Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence naming your main hobbies, then give one brief detail or reason for one of them. Avoid listing many items without structure and limit to 1–3 sentences. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'I have many hobbies' not 'so many') and articles where needed.

Ví dụ: I have several hobbies, including cooking, singing and watching films. I especially enjoy cooking because it helps me relax and I like trying new recipes on weekends.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, clarity and relevance. Begin with a clear past-tense statement about what you enjoyed. Explain briefly what you did and why. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'I'd like to have my parents... doing household chores.' Keep to 1–2 sentences and use past tense consistently.

Ví dụ: Yes. As a child I enjoyed helping my parents and grandmother with simple household chores like washing dishes and sweeping, and after that I always had time to play with my friends.

Gợi ý: Use consistent tense and a clear structure: topic sentence then specific detail. Avoid fillers ('umm') and awkward tense shifts ('I will help' should be 'I would help' or 'I used to help'). Be specific about the hobby and mention how it continued into adulthood if relevant.

Ví dụ: Yes. Since childhood I have enjoyed cooking; I used to wake up early to help my parents prepare breakfast because I loved watching them cook, and that interest eventually led me to try new recipes on my own.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with correct grammar and add a supporting detail. Use subject-verb agreement ('my mother and father like') and give a brief explanation or example of shared activities to make the response more informative.

Ví dụ: Yes. Both my parents like cooking, and we often cook family dinners together on weekends, which is something I really enjoy and has strengthened our bond.

× Yes, when I was a child, I'd like to have my parents, my grandmother doing household chores and after that I'll play.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I liked to have my parents and my grandmother do household chores, and after that I would play.

The sentence mixes present and future forms with past meaning. 'I'd like' (would like) and 'I'll' (I will) are inappropriate for past habitual actions. Use simple past 'liked' for past preference and 'would' for habitual past actions. Also use base verb 'do' after 'have' when meaning 'cause someone to do' is intended; if meaning 'watch them doing', use 'watch' + -ing. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and correct verb forms for clarity.

× Yes, I remember when I was a child when I woke up in the morning. I will help my parents umm doing household course like cooking because I love watching them cook.

✓ Yes, I remember that when I was a child and woke up in the morning, I would help my parents with household chores like cooking because I loved watching them cook.

The original uses 'I will help' (future) but describes past memories, so use past habitual 'would help' or simple past. 'Doing household course' is incorrect: 'household chores' is the correct noun phrase. 'I love watching them cook' should match past context, so 'I loved watching them cook.' Also remove filler 'umm' and fix sentence connectors for fluency.

× Yes, my mother and my father likes to cook so.

✓ Yes, my mother and my father like to cook too.

The subject 'my mother and my father' is plural, so the verb should be 'like' not 'likes'. 'So' at the end is informal and unclear; use 'too' or 'as well' to indicate similarity. Ensure verb agrees with plural subject.