Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and past-tense mistakes when describing current habits.

Ví dụ: I have a few hobbies. I enjoy reading in my free time because it helps me relax, and on weekends I play badminton with friends to keep fit and socialize.

Gợi ý: Use consistent tense and avoid repetition. Give a clear topic sentence about childhood, then support with one specific detail and a linking word to connect to the present if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, as a child I enjoyed several hobbies, especially badminton. For example, I often played with neighborhood friends, and in fact I still play it today because it keeps me fit and helps me make friends.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and use correct verb forms. Add one concrete example and a linking word to structure the response. Avoid repeating phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have played badminton since childhood. For instance, I represented my school in inter-school competitions, which helped me stay fit and meet many new people.

Gợi ý: Be clear and remove filler words. Start with a direct statement about family hobbies, then give one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Use present tense for current habits.

Ví dụ: Yes, my family shares my interest in badminton. For example, my father also plays, so we often play together on weekends to spend quality time and stay active.

× Yes, I have different kind of hobbies.

✓ Yes, I have different kinds of hobbies.

The noun 'kind' needs to be plural when referring to more than one type; use 'kinds' after 'different'. Also 'different' is a determiner requiring plural noun here. Suggestion: say 'different kinds of hobbies' or 'a variety of hobbies.'

× When I am free I like to read the books and on the weekend days I like to play badminton with my friends because it was the way through which I spend more time with my friends and.

✓ When I am free I like to read books, and on weekends I like to play badminton with my friends because it is a way for me to spend more time with them.

Remove the definite article 'the' before 'books' because speaking generally requires no article. 'On the weekend days' is unnatural; use 'on weekends' or 'at the weekend'. Verb tense and reference should be present ('it is a way...') not past. The sentence ended with 'and' and was incomplete; combine appropriately. Suggestion: split into two clauses, use simple present for habitual actions and avoid unnecessary articles.

× ...because it was the way through which I spend more time with my friends and.

✓ ...because it is a way through which I spend more time with my friends.

The clause describes a habitual present action, so use present tense 'is' not past 'was'. Also 'spend' is present and should match 'is'. Suggestion: use consistent present tense for habits.

× Yes, in my childhood I have a several hobbies.

✓ Yes, in my childhood I had several hobbies.

'In my childhood' refers to the past, so use past tense 'had' rather than present 'have'. Also remove the article 'a' before 'several'. Suggestion: say 'I had several hobbies as a child.'

× In my free time I like to play badminton with my friends and in today I also like to play badminton with my friends because it is a great way to socialize and it helps me to stay fit.

✓ In my free time I like to play badminton with my friends, and today I also like to play badminton with my friends because it is a great way to socialize and it helps me stay fit.

'In today' is incorrect; use 'today' or 'nowadays'. Also 'helps me to stay fit' is acceptable but 'helps me stay fit' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'today' or 'nowadays' for current habits and place adverbs correctly.

× Yes, playing badminton is a hobby that I have since my childhood because it was one of my favorite game and I also compete against against other schools during my school days and it was a great deal for me to stay fit and a great way to socialize with the people.

✓ Yes, playing badminton is a hobby that I have had since my childhood because it was one of my favorite games, and I also competed against other schools during my school days; it was a great way for me to stay fit and to socialize with people.

Use present perfect 'have had' to show a hobby started in the past and continues to now. 'Favorite game' should be plural 'games' or 'my favorite game' with article. 'Compete' should be past 'competed' to match 'during my school days'. Remove duplicate 'against'. 'A great deal for me' is awkward; use 'a great way for me'. Suggestion: use present perfect for ongoing states and past simple for completed past actions; correct noun number and phrasing.

× Yes, my family members also have a as my father also have a hobby of playing badminton and the same hobby I developed when I was in my childhood era.

✓ Yes, my family members also have the same hobby; my father also has a hobby of playing badminton, and I developed the same interest when I was a child.

The original mixes pronouns and articles incorrectly and repeats 'have'. Use 'the same hobby' to match family members. 'Father also have' should be 'father also has' for subject-verb agreement. 'In my childhood era' is awkward; use 'when I was a child.' Suggestion: simplify to 'my family members share the same hobby' and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Since uh, today I have this hobby and I like to play badminton with my parents during the free time because it was a great way to spend quality time with them.

✓ Today I have this hobby and I like to play badminton with my parents during my free time because it is a great way to spend quality time with them.

Use present tense 'is' to describe a current benefit. 'During the free time' should be 'during my free time'. Remove filler 'uh' in formal responses. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (present) when describing current habits and benefits.