Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (say "playing the piano" or "playing piano"), and avoid overly vague or poetic phrases that may sound odd ("extending to heaven"). Add one specific reason or example and use a linking word if you expand. Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: I enjoy playing the piano. It helps me relax after a long day, and I often practise for about 30 minutes in the evening. For example, I recently learned a short piece by Chopin, which boosted my confidence.

Gợi ý: Correct the obvious mistakes and give a direct answer. Use a topic sentence that states whether you had a hobby, then briefly explain what it was and why you stopped, using linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Avoid contradictions like "I hate a hobby" when you mean the opposite.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a hobby as a child: I used to collect toy cars. However, I stopped collecting them when I grew older because I had less time and my interests changed.

Gợi ý: Be specific and grammatically correct. Start with a clear statement, then give concrete supporting details (which books, frequency) and use linking words. Correct phrases: "reading books", "since childhood", "once a month" or give accurate frequency. Keep sentences concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I've enjoyed reading since I was a child. I especially like fantasy novels, and I try to read at least one book a month. For instance, last month I finished 'Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone' and really enjoyed the imaginative world.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and fluent supporting details. Say "Yes, I share a hobby with my brother: cycling" or "riding a bike". Explain specific benefits (exercise, social time) and finish your thought—avoid trailing off. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I share a hobby with my brother: riding bikes. We cycle together most weekends because it is good exercise and a fun way to explore nearby parks. For example, last Sunday we cycled ten kilometres along the riverside and felt refreshed afterward.

× Yes, I have a hobby that is playing a piano.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby: playing the piano.

The phrase 'playing a piano' is incorrect when referring to the general activity of playing that instrument. Use the definite article 'the' with instruments when speaking about the activity (playing the piano). Also rephrasing with a colon or gerund phrase makes the sentence natural.

× It makes me feel like I'm extending to heaven.

✓ It makes me feel like I'm reaching the heavens.

'Extending to heaven' is an awkward literal translation and incorrect adjective/verb collocation. 'Reaching the heavens' or 'like I'm in heaven' are natural English idioms. 'Reaching' is the correct verb collocation here.

× As every child has a hobby, yes indeed I hate a hobby, but I no longer Y like that hobby.

✓ As every child has hobbies, yes, I used to have a hobby, but I no longer like that hobby.

The original mixes present tense and wrong lexicon: 'hate a hobby' is incorrect (likely meant 'had a hobby') and 'Y' is invalid. Use past tense 'used to have' or simple past 'I had' to indicate a former habit. Also change 'a hobby' to plural 'hobbies' after 'every child' for natural phrasing. Include commas for clarity.

× I'd probably say it's reading a book.

✓ I'd probably say it's reading books.

'Reading a book' suggests a single instance, but when talking about a habitual hobby since childhood, the plural 'books' or 'reading' as a general activity is more natural. This is a quantifier/number usage issue.

× I once read a book and that feels so awesome.

✓ I once read a book and that felt so awesome.

The sentence mixes past reference 'I once read' with present 'feels'. Use past tense 'felt' to keep temporal consistency when describing a past experience.

× So since then I read book every one month.

✓ So since then I have read a book every month.

'Read book every one month' is ungrammatical. Use the article 'a book' and the adverbial expression 'every month'. Also use present perfect 'have read' with 'since then' to indicate repeated action from past until now.

× Yes, the same hobby as my brother.

✓ Yes, I have the same hobby as my brother.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a verb. Add subject and verb ('I have') to form a complete sentence.

× This is riding a bike.

✓ It is riding a bike.

'This is riding a bike' is awkward; use 'It is riding a bike' or better 'Mine is riding a bike' or 'My hobby is riding a bike.' Also with hobbies, 'riding a bike' is the gerund phrase; include appropriate subject.

× It makes me keep being healthy and it makes me feel like sporty.

✓ It helps me stay healthy and makes me feel sporty.

'Keep being healthy' is unnatural; use 'stay healthy'. 'Feel like sporty' is incorrect word order and missing preposition/adjective form: use 'feel sporty' or 'feel like an athlete'. Combine the clauses smoothly.

× It has a lot of good things, but.

✓ It has a lot of benefits.

The original ends with an incomplete clause 'but.' Remove the dangling 'but' and use a concise noun phrase 'a lot of benefits' for clarity. If a contrast is needed, complete the second clause.