Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence naming your hobbies, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid irrelevant or unclear words (e.g., 'Forbes') and correct verb forms and articles.

Ví dụ: I have a few hobbies. I enjoy photographing airplanes at the airport, where I sometimes explore the shops and restaurants nearby while I wait for good photo opportunities. I also like drawing detailed sketches of aircraft because I am interested in mechanical design.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and a clear topic sentence about past habits. Provide specific details and link them with words like 'when' or 'so'. Avoid repetition and use varied vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Yes, as a child I loved riding my bicycle around my neighborhood. Because I had no other way to travel quickly, I would cycle to explore the area around my school with friends, and those rides were very exciting and fun.

Gợi ý: Give a clear statement that you have continued the hobby, use present perfect to show continuity, and provide specific details about how you learned and improved. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been drawing since I was a child. My father is talented at drawing, so he taught me many techniques and I have continued practicing to improve my skills over the years.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer and organize details logically. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Mention specific instruments and future plans with linking words like 'and' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: Yes. My brother plays the piano and I play the viola, which is a string instrument. We practice regularly, and in the future we hope to perform together for our family.

× When I have a time, I usually taking a pictures of airplanes and working around the airport to find some goods and shops or restaurant and other hobby is just uh, just drawing the pictures of airplanes.

✓ When I have time, I usually take pictures of airplanes and walk around the airport to find shops, restaurants, and other things; another hobby is drawing pictures of airplanes.

Errors: unnecessary article 'a' with 'time' and plural 'pictures' with 'a', incorrect verb forms ('taking' should be 'take'; 'working around' is wrong in this context so use 'walk around' to match meaning), missing plurals and conjunctions, and awkward phrasing. Suggestion: remove 'a' before 'time', use base verb 'take' for habitual action, use 'walk around' or 'go around' for moving around an area, pluralize 'restaurant' to 'restaurants' and rephrase the latter clause for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Whenever child I like driving my bicycle around my house.

✓ When I was a child, I liked riding my bicycle around my house.

Errors: 'Whenever child' is incorrect — use 'When I was a child'. 'Like' should be past tense 'liked' to match past timeframe. 'Driving' is incorrect for bicycles; use 'riding'. Suggestion: use correct time phrase 'When I was a child', match verb tense to past, and use appropriate verb for bicycle. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Actually I have no choice to move faster, so I just riding my bicycle to exploring around my school and with my friends.

✓ Actually I had no way to move faster, so I just rode my bicycle to explore around my school with my friends.

Errors: tense mismatch — 'have' should be past 'had' to match context. 'Riding' should be past 'rode' for completed past action. 'To exploring' is incorrect infinitive form; use 'to explore' or simply 'explored'. Also 'no choice to move faster' is awkward; 'no way to move faster' is clearer. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently, use correct past verb forms, and use 'to' + base verb when needed. Grammar_problem_type_id:5

× It was the most interesting and the most fun fun experience for me.

✓ It was the most interesting and the most fun experience for me.

Errors: duplication of 'fun'. Repetition is redundant. Suggestion: remove the extra word and consider using either 'most interesting' or 'most fun' or combine with 'and' as corrected. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes. Now I having, I have been, uh, drawing the pictures.

✓ Yes. Now I have been drawing pictures.

Errors: 'Now I having' is ungrammatical; use present perfect continuous 'I have been drawing' to express an ongoing action that started in the past. Also remove unnecessary article before 'pictures'. Suggestion: use 'I have been drawing pictures' for current ongoing hobby. Grammar problem type ID:6

× It's actually my father has a talent to draw that and I also have it.

✓ Actually my father has a talent for drawing, and I have it too.

Errors: awkward placement of 'It's' and incorrect preposition 'to draw that'. Use 'talent for drawing'. Move 'actually' and 'too' to natural positions. Suggestion: use 'talent for drawing' and 'I have it too.' Grammar problem type ID:17

× So I start, uh, drawing when I was a child and learn from my father to improve that.

✓ So I started drawing when I was a child and learned from my father to improve.

Errors: verb tense inconsistency — 'start' and 'learn' should be past 'started' and 'learned' to match 'when I was a child'. 'To improve that' is awkward; 'to improve' suffices. Suggestion: keep verbs in past tense for past events and simplify the phrase. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes, actually my brother played the piano and also I also played the instrument which is Viola or the string, string, strings and we practice more and in future I want to play together to show to my family.

✓ Yes, actually my brother plays the piano and I also play a string instrument, the viola, and we practice a lot. In the future I want us to play together to show our family.

Errors: tense inconsistency — 'played' should be present 'plays' if talking about current hobbies. Repetition 'also I also' and 'string, string, strings' are redundant. 'Played' vs 'practice' tense mismatch; use present simple for habitual actions: 'play' and 'practice'. 'In future' should be 'in the future' and 'show to my family' should be 'show our family' or 'perform for my family'. Suggestion: use consistent present tense for current hobbies, remove repetitions, use 'viola' as common noun, and correct prepositional phrases. Grammar problem type ID:12