Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Speak directly and clearly with correct grammar and concise sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I do), name 1–2 hobbies, and give one short reason or detail. Avoid repetitions and filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy baking and watching films in my free time because baking helps me relax and watching films inspires me with new ideas. For example, last weekend I tried a new cake recipe and then watched a documentary about cooking.

Gợi ý: Use past tense and be specific. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, list one or two childhood hobbies, and give a brief example or reason. Correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘play with marbles’ instead of ‘playing Pearl’).

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child, I liked playing marbles and drawing pictures. For example, I often spent afternoons drawing animals and playing marbles with my friends in the park.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use correct tense and phrasing. Say whether you have a lifelong hobby, then explain changes briefly using linking words (However, now…). Avoid double negatives and awkward constructions like ‘I don't to be honest’.

Ví dụ: Not really. I didn't keep a single hobby from childhood. However, I started enjoying drawing more recently because it helps me relax after a busy day.

Gợi ý: Be clear about similarity/difference and give concise supporting detail. Start with a direct sentence (No, my hobbies differ), then explain one reason and give an example. Use correct grammar (e.g., ‘my family members’ and ‘sometimes’).

Ví dụ: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. For instance, my mother is not good at cooking, so I often cook meals for the family and sometimes make desserts like sweet pastries.

× Yet I have I have many things that I really love to doing in my free times and but.

✓ I have many things that I really love to do in my free time.

The original sentence has duplicated words, incorrect connectors, wrong verb form 'to doing', and incorrect plural 'free times'. This is a sentence structure error (26) and also involves verb + -ing form (8) and singular/plural (1). Fix by removing duplicates and unnecessary conjunctions, use the infinitive 'to do' after 'love', and use the uncountable noun 'free time'. Suggestion: say 'I have many things that I really love to do in my free time.'

× Things I love baking and watching films the most.

✓ I love baking and watching films the most.

The fragment begins with 'Things' and lacks a proper verb, causing a sentence structure/conjunction issue (16,26). Remove 'Things' and state the subject and verb: 'I love baking and watching films the most.' This makes a complete sentence that matches the question's tense and meaning.

× As I remember when I was a child, I have many things that I like to do in my past time.

✓ As I remember, when I was a child I had many things that I liked to do in my pastime.

The student mixes present tense 'have' and 'like' with the past time frame 'when I was a child.' This is a past tense issue (5). Use past tense verbs 'had' and 'liked' to match the time reference. Also 'pastime' is one word; using 'in my pastime' or better 'in my free time then' is acceptable.

× For example, playing Pearl, draw some pictures or going outside for work.

✓ For example, playing with marbles, drawing pictures, or going outside to play.

This sentence has inconsistent verb forms (gerund vs base form) and unclear vocabulary. 'Playing Pearl' is unclear; likely intended a childhood game like marbles. Also 'draw some pictures' should be 'drawing pictures' to match parallel gerund forms, and 'going outside for work' should be 'going outside to play' to fit a child's hobbies. This reflects verb form consistency error (8) and word choice issue.

× I think I don't to be honest, what I was a child, I don't really keen on drawing pictures or paintings.

✓ To be honest, when I was a child I wasn't really keen on drawing pictures or painting.

The original mixes 'I don't' with past-time reference and misorders phrases; 'keen on' requires an adjective + preposition and negative past form 'wasn't'. This is an incorrect pronoun/tense and sentence structure error (12,26,5). Reorder to 'To be honest, when I was a child I wasn't really keen on drawing pictures or painting.'

× But now to be honestly, I really enjoy drawings because it helps me relax.

✓ But now, to be honest, I really enjoy drawing because it helps me relax.

Use 'to be honest' (not 'to be honestly') and 'drawing' (gerund) rather than plural noun 'drawings' when referring to the activity. 'It helps me relax' is correct. This is a present tense/word form error (6,10,13). Use 'I really enjoy drawing' for the activity.

× I think I don't in my family members.

✓ I don't think I share the same hobbies with my family members.

The original is ungrammatical and misorders words; it lacks the object and correct auxiliary structure. This is an incorrect pronoun/ sentence structure error (12,26). A natural phrasing is 'I don't think I share the same hobbies with my family members.'

× My mom is not good in cooking, so I will cook meals for my families and sometime I will make some sweetened food.

✓ My mom is not good at cooking, so I cook meals for my family and sometimes I make sweet treats.

Use 'good at' (correct preposition) not 'good in' (11). 'Family' is a collective noun used without plural 'families' here (1/22). Use present simple 'I cook' rather than 'I will cook' for habitual actions (6). 'Sometimes' (adverb) needs an -s and 'sweet treats' is a more natural phrase than 'sweetened food.' This addresses preposition, tense, plural and adverb placement errors (11,6,1,20).