Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct verb forms and articles, and include one or two specific details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' appropriately and keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I enjoy aerobic activities, especially running marathons. I run regularly because it helps me stay fit and improves my endurance. As a result, my cardiovascular health has gotten much better.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear past tense topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetition, and provide one specific reason or example. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and correct tense consistency.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I didn't have many hobbies because I focused mainly on my studies. As a result, I rarely had time to try sports or arts, which is common for many students in my country.

Gợi ý: Give a confident, fluent response in past and present tenses correctly; avoid filler words and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific details (when you started, how often, and what you do) using linking words like 'since' and 'so'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had running as a hobby since high school. Starting in senior year, I trained twice a week for long-distance runs, and I continue that routine now to maintain my fitness.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give clear, specific reasons and an example. Use correct articles and plural/singular agreement, avoid vague phrasing, and use linking phrases like 'for example' or 'because' appropriately.

Ví dụ: Yes, my father and I both enjoy fishing. We often go fishing at the weekend because it helps us relax after a busy week; for example, last Sunday we spent the afternoon by the lake and felt very refreshed.

× Yes, I like to aerobic activities like running marathon and because I think it's a good habit, a good hobby to help me shape my body, to strengthen my endurance and I think it's very helpful for my cardio capability.

✓ Yes, I like aerobic activities like running marathons because I think they are a good habit, a good hobby to help me shape my body, strengthen my endurance, and improve my cardiovascular fitness.

The adjective 'aerobic' should directly modify 'activities' without 'to'. 'Running marathon' needs plural and an article or plural noun: 'running marathons'. Pronoun and verb agreement: use 'they are' to refer to 'activities'. 'Cardio capability' is unnatural; use 'cardiovascular fitness'. Also remove redundant 'to' before 'strengthen' and parallel the verb forms (help me shape, strengthen, and improve). Use commas to separate list items.

× When I was young, I didn't have many hobbies. Most of the time I will focus on my I, I, I was focused on my study. So it's quite hard for our Chinese kids to to cultivate the hobby at the young age.

✓ When I was young, I didn't have many hobbies. Most of the time I focused on my studies. So it's quite hard for Chinese kids to cultivate hobbies at a young age.

The speaker refers to the past, so 'will focus' is incorrect; use simple past 'focused'. 'My study' should be plural 'my studies'. Remove repeated filler words. 'To to' is a typo; use one 'to'. 'The young age' is unnatural—use 'a young age'. Also pluralize 'hobby' to 'hobbies' to match 'many'. These changes fix tense, pluralization, and article usage.

× Uh, yes, I do have one. Like I said, I love running marathons and uh, when I was in Senior High School I was, I was trying to develop these kinds of uh, hobby and every weeks I will spend 2 days to run long distance.

✓ Uh, yes, I do have one. As I said, I love running marathons, and when I was in senior high school I tried to develop this kind of hobby and every week I spent two days running long distances.

Use 'as I said' for clarity. 'Trying to develop' can be changed to simple past 'tried' to match the past context. 'These kinds of hobby' is incorrect—use 'this kind of hobby' or 'these kinds of hobbies'. 'Every weeks' should be 'every week' (singular). 'Will spend 2 days to run long distance' is wrong in past context: use 'spent two days running long distances'—use verb+ -ing after 'spent' and pluralize 'long distances' or say 'long-distance runs'.

× Yes, my father and I have the same hobby, which is fishing because I think is a good way for me, for our student to relax after a whole week's hard working. And when you do that you feel at ease and I think it's a good way to help you.

✓ Yes, my father and I have the same hobby, which is fishing, because I think it is a good way for me and for students to relax after a whole week's hard work. When you do that you feel at ease, and I think it's a good way to help you relax.

Insert 'it' after 'I think' for grammatical completeness. 'For our student' should be 'for students' or 'for students like us'. 'Hard working' as a noun is incorrect—use 'hard work'. Add commas to separate clauses. Clarify the final clause by adding 'relax' for completeness. These changes correct pronoun and noun form usage and improve clarity.