Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same idea. Use the correct subject structure, such as “My friends and I,” and use the present simple for regular activities: “play,” not “playing.” Add one specific reason why you enjoy cricket and connect the details with a linking word such as “because.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I have several hobbies, but cricket is my favourite. My friends and I usually play on a playground near my hometown at around four o’clock. I enjoy it because it keeps me fit and gives me a chance to spend time with my friends.

Gợi ý: Use the past simple because the question asks about your childhood: “went,” not “go.” State the hobby clearly in the first sentence, and avoid repeating “my mum and I went to the park.” Also, say “for a morning walk” rather than “to morning work.”

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, my mum and I enjoyed going for a morning walk. We usually went to a park near my hometown. It was a healthy habit because it improved both our physical and mental well-being.

Gợi ý: Give a complete sentence with the correct present perfect structure: “I have had this hobby since I was a child.” Identify the hobby clearly and add one or two supporting details, such as who you do it with and why you still enjoy it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had the hobby of going for morning walks since I was a child. I usually walk with my mother in a nearby park. I still enjoy it because it helps me start the day feeling relaxed and energetic.

Gợi ý: Answer with a clear comparison and use the correct pronouns and verb forms: “My mother and I have the same hobby” and “we went.” Avoid addressing the examiner as “you,” repeating words, and ending with “this is the answer.” Explain how the shared hobby benefits both of you.

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother and I have the same hobby: going for morning walks. We have enjoyed this activity since I was a child, and we often walk in a park near our hometown. It is a good way for us to exercise and spend quality time together.

× Me and I and my friends playing cricket in a playground near my hometown.

✓ My friends and I play cricket in a playground near my hometown.

When a pronoun refers to the subject of a sentence, use the subject form I, not me. Also, my friends and I is the correct order and avoids unnecessary repetition.

× Me and I and my friends playing cricket in a playground near my hometown.

✓ My friends and I play cricket in a playground near my hometown.

This describes a regular hobby, so use the simple present tense play. The form playing needs an auxiliary verb such as are, but are playing is less suitable here because the student is describing a routine.

× Me and I and my friends playing cricket in a playground near my hometown and I and my friends playing cricket at around four o'clock.

✓ My friends and I play cricket in a playground near my hometown at around four o'clock.

The original sentence repeats the subject and verb phrase and joins ideas awkwardly. Use one clear subject and place the time expression at the end of the sentence.

× When I was a child I and my mum I and mum go to the park to morning work.

✓ When I was a child, my mum and I went to the park for a morning walk.

Use my mum and I when the pronouns are the subjects of the sentence. Me cannot be used as the subject, and the repeated phrase I and mum makes the sentence unclear.

× When I was a child I and my mum I and mum go to the park to morning work.

✓ When I was a child, my mum and I went to the park for a morning walk.

The time phrase when I was a child refers to the past, so the main verb must also be in the past tense. The past form of go is went.

× When I was a child I and my mum I and mum go to the park to morning work.

✓ When I was a child, my mum and I went to the park for a morning walk.

Use for before an activity or purpose: go to the park for a morning walk. The phrase to morning work is not the correct prepositional expression.

× Yes morning walk have since a child.

✓ Yes, I have had this hobby since childhood.

The original sentence is missing a subject and has an incorrect verb structure. A complete sentence needs the subject I and the present perfect structure have had to describe a hobby that began in the past and continues now.

× My mum have the same hobbies as you.

✓ My mum has the same hobby as I do.

Mum is a third-person singular subject, so use has, not have. The phrase as I do correctly refers to the student rather than the examiner.

× My mum have the same hobbies as you.

✓ My mum has the same hobby as I do.

The pronoun you incorrectly refers to the speaker's own hobby. Use I do because the speaker is comparing their hobby with their mother's hobby.

× Because when I was child me and my mom go to the park to morning work.

✓ Because when I was a child, my mum and I went to the park for a morning walk.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun child in the phrase a child. The sentence also needs a past-tense verb and the correct subject pronoun order.

× Because when I was child me and my mom go to the park to morning work.

✓ Because when I was a child, my mum and I went to the park for a morning walk.

The phrase when I was a child describes a past routine, so go should be changed to its past form went.

× Because when I was child me and my mom go to the park to morning work.

✓ Because when I was a child, my mum and I went to the park for a morning walk.

My mum and I is the correct subject form. The object pronoun me should not be used as part of the subject.

× Because it's improved my health both my mom and me.

✓ It improves both my mum's health and mine.

The sentence describes the general health benefit of the hobby, so use the simple present improves. The possessive forms my mum's health and mine clearly show whose health is being discussed.

× Because it's improved my health both my mom and me.

✓ It improves both my mum's health and mine.

The phrase both my mom and me is not correctly connected to the noun health. Use the possessive pronoun mine to avoid repeating my health and to show possession clearly.

× Yes, my mom Mom has yes my mum have the same hobbies as you because when I was child me and my mom go to the park to morning work because it's improved my health both my mom and me so this is the answer.

✓ Yes, my mum and I have the same hobby. When I was a child, we went to the park for a morning walk because it improved both our physical and mental health.

The original response contains repeated words, several clauses joined together without clear structure, and an unnecessary closing phrase. Divide the answer into two complete sentences and present the reason in a clear order.