Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples with brief reasons. Avoid phrases like "I do have" and unnecessary clauses. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, "for instance" or "and").

Ví dụ: Yes, I have several hobbies. For instance, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax, and I also like playing the piano since it improves my concentration.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear direct statement about your childhood hobbies, use past tense consistently, and give one specific detail about why you enjoyed an activity. Avoid vague phrases like "very funny" and use linking words such as "for example" or "also".

Ví dụ: Yes, I had many hobbies as a child. For example, I loved drawing because it allowed me to express my imagination, and I also enjoyed singing in school plays.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and a clearer structure: state the hobby, mention how long you've done it, and give a specific reason. Avoid repetition like "really" and fix verb and article errors. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" properly.

Ví dụ: Yes. I have played the piano since I was a child, so it has lasted many years. I continue because practicing piano relaxes me and gives a sense of achievement.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and fluently: say whether you share hobbies, then give a clear example of an activity you sometimes do together. Correct grammar (e.g., "wants to watch") and combine short fragments into one coherent sentence.

Ví dụ: Not usually; my family and I have different interests. However, sometimes I ask my brother if he wants to watch a movie with me, and we occasionally go to the cinema together.

× I do have many hobbies, for example reading, watching movies or playing the piano, but actually I often change my mind.

✓ I have many hobbies, for example reading, watching movies, and playing the piano, but I often change my mind.

Using 'do' for emphasis is possible but unnecessary here; the simple present 'I have' is more natural. Add 'and' in the list for correct coordination and use commas for clarity. Remove 'actually' which is redundant. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual states and include conjunctions in lists.

× Oh, I really had a lot of hobbies in my childhood. For example, I love drawing, designing something or singing, so that is very funny.

✓ Oh, I had a lot of hobbies in my childhood. For example, I loved drawing, designing things, and singing; that was very fun.

Use past tense consistently when referring to childhood ('had' and 'loved'). 'Designing something' is awkward; use 'designing things' or 'designing'. 'So that is very funny' mixes tenses and uses 'funny' incorrectly; 'that was very fun' or 'I found that very enjoyable' fits better. Also add 'and' in lists and match tense.

× Yes, I think playing the piano is my hobbies really last a long time because I really love to enjoy the feeling when I sitting on the chair.

✓ Yes, I think playing the piano is my hobby that has really lasted a long time because I really enjoy the feeling when I sit on the bench.

Mismatch: 'is my hobbies' mixes singular and plural; use 'is my hobby'. Use present perfect 'has lasted' to indicate duration up to now. 'Love to enjoy' is redundant; use 'really enjoy'. 'When I sitting' needs 'when I sit' (present tense). 'Chair' for piano is better as 'bench' or 'keyboard bench'. Suggestions: ensure subject and complement agree in number, use appropriate tense for duration, and correct verb forms after 'when'.

× Actually I don't think so, but sometimes I will try to ask my brother if he want to. Watch the movie with me.

✓ Actually I don't think so, but sometimes I try to ask my brother if he wants to watch a movie with me.

Problems: 'will try to ask' is acceptable but 'sometimes I try to ask' sounds more natural for habitual actions. 'If he want to' has incorrect verb form; should be 'if he wants to' (third person singular). Sentence fragment 'Watch the movie with me.' must be combined into main sentence. Use 'a movie' for natural count noun use. Suggestions: use correct third-person singular verb form and avoid sentence fragments by keeping clauses together.