Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use correct tense and articles. Include one or two specific details about frequency and why you enjoy them, connected with linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have two main hobbies: playing badminton and playing the guitar. I usually play badminton twice a week and practise guitar every Sunday because both activities help me relax and stay fit. For example, badminton improves my stamina, while playing the guitar calms me after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct response about childhood hobbies, use past tense, reduce filler words, and give specific examples of where and how often you played. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often played badminton with my dad when I was a child. We usually played in the local stadium or in our backyard, and I remember practising there every weekend because my dad wanted me to improve my technique.

Gợi ý: Answer directly using present perfect or present simple to show continuity, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), and give a brief reason or effect of keeping the hobby. Limit to three sentences and use linking words like "so" or "because."

Ví dụ: Yes, I have continued two hobbies from childhood: badminton and playing the guitar. I still play them because they help me stay healthy and relieve stress after work. As a result, they remain an important part of my weekly routine.

Gợi ý: Respond clearly about which family members share hobbies, use correct grammar, and give a specific example of how they participate together. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid fillers.

Ví dụ: Yes, my family and I share the same hobbies, especially badminton and playing the guitar. For example, my dad taught me how to play badminton and we often practise together on weekends, which is a great way for us to bond.

× Yes, I have a happy life like badminton and play guitar.

✓ Yes, I have hobbies like playing badminton and playing the guitar.

The original uses 'a happy life like badminton and play guitar' which is ungrammatical. This is a quantifier/word choice and sentence structure issue: 'hobbies' (plural) fits better than 'a happy life', and activities should use gerunds ('playing'). Also include the article 'the' before 'guitar' in English when referring to an instrument played generally. Suggestion: use 'hobbies' and gerunds for activities.

× I usually play guitar and badminton in weekend, especially Sunday.

✓ I usually play the guitar and badminton on weekends, especially on Sundays.

Use of prepositions is incorrect: 'in weekend' should be 'on weekends' (plural) and specify days with 'on Sunday' or 'on Sundays'. Also use 'the guitar' for playing instruments and plural 'weekends' is natural for habitual action. Suggestion: use 'on' for days and 'on weekends' for general routine.

× I feel it. I feel it very comfortable and relax.

✓ It makes me feel very comfortable and relaxed.

Adjective/adverb forms are wrong. 'I feel it very comfortable and relax' is unnatural. The correct construction is 'It makes me feel comfortable' or 'I feel very comfortable and relaxed.' Use 'relaxed' (adjective) not 'relax' (verb). Suggestion: use 'feel' with adjectives or passive 'made me feel' constructions.

× Just when I will try, I often play badminton with my dad.

✓ When I was young, I often played badminton with my dad.

Tense and time expression are incorrect: 'Just when I will try' is ungrammatical and mixes future modal with past habit. The question asked about childhood, so use past tense 'was' and 'played' for repeated past actions. Suggestion: use 'When I was a child' or 'When I was young' and past simple for habitual past actions.

× We, we are uh, with it.

✓ We used to play together.

Original is fragmented and unclear. It lacks a clear verb and proper structure. 'We used to play together' conveys habitual past action with structure appropriate for childhood hobbies. Suggestion: use 'used to' for past habits.

× Uh, play badminton in stadium or uh, in my backyard house.

✓ We played badminton in the stadium or in my backyard.

Sentence fragment missing subject and proper article usage: 'stadium' needs an article 'the stadium' or 'a stadium' depending on context; 'backyard house' is incorrect — use 'backyard'. Use past tense 'played' for childhood activities. Suggestion: include subject and past tense verb.

× Yes, I have hobby uh, when I adult I still has same hobby like childhood like uh play badminton or play guitar.

✓ Yes, I have had this hobby since childhood; when I became an adult I still had the same hobbies, like playing badminton and playing the guitar.

Multiple article, verb agreement, and tense problems: 'have hobby' needs an article or plural 'have a hobby' or 'have hobbies'; 'when I adult' should be 'when I became an adult'; 'I still has' is subject-verb agreement error (should be 'had' for past or 'have' for present) and tense must match 'since childhood' (present perfect 'have had' for continuity). Also use gerunds for activities and 'the guitar' with article. Suggestion: use 'have had this hobby since childhood' for ongoing hobbies, or 'I still have the same hobbies' for present continuity.

× Do you have the same hobbies as your family members? Oh my family have that like uh same hobby.

✓ Oh, my family has the same hobbies.

'My family have' is incorrect in American English where 'family' is a singular collective noun requiring 'has'; additionally 'that like uh same hobby' is awkward. Use 'has the same hobbies' or 'have the same hobbies' depending on dialect; ensure subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use 'my family has' (US) or 'my family have' (UK) consistently and plural 'hobbies'.

× Me we often play badminton and play guitar.

✓ We often play badminton and play the guitar.

Starting with 'Me we' is ungrammatical; subject should be 'we'. Also use 'the guitar' and parallel structure 'play X and play Y' can be simplified to 'play badminton and the guitar.' Suggestion: begin sentences with correct subject and maintain parallel verb forms.

× So I love my dad because he teach me play badminton and guitar.

✓ So I love my dad because he taught me how to play badminton and the guitar.

Pronoun/verb form and tense errors: 'teach' should be past 'taught' for past action; 'me play' needs 'me how to play' or 'to play' for correct object and infinitive; include 'the' before 'guitar.' Suggestion: use past tense for past teaching and 'teach someone how to do something' or 'teach someone to do something.'