Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 発音と語彙の選択に注意してください。“blouse the Internet”は不自然な表現で、おそらく“browse the Internet”と言いたかったはずです。また、発話が短く曖昧なので、トピック文の後に具体的な補足（どんな種類の腕時計が好きか、収集の頻度や理由）を一～二文で加えるとより良いです。リンク詞（for example, especially, because）を使って論理的に展開しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I collect wristwatches. I especially enjoy vintage mechanical watches because of their craftsmanship, and I often browse the Internet several times a week to look for rare models or good deals.

Gợi ý: 流暢さと一貫性を改善する必要があります。多くのためらい（uh）や語順の混乱があり、過去形の扱いも曖昧です。過去の習慣を話すので、過去形（liked, brought）を適切に使い、不要な繰り返しを避けて簡潔に表現しましょう。時を示す語（when I was a child, often）や理由（because）を付け加えると説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: Yes, I liked playing with Lego when I was a child. My father often brought me new Lego sets after his business trips, so I spent many afternoons building models and using my imagination.

Gợi ý: 時制と単語選択を正しく使う必要があります。“since childhood”には完了形が適切です（I have liked / I have played）。また不明確な単語（Kalate は聞き取りにくく、説明が必要）や多くのためらいが流れを阻害しています。まず明確なトピック文を作り、その後で期間や頻度、理由を付け加えましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I've been playing basketball and a game called 'Kalate' since I was a child. I have played basketball regularly since elementary school and I still practice with friends a few times a week.

Gợi ý: 文法と表現の自然さが必要です。“have the same hobbies with”は不自然で、“have the same hobbies as”が正しいです。また「all members love to go out for work」は意味が不明確で、意図する内容（家族は外出が好き／家族は仕事で外出する）を正確に表現しましょう。短く明瞭に答え、必要なら対比を示す一文を加えると良いです。

Ví dụ: No, I don't share the same hobbies as my family. For example, I prefer collecting watches and playing sports, while my family members usually enjoy going out for work-related activities or social gatherings.

× Yeah, I'm really into wristwatches. I always blouse the Internet to find them.

✓ Yeah, I'm really into wristwatches. I always browse the Internet to find them.

The verb 'blouse' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'browse' meaning to look through websites. This is a vocabulary/verb choice error affecting present tense meaning. Suggestion: use 'browse' for searching the web or 'search' if emphasising active searching.

× Yeah, I love playing with the small tools such as Lego. My father always, uh, brought me, uh, it brought me back with, uh, Lego, uh, always after his, uh, job trip.

✓ Yeah, I loved playing with small toys such as Lego. My father always brought me back Lego after his business trips.

Mixed tense and awkward phrasing: 'love' should be 'loved' to match past context. 'Small tools' is incorrect; 'small toys' fits childhood play. The phrase 'brought me, it brought me back with, Lego' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'brought me back Lego' or 'brought Lego back for me.' Also plural 'trip' should be 'trips' to indicate repeated events. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and use clear noun phrases ('small toys', 'business trips').

× Well, I like to play Kalate and basketball since I was, uh, a small kid, umm, I started, uh, them when I was, uh, elementary school student.

✓ Well, I have liked playing karate and basketball since I was a small kid; I started them when I was an elementary school student.

Tense inconsistency: 'like' with 'since' requires present perfect 'have liked' to show continuity from past to present. 'Kalate' appears to be a misspelling of 'karate'. The clause 'when I was elementary school student' lacks an article: use 'an elementary school student.' Suggestion: use present perfect with 'since' and correct spelling and articles.

× No, I I don't have the same hobbies with my family members. But yeah, all all, all members love to go out for work.

✓ No, I don't have the same hobbies as my family members. But yes, all my family members like to go out for work.

Use 'same hobbies as' not 'with'; 'as' is the correct preposition for comparison. Repetition 'I I' and 'all all, all' are disfluencies; remove duplicates. 'All members' is vague; 'all my family members' is clearer. 'Love to go out for work' is acceptable but 'like to go out for work' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'as' for comparisons and clean up repetitions; specify 'my family members.'