Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have any hobbies?
Thí sinh
Yes I have a some hobby such as play the computer game, play the basketball and listening music. But I where would I play computer game?
Giám khảo
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
Thí sinh
For example, uh, I like play with family, uh, or listening to play the piano, but I became I like enjoy the world.
Giám khảo
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a hobby saying children I have a like reading book
Giám khảo
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
Thí sinh
Yes, my family lie reading book too.
Do you have any hobbies?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、简洁并直接回应问题。纠正语法(冠词、动词形式、介词),避免不相关的句子。按结构给出主题句,然后用一两句具体细节(什么时候做、频率或原因)。使用连接词让句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy playing computer games, playing basketball and listening to music. I usually play games in the evenings after work, go to the park to play basketball on weekends, and listen to music while commuting.
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且语法混乱。应直接陈述童年爱好,然后给出具体细节(谁、何时、为何喜欢)。避免填充词(uh)并保持句子清晰。使用连接词说明现在是否仍然喜欢或已改变。
Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child I enjoyed playing with my family and learning the piano. My parents often practiced with me at home, and I liked the piano because it felt relaxing. Now I don't play it as often, but I still enjoy listening to music.
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 句子不连贯且有语法错误。应先给出简短明确的主题句,然后补充具体细节(喜欢哪类书、多久读一次、为什么坚持)。保持句子在五句以内并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I've been reading books since I was a child. I especially like fiction and history books, and I read for about an hour every night. Reading helps me relax and learn new things, so I have kept this habit.
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答简短但有语法错误(lie→like)。应直接确认并提供具体比较或例子(谁、怎样一起做)。可以说共同活动和不同之处以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, my family also likes reading books. For example, my mother reads novels, my father prefers non-fiction, and sometimes we recommend interesting books to each other.
× Yes I have a some hobby such as play the computer game, play the basketball and listening music.
✓ Yes, I have some hobbies such as playing computer games, playing basketball, and listening to music.
错误类型:名词单复数和冠词使用。句中 'a some hobby' 同时使用不定冠词 'a' 和限定词 'some',且 hobby 应为复数以匹配列举的多项爱好。名词 'computer game' 和 'basketball' 在此处应使用复数或动名词短语;并且列表中各项应使用一致形式(动名词)。建议将爱好用复数并把动词用动名词形式:playing computer games, playing basketball, listening to music。
× But I where would I play computer game?
✓ But where would I play computer games?
错误类型:句子结构/疑问句语序错误。原句中 'I where would I' 语序混乱,重复主语且疑问词位置不正确。构成一般疑问句或特殊疑问句时,疑问词置于句首,随后用助动词与主语:Where would I play...? 同时 game 应为复数或习惯用复数。
× For example, uh, I like play with family, uh, or listening to play the piano, but I became I like enjoy the world.
✓ For example, I like playing with my family or playing the piano, and I became someone who enjoys the world.
错误类型:动词后跟 -ing 形式使用不当。动词 'like' 后应接动名词(playing),而不是原形 'play'。短语 'listening to play the piano' 结构错误,演奏钢琴应为 'playing the piano'。此外 'I became I like enjoy the world' 语法混乱,需改为 'I became someone who enjoys the world'(或更自然的表达)。建议:like 后用 -ing,保持从句结构清晰。
× Yes, I have a hobby saying children I have a like reading book
✓ Yes, I have had a hobby since childhood — I like reading books.
错误类型:代词和句子结构错误。原句 'saying children I have a like reading book' 词序混乱且代词、介词短语错误。应使用介词短语 'since childhood' 表示从童年开始,并将 'reading book' 改为复数 'reading books' 或用不定冠词 'reading a book' 视具体含义。建议使用固定表达 'I have had a hobby since childhood'。
× Yes, my family lie reading book too.
✓ Yes, my family like reading books too.
错误类型:动词形式与单复数错误。原句使用 'lie'(躺)错误,正确动词为 'like'(喜欢)。此外 'reading book' 应为复数 'reading books' 或 'reading books too',与主语 'my family'(集体名词)搭配时动词用复数 'like'(在口语中常见为 like)。建议检查动词拼写并把名词改为复数以匹配习惯表达。