Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ: tránh lặp từ và sai thì; trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó đưa ra chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết rõ ràng. Sử dụng giới từ và động từ phù hợp (e.g., “it brings”, “people who play football”). Giảm độ dài câu, tối đa 3-4 câu, và dùng từ vựng phù hợp như “physical fitness”, “mental well-being”, “stamina”, “muscle strength”.

Ví dụ: I enjoy playing football because it brings many physical and mental benefits. For example, playing regularly improves stamina and muscle strength, and it also reduces stress. Moreover, team play helps me develop communication and teamwork skills.

Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi thì và dùng cấu trúc hợp lý: dùng quá khứ khi nói về quá khứ (“I had an ambition”), tránh dùng cụm từ lặp và sai (“at this time”). Nói rõ hơn về việc tại sao thích, nêu một hành động cụ thể bạn đã làm khi nhỏ, và kế hoạch thực tế cho tương lai. Giữ 2-3 câu ngắn gọn, dùng liên từ như “because” và “so”.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I wanted to become a chef because I loved experimenting with recipes. I often helped my parents cook simple dishes, which sparked my interest. Although I am busy now, I plan to take a cooking course next year to improve my skills.

Gợi ý: Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (thì và cấu trúc) và lặp từ; bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng về sở thích duy trì từ nhỏ. Nên cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ món ăn bạn thường nấu) và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý (e.g., “because”, “so”, “which”). Giữ dưới 4 câu, dùng từ vựng phù hợp như “prepare meals”, “family feedback”, “motivation”, “improve my cooking skills”.

Ví dụ: Yes, cooking has been my hobby since childhood because I enjoyed preparing meals for my family. I used to make simple dishes like omelettes and fried rice, and my family’s positive feedback motivated me to keep learning. As a result, I still cook whenever I have time to practice new recipes.

Gợi ý: Sửa cấu trúc và ngữ pháp: dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn (“Yes, we all enjoy playing badminton.”). Tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện ý chưa kết thúc. Nâng cao tính cụ thể bằng cách nêu tần suất chơi, nơi chơi, và lý do rõ ràng (e.g., “convenient equipment”, “good exercise”, “social activity”). Sử dụng liên từ để làm mạch văn trôi chảy.

Ví dụ: Yes, my family and I all enjoy playing badminton because it is convenient and requires little equipment. We usually play together on weekends at the local court, which is great exercise and a fun way to spend time together.

× To be honest, I really love playing football because it's bring a lot of benefits to both mental and physical.

✓ To be honest, I really love playing football because it brings a lot of benefits to both mental and physical health.

'bring' is incorrect because after the subject 'it' and in present simple we need third person singular verb form 'brings'. Also 'mental and physical' should be completed as 'mental and physical health' for clarity.

× For example, when people playing football, they can win a lot of benefit from your health to enhance your stamina and your muscle.

✓ For example, when people play football, they can gain many benefits for their health, enhancing their stamina and muscles.

Use base verb 'play' after 'when' to form a correct clause. 'win a lot of benefit' is unidiomatic; use 'gain many benefits'. Pronouns must agree: change 'your' to 'their'. Use plural 'muscles' and 'enhancing' to link actions.

× To be honest, when I was a kid, I have ambition to become a chef because at this time I really love cooking, but now I don't have a lot of time to do this dream, so in the future, I will try my best to enroll a cooking cost to become a chef.

✓ To be honest, when I was a kid, I had an ambition to become a chef because at that time I really loved cooking, but now I don't have much time to pursue this dream, so in the future I will try my best to enroll in a cooking course to become a chef.

Tense consistency: when referring to childhood use past tense 'had' and 'loved'. 'at this time' should be 'at that time'. 'do this dream' is incorrect; use 'pursue this dream'. 'enroll a cooking cost' should be 'enroll in a cooking course'.

× As I said before, I want to become a chef when I were a kid because I really love to preparing for meals by myself and I want to get a good evaluation from my from my member in family to motivate and enhance my cooking skill.

✓ As I said before, I wanted to become a chef when I was a kid because I really loved preparing meals by myself, and I wanted to get positive feedback from my family members to motivate me and improve my cooking skills.

Use past tense 'wanted' and 'was' for childhood. 'love to preparing' is incorrect; use 'loved preparing' or 'love preparing'. Remove duplicate 'from my'. 'member in family' should be 'family members'. 'get a good evaluation' is better as 'get positive feedback'. 'enhance my cooking skill' should be 'improve my cooking skills' and add 'me' after 'motivate'.

× Definitely yes. My family have a same hobbies is playing badminton because they found it's very convenient and really easy to play with with not sophisticated equipment and we can play very fast and.

✓ Definitely yes. My family has the same hobby: playing badminton, because they find it very convenient and really easy to play with no sophisticated equipment, and we can play quickly.

Subject-verb agreement: 'family' as a singular collective noun takes 'has'. 'a same hobbies' is incorrect; use 'the same hobby'. 'found' should be present 'find' to match general statement. Remove duplicate 'with' and use 'no sophisticated equipment'. 'play very fast and.' was incomplete; replace with 'play quickly'.