Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, dùng câu chủ đề và mở rộng thêm thông tin cụ thể (thể loại nhạc, tần suất, lý do). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (use plural/singular appropriately) và giữ dưới 5 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy listening to music. I usually listen to pop and acoustic songs every day while commuting. Music helps me relax and concentrate on my work. I often discover new artists through playlists or friends' recommendations.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa ngữ pháp (thì quá khứ), dùng từ chính xác (likely meant "dolls" not "doors"), và cấu trúc rõ ràng: câu chủ đề + chi tiết cụ thể (bao gồm tần suất, cảm xúc). Tránh tiếng ồn 'umm' và giữ trong 3-4 câu.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I really liked playing with dolls. I often asked my father to buy new dolls and accessories for me. Playing with dolls helped me imagine different stories and improve my creativity.

Gợi ý: Cần dùng thì phù hợp (past/simple present perfect), sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ. Nêu rõ lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ để liên kết ý. Giữ tối đa 4 câu, tránh lặp từ và nói không rõ ràng như "rare reminiscing".

Ví dụ: Yes, I've enjoyed watching cartoons since I was a child. I still watch them sometimes because they remind me of happy childhood memories. Watching cartoons relaxes me and brings back a sense of nostalgia.

Gợi ý: Cần nói rõ hơn và đúng ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement, tense). Nêu chi tiết về cách các thành viên chia sẻ sở thích (thể loại, hoạt động chung) và sửa lỗi về thì ("took a bath" -> "take a bath"). Giữ câu ngắn, mạch lạc và dùng liên từ khi cần.

Ví dụ: Yes, my older brother and I share a hobby: listening to music. We often listen to music together in the evenings, sometimes while taking a shower or relaxing. Sharing playlists helps us discover new songs and bond.

× When I was a child, I really like playing doors.

✓ When I was a child, I really liked playing with dolls.

The main verb should be past tense to match 'When I was a child' (use 'liked' not 'like'). 'playing doors' is incorrect collocation; the correct phrase is 'playing with dolls'. Use plural 'dolls' for toys in general.'

× Umm, I often ask my father to buy a doll.

✓ Umm, I often asked my father to buy me a doll.

The time frame is past (childhood), so the verb should be past tense 'asked' rather than 'ask'. Also add object 'me' after 'buy' or change to 'buy me a doll' to show who received the doll.'

× Yes I do, when I was a child I like watching cartoon and now I'm still like watching them because when I watching when I watch the cartoon I rare reminiscing about my childhood.

✓ Yes I do, when I was a child I liked watching cartoons and now I still like watching them, because when I watch cartoons I often reminisce about my childhood.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'when I was a child' requires past 'liked' not 'like'. 'cartoon' should be plural 'cartoons' when speaking generally. 'now I'm still like' should be 'now I still like'. Remove duplicate phrases 'when I watching when I watch'. Use present simple 'watch' for general present action. 'rare reminiscing' is wrong; use 'often reminisce' (verb form) to express frequency.'

× Yes I do, I have the hobbies that it seem with my older brother it is a listen to music.

✓ Yes I do, I have the same hobby as my older brother; it is listening to music.

The original mixes pronouns and demonstratives incorrectly ('that it seem with'). Use 'the same hobby as' to compare correctly. Use noun form 'listening to music' rather than 'a listen to music'. Remove redundant pronouns.'

× We always listen to music when we took a bath.

✓ We always listened to music when we took a bath.

If referring to a habitual past action (with 'when we took a bath'), use past habitual 'listened' instead of present 'listen'. Ensure tense consistency across the clause.'