Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have any hobbies?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like play games and I like play basketball and football. I like play tennis and play ping pong. But this is a very like is the basketball is a good is a very OK, I like basketball.
Giám khảo
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Ha the my shoulder is very very like play games. I like zhuo MI Chan and. Play football. Yes it is. It's my child, yes.
Giám khảo
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
Thí sinh
Yes. My says childhood hold is play basketball. My basketball is very good. I like basketball. I want to size children hold. I like basketball. Yes, no problem.
Giám khảo
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
Thí sinh
Yes, my favorites is a funny it is good, but it's no father and no grandma and grandpa. I want it is a play games.
Do you have any hobbies?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且结构清晰。先用一句概括性主题句直接回答(例如:I enjoy several sports and games),然后用1–2句具体说明最喜欢的爱好并给出原因或频率。注意语法(动词要用ing或不定式的正确形式),避免重复和语无伦次。可以使用连接词(for example, especially, because)使表达连贯。注意发音清晰,basketball等词要正确发音。
Ví dụ: I enjoy playing several sports and video games. For example, I often play basketball and football at the park with friends, and I also like tennis and table tennis. I especially enjoy basketball because it helps me stay fit and socialize.
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答应直接且具体,避免含糊和词汇错误。先用一句话回答过去是否有爱好(I did / I didn’t),接着用1–2句说明具体爱好和什么时候、如何做的。避免中英文夹杂或不明词汇。用简单连词(when, often, because)连接信息。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often played computer games and football with my friends. I usually played football every weekend at the school playground.
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 需要更清晰地表达持续性的爱好关系。先明确回答(Yes, I have/have had one since childhood),然后具体说明是什么爱好、从什么时候开始、现在是否仍在做以及原因。保持句子简短明了,使用正确时态(present perfect)。避免重复相同短句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have had a hobby since childhood. I have been playing basketball since I was seven, and I still play twice a week because I enjoy the exercise and teamwork.
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答要明确家庭成员之间的相似或不同。先给出总体回答(Yes/No),然后举例说明哪些家庭成员喜欢相同或不同的爱好,并说明频率或原因。避免模糊或矛盾的表述,注意句子语法和词序。
Ví dụ: Some of my family members share my hobbies. For example, my sister also likes playing basketball and video games, but my parents prefer quieter activities like reading. We sometimes play games together on weekends.
× Yes, I like play games and I like play basketball and football.
✓ Yes, I like playing games and I like playing basketball and football.
动词like后面跟动名词(V-ing)。原句中使用不定式(play)是不符合惯用结构。建议将play改为playing。
× I like play tennis and play ping pong.
✓ I like playing tennis and playing ping pong.
同样,like后应接动名词形式playing。把play改为playing以符合语法。
× But this is a very like is the basketball is a good is a very OK, I like basketball.
✓ But I really like basketball. Basketball is very good and I like it a lot.
原句结构混乱,重复和冗余词汇导致无法理解。需重组句子,使用正确主谓结构并删除多余成分,明确表达“我很喜欢篮球”。
× Ha the my shoulder is very very like play games.
✓ When I was a child I really liked playing games.
原句时态和词序错误,且有无意义词汇(Ha, shoulder)。根据问及童年爱好,应使用过去时liked并用playing。建议删除无关词并改为清晰过去时表达。
× I like zhuo MI Chan and. Play football.
✓ I liked playing table tennis and played football.
原句含混且有拼写/词语错误(zhuo MI Chan应为table tennis或ping pong)。需要用过去时表述童年爱好,调整为连贯句子。
× Yes it is. It's my child, yes.
✓ Yes, it was my hobby when I was a child.
问的是过去的爱好,应使用过去时。原句使用现在时并且表述不完整,需改为完整的过去时句子。
× Yes. My says childhood hold is play basketball.
✓ Yes. Since childhood I have played basketball.
原句语序和用词不当(says, hold)。问的是从小就有的爱好,常用现在完成时表述持续到现在:have played。
× My basketball is very good.
✓ I am very good at basketball.
原句把basketball(名词)当作人的形容词使用,应改为“I am good at basketball”来表达擅长某项运动。
× I want to size children hold.
✓ I have liked basketball since I was a child.
原句含混且有无意义词(size children hold)。应使用标准表达“从小就喜欢篮球”,常用现在完成时或过去时视上下文。
× I like basketball. Yes, no problem.
✓ I like basketball. Yes, no problem.
该句语法本身无动名词错误,保留原句。此处作为确认句,无需修改。
× Yes, my favorites is a funny it is good, but it's no father and no grandma and grandpa.
✓ Yes, my favourite hobby is playing games. My father and my grandparents don't share this hobby.
原句表达混乱,词序与词性错误(favorites is a funny)。需要分成两句:说明最喜欢的爱好,并说明家人是否有相同爱好,使用正确主谓结构和否定形式。
× I want it is a play games.
✓ I want to play games.
原句中出现多余代词和错误结构(I want it is a play games)。正确表达愿望应为'I want to play games',使用不定式to play。