更自然为“read very carefully”。使用分号或连接词可改善句子流畅性。建议：注意动词结构完整（need to do sth），以及副词选择（really vs very）。

× I think it depends on which materials you are building.

✓ I think it depends on which materials you are reading.

问题类型：代词/动词搭配错误。原句“materials you are building”意思不通，通常不说“build materials”在阅读语境中应为“reading”。建议根据语境选择正确的动词，保持主语和代词的一致性。

× For those important documents you need to detail reading and for those who are not important, for example some stories and some novels I prefer scanning.

✓ For important documents you need to read in detail, and for those that are not important, for example some stories and novels, I prefer scanning.

问题类型：现在分词/句子结构。“need to detail reading”错误，正确表达为“need to read in detail”或“read in detail”。此外需要在非限制性定语从句或插入语两侧加逗号，简化重复（some stories and novels）。建议：将短语调整为固定搭配“read in detail”，并注意标点分隔从句和插入语。