Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar (e.g., 'My hobby is reading' or 'I enjoy reading books'), avoid redundancy, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I enjoy reading books in my free time. For example, I often read contemporary novels because they help me learn everyday vocabulary and expressions that I can use when speaking with others.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use past tense consistently and combine short fragments into coherent sentences. Provide a specific example of the games and use a linking word to explain why you liked them.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I liked playing games with my siblings, especially hide-and-seek and board games. Because we had few other options, those games were a fun way to spend quality time together.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and clearer phrasing. Begin with a direct topic sentence and then explain with one or two supporting details, using linking words. Be specific about how hobbies changed over time.

Ví dụ: I don't have one hobby that I've kept since childhood. Over the years my interests have changed — for example, I used to enjoy drawing when I was young, but now I prefer reading and jogging.

Gợi ý: Make the response clearer and more natural. Avoid informal phrases like 'So be honest.' State directly whether your hobbies match family members', then give a brief specific comparison and a reason using a linking word.

Ví dụ: Not really — my family members usually prefer outdoor activities like gardening or cycling, while I prefer reading and indoor hobbies. Because our personalities are different, we enjoy different pastimes.

× My hobby is reading a book.

✓ My hobby is reading books.

The noun 'book' should be plural when referring to the general activity of reading in general. Use plural form 'books' to indicate a habitual activity rather than a single specific book.

× This is because by reading it help helps me to gain new vocabulary which I can use to communicate with others.

✓ This is because reading helps me to gain new vocabulary that I can use to communicate with others.

The phrase 'by reading it help helps' is incorrect. Remove 'by' and 'it', use the present simple 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'reading'. Also replace 'which' with 'that' for restrictive clause clarity. This yields a correct reduced clause: 'reading helps me...'. Suggestions: use 'reading helps' or 'by reading I can...'.

× When I was a child, I like to play. Games with my siblings.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to play games with my siblings.

Talking about past habits requires past tense 'liked' not present 'like'. Also join the sentence fragments into one: 'play games' not 'play. Games'. Suggestions: use 'When I was a child, I liked to...'. Use past simple for past routines.

× This is because it is the only time that I can spend my quality time with my brothers.

✓ This is because it was the only time I could spend quality time with my brothers.

The clause refers to past time, so verbs should be in past tense: 'was' and 'could'. Also 'my quality time' is redundant; 'quality time' is sufficient. Use past tense consistently for past contexts.

× For me, I don't have specific hobby since childhood because my hobby continue to change as my age increases.

✓ For me, I don't have a specific hobby since childhood because my hobbies have continued to change as I grow older.

Several issues: 'specific hobby' needs an article 'a'. 'Since childhood' with 'don't have' creates a tense mismatch—use present perfect for actions from past to present: 'have had' or keep present simple but rephrase. Also 'hobby continue' needs subject-verb agreement and correct tense: 'hobbies have continued'. 'As my age increases' is unnatural; use 'as I grow older'. Suggestions: 'I haven't had a specific hobby since childhood' or the provided correction.

× So be honest, I don't really think I know what my family hobbies but I think every people have different hobbies as mine.

✓ To be honest, I don't really know my family's hobbies, but I think everyone has different hobbies from mine.

Use the phrase 'To be honest' not 'So be honest'. 'I don't really know my family's hobbies' uses possessive form. 'Every people' is ungrammatical—use 'everyone'. 'Have' should be 'has' for subject-verb agreement with 'everyone'. Use 'different from mine' rather than 'as mine'. Suggestions: 'To be honest, I don't really know my family's hobbies, but I think everyone has different hobbies from mine.'