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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you have any hobbies?

Thí sinh

Uh, yes, I like watching, uh, football games.

Giám khảo

Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I when I was a child, I like to play football with my classmates.

Giám khảo

Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

Thí sinh

Uh, yes, uh, I like to, umm, watch football games, uh, from my childhood until now, uh, for example, the, uh, World Cup, uh, games. And I really like to watch, uh, the Liverpool football games.

Giám khảo

Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

Thí sinh

Uh, yes, I think my father, uh, likes to watch football games as well. Uh, but not, uh, not as uh, he uh, didn't say as much matches as me.

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Part 1

Do you have any hobbies?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接自信,减少填充词(如 uh, um)。可以给出1句主题句+1句具体细节(如喜欢哪支球队或比赛类型),总句数不超过5句。举例:先直接说有爱好并命名,随后补充具体内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy watching football, especially professional matches like the Premier League. I follow several teams and try to watch important games on weekends.

Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 注意时态一致,叙述童年经历应用过去时;减少语法错误并给出一到两句具体细节(比如频率或场地)。保持回答简洁且有连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I played football with my classmates when I was a child. We usually played every afternoon on the school field, and I enjoyed practicing dribbling and scoring goals.

Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答要自然流畅,避免重复填充词;用一两句清晰说明持续的爱好并举具体例子(比赛或球队),可加入原因或感受以丰富内容。注意句子连贯,使用连接词如 "because" 或 "for example"。

Ví dụ: Yes, I've loved watching football since I was a child because it brings me excitement and a sense of community. For example, I always watch World Cup matches and I follow Liverpool closely because I admire their attacking style.

Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更明确,用更自然的表达比较你和家人的兴趣。可说明相似之处和差异(例如观看频率或喜欢的球队),并用原因或例子支持。删除多余的停顿词。

Ví dụ: Yes, my father also likes watching football, but he doesn't watch as many matches as I do. He prefers watching major tournaments, while I follow weekly league games and highlights.

Ngữ pháp

6: Present tense issue

× Yes, I when I was a child, I like to play football with my classmates.

When I was a child, I liked to play football with my classmates.

句子中描述过去的习惯性动作,应使用一般过去时。原句用了现在时“like”,时态不一致且多余的“Yes, I”与逗留词序混乱。建议把句子主干整理为“When I was a child, I liked to...”,表达清晰,动词用过去式“liked”。

6: Present tense issue

× Uh, yes, uh, I like to, umm, watch football games, uh, from my childhood until now, uh, for example, the, uh, World Cup, uh, games. And I really like to watch, uh, the Liverpool football games.

Yes, I have liked watching football games from my childhood until now. For example, I enjoy the World Cup matches, and I really like watching Liverpool's games.

句子要表示从过去持续到现在的动作,应使用现在完成时(have liked)以表示持续性。原句多次使用现在时“like to”导致时态不明确且重复啰嗦。建议使用现在完成时表持续经历,并简化重复表达;例如“have liked watching... from my childhood until now”。此外“Liverpool football games”可改为“Liverpool's games”更自然。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× Uh, yes, I think my father, uh, likes to watch football games as well. Uh, but not, uh, not as uh, he uh, didn't say as much matches as me.

Yes, I think my father likes to watch football games as well, but he doesn't watch as many matches as I do.

原句存在主谓一致与量词使用错误:1) 描述现在习惯应使用一般现在时“doesn't watch”而不是过去式“didn't say”。2) “much matches”中“much”不能修饰可数名词“matches”,应改为“many matches”。3) “as me”在比较结构中更正式正确的主格是“I do”,因此改为“as I do”。建议把句子整理为对比结构“he doesn't watch as many matches as I do”。

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