Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you have any hobbies?

Thí sinh

Yes, hobbies can help me relax. I I have a a hobbies. For example, I can play music, I can play piano, I recorded a song, I'm single and I love playing games, different video games.

Giám khảo

Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I try to remember, uh, I think this is a dance. I remember in my childhood. I going by dance school. I dance approximately 708 years. I like it.

Giám khảo

Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

Thí sinh

Unfortunately, I don't have home essential food because I'm very creative and in my life I like to try something new.

Giám khảo

Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

Thí sinh

Oh no, I don't have same hobbies as my family because we are different.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you have any hobbies?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Сначала прямо назовите свои увлечения, затем кратко объясните, почему они вам нравятся. Уберите повторы и не относящуюся к вопросу фразу “I'm single”. Используйте естественные формы: “play the piano”, “recorded a song” или “I’ve recorded a song”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a few hobbies, especially playing the piano and video games. I’ve also recorded a song, which was a fun way to be creative. These hobbies help me relax in my free time.

Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Ответьте в прошедшем времени и назовите хобби чётко. Можно сказать “I went to a dance school” и “I danced for about seven or eight years”, если вы имеете в виду именно этот срок. Добавьте одну конкретную деталь или причину, почему вам нравились занятия.

Ví dụ: Yes, I went to a dance school when I was a child. I danced for about seven or eight years and really enjoyed learning different routines. It was a great way to stay active and spend time with other children.

Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

Điểm: 15.0

Gợi ý: Первая часть ответа непонятна и не отвечает на вопрос. Скажите прямо, есть ли у вас хобби, которое сохранилось с детства. Затем объясните ответ: например, вы предпочитаете пробовать новые занятия, поэтому ваши увлечения меняются.

Ví dụ: Not really. I’ve always enjoyed trying new things, so my hobbies tend to change over time. I might focus on music for a while and then take up a different activity.

Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Ответ дан прямо, но пояснение “because we are different” слишком общее. Добавьте конкретный пример: чем увлекаетесь вы и чем занимаются родственники. Не забудьте артикль в выражении “the same hobbies”.

Ví dụ: No, we don’t have exactly the same hobbies. I enjoy playing video games and making music, whereas some of my family members prefer watching films or doing things outdoors. We still enjoy spending time together.

Ngữ pháp

1: Singular and plural issue

× I I have a a hobbies.

✓ I have hobbies.

Hobbies is plural, so it cannot be preceded by the singular article a. Remove the repeated words and use hobbies without an article.

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× I can play piano.

✓ I can play the piano.

When referring to playing a musical instrument, English normally uses the definite article the before the instrument. Say play the piano.

5: Past tense issue

× I think this is a dance.

✓ I think it was dancing.

The question asks about a childhood hobby, so the past tense is more appropriate. Use was rather than is when describing a past activity.

26: Sentence structure errors

× I remember in my childhood.

✓ I remember dancing during my childhood.

In this context, remember needs a clear object or complement. Add the activity being remembered, such as dancing, to make the sentence complete.

5: Past tense issue

× I going by dance school.

✓ I went to dance school.

The sentence describes a past childhood activity, so use the past-tense verb went. Going cannot be used here without an auxiliary verb.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I going by dance school.

✓ I went to dance school.

Use to, not by, to describe attending or traveling to a school. The usual phrase is go to dance school.

5: Past tense issue

× I dance approximately 708 years.

✓ I danced for approximately seven or eight years.

The answer refers to a childhood activity that happened in the past, so use danced rather than dance. The duration appears to mean seven or eight years.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I dance approximately 708 years.

✓ I danced for approximately seven or eight years.

Use for before a length of time to show how long an activity continued: for seven or eight years.

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× I don't have same hobbies as my family because we are different.

✓ I don't have the same hobbies as my family because we are different.

Use the before same in this expression. The standard phrase is the same hobbies.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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