Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、句子更简洁，并以主题句开头，随后用一到两句具体细节支持。注意时态和词形（如 start → started，par parents → parents），避免重复表达“do”。可用连接词使句子更连贯，例如“because”或“so”。

Ví dụ: I have two main hobbies: drawing and dancing. I practice both almost every day, usually twice a day, because they help me relax and keep me energized.

Gợi ý: 需要使用正确的时态（过去式），并把句子分成主题句和具体支持句。修正语法错误（start → started，I'm → I was，take → took），去掉冗长重复。补充一两个具体细节，如年龄或课程内容，可以提升内容分数。

Ví dụ: Yes, I started drawing and dancing when I was in kindergarten. My parents noticed my enthusiasm and talent, so they enrolled me in classes where I learned basic techniques and practiced regularly.

Gợi ý: 考官实际问题是要确认是否长期持续的爱好。即使之前已经提到，也应该直接回答并简要重复支持细节（主题句+一两句细节）。避免留空答案。

Ví dụ: Yes. Drawing and dancing have been my hobbies since childhood; I began in kindergarten and have kept practicing them regularly ever since.

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并直接说明原因。不要使用不必要的比喻（serious barrier），改用更清晰的表达如“age gap”或“different interests”。可用一两句说明家庭成员的不同兴趣作为支持细节。

Ví dụ: No, we don't share the same hobbies. There's a large age gap of about 20 years, so family members prefer different activities — for example, my parents enjoy gardening while I prefer drawing and dancing.

× Yes, as my best hobbies, drawing and dancing often take a great part of my life.

✓ Yes, my favorite hobbies, drawing and dancing, take up a large part of my life.

句中用法不当：使用“best hobbies”不自然，应为“favorite hobbies”（最喜欢的爱好）。另外“take a great part of my life”搭配不地道，常用短语是“take up a large part of my life”。建议使用更自然的形容词和固定搭配。

× I often do these two activities twice a day when I need to get a rest and do something that I like to do.

✓ I often do these two activities twice a day when I need to rest and do something I enjoy.

时态和表达不够简洁：用现在时“do”可以，但短语“get a rest”不地道，应为“rest”；“do something that I like to do”冗长，简化为“do something I enjoy”。提高自然性和流畅度。

× Yes, I start to see drawing and dancing as my hobby since I'm in kindergarten and at that time my par parents saw my talent and enthusiasm so they take me to the practicing hobby class to make me further.

✓ Yes, I started to see drawing and dancing as my hobbies when I was in kindergarten. At that time my parents saw my talent and enthusiasm, so they took me to practice classes to help me improve.

时态错误：句中谈过去的经历应使用过去时，故“start”改为“started”，“I'm in kindergarten”应为过去时“I was in kindergarten”，“take me”应为过去时“took me”。另外“par parents”拼写错误，改为“parents”；“practicing hobby class to make me further”表达不自然，改为“practice classes to help me improve”。建议回忆时间点使用过去时，并用常见表达。

× No we don't. We have a very serious barrier between each other as our age has 20 years difference.

✓ No, we don't. There is a large age gap of about 20 years between us.

主谓一致和句子结构问题：原句“our age has 20 years difference”结构不正确且动词搭配不当。应使用固定表达“age gap”或“The age difference is 20 years”并注意主语和动词一致。建议使用“It is/There is... between us”或“The age difference is...”来表达年龄差距。