Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và chính xác hơn; tránh lặp từ và cụm từ nói đệm như “you know”. Bổ sung liên kết logic khi mở rộng ý, và dùng từ số nhiều/số ít chính xác (video games). Giữ tối đa 5 câu, dùng từ vựng phù hợp như “relax”, “escape”, “immersive”, “play different characters”.

Ví dụ: Yes, my main hobby is playing video games. I enjoy them because they are immersive and help me relax after a busy day. For example, role-playing games let me control different characters and explore new worlds. I usually play for an hour or two in the evenings, which helps me unwind.

Gợi ý: Cần hoàn thành câu thay vì bỏ dở; dùng ngữ pháp đúng (played, went swimming, played badminton). Tránh lặp “with my friends” nhiều lần bằng cách gộp thông tin và thêm liên từ để mạch lạc. Nên nêu một câu chủ đề rồi hỗ trợ bằng chi tiết cụ thể và kết luận ngắn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had many hobbies as a child. I often played football with my father, went swimming with friends and played badminton at the local club. These activities kept me active, but since I grew up I have less free time for sports.

Gợi ý: Cần dùng cấu trúc chính xác (e.g., "the hobby I've had since childhood is playing video games"). Tránh lỗi từ như “displaying”. Chú ý thì động từ (started playing, have kept playing). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể (tựa game, hoạt động trong game) và giữ câu ngắn gọn, không quá 5 câu.

Ví dụ: The hobby I've had since childhood is playing video games. I started playing when I was three or four and have continued ever since. For instance, I enjoy narrative adventure games because they let me relax and forget about work after a long day.

Gợi ý: Cần diễn đạt trôi chảy và chính xác hơn: dùng số nhiều đúng (family members), tránh lặp “interested in” nhiều lần; sửa “playing in volleyball” thành “playing volleyball”. Bổ sung so sánh ngắn gọn và lý do nếu có để làm phong phú nội dung.

Ví dụ: No, my hobbies are different from my family members'. For example, my sister enjoys running and my father plays volleyball regularly. I prefer video games because they suit my lifestyle and help me relax indoors.

× The only hobby I have is playing video game.

✓ The only hobby I have is playing video games.

Use plural 'video games' because we refer to games in general (countable noun) and 'playing video games' is the idiomatic phrase.

× I can play video game all day and I think it's really interesting because you know, it helps me to escape all the hustle and bustle of life and I can play many character in the game.

✓ I can play video games all day and I think they're really interesting because, you know, they help me escape all the hustle and bustle of life and I can play many characters in the game.

Use plural 'video games' and plural pronouns 'they/them' to agree with plural noun; 'many characters' needs plural 'characters'. Also use 'help me escape' (no 'to') for natural phrasing.

× for example playing football with my father, go swimming with my friends and also by playing badminton with my friends.

✓ for example, playing football with my father, going swimming with my friends, and also playing badminton with my friends.

Coordinate verbs must share the same form: use gerunds ('playing', 'going') consistently. Remove the preposition 'by' before 'playing' because it's unnecessary in the list.

× But I think now when I grow up I don't have much time so I.

✓ But I think now that I have grown up, I don't have much time, so I don't play as much.

Sentence was incomplete and tense/form mismatched. Use present perfect 'have grown up' or simple 'am grown up' is incorrect—'have grown up' fits context. Finish the clause with what the speaker doesn't do: 'don't play as much'.

× I do have a hobby I had since childhood displaying video game.

✓ I do have a hobby I have had since childhood: playing video games.

Use present perfect 'have had' for continuing state from childhood to present; 'playing' is the gerund form (not 'displaying'); 'video games' should be plural and a colon or comma helps clarity.

× I started to play video game when I was just three or four years old and I keep playing it until now.

✓ I started playing video games when I was just three or four years old, and I have kept playing them until now.

After 'started' use gerund 'playing' or 'started to play' both possible; maintain plural 'video games' and use present perfect 'have kept' to indicate action continuing to present; 'them' refers back to 'video games'.

× after the long working hour.

✓ after long working hours.

Use plural 'hours' and omit 'the' for general statement: 'after long working hours' or 'after a long working day'.

× Well, I think I have quite different hobbies compared to the other member in my family.

✓ Well, I think I have quite different hobbies compared to the other members of my family.

Use plural 'members' because 'other members' refers to more than one person; 'of my family' is more natural than 'in my family'.

× For example, my sister, she's really interested in running and my father is really interested in playing in volleyball, but I just like playing video games.

✓ For example, my sister is really interested in running, and my father is really interested in playing volleyball, but I just like playing video games.

Avoid redundant pronoun 'she's' after naming the subject; remove unnecessary preposition 'in' before 'volleyball'—'playing volleyball' is correct; maintain parallel structure and plural 'video games'.