Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid redundant phrases like “my mind” mistakes and overlong clauses.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading books. For example, I usually read historical novels because they relax me and help me learn about past events.

Gợi ý: Fix grammatical errors and use a clear structure: topic sentence + one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition of the same idea.

Ví dụ: Yes, I played cricket a lot as a child. I enjoyed it because it kept me fit and taught me teamwork, and I often played with friends after school.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and reduce repetition. Give a clear topic sentence, then one specific example and a linking word to explain why you like it. Mention a concrete detail (genre, title) to be specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have enjoyed watching movies since childhood. For instance, I love Marvel films because their action scenes and characters make me feel excited and inspired.

Gợi ý: Remove filler words and correct verb choice. Start with a direct answer, then add a specific example and use a linking word to explain how your mother influenced you. Be concise and avoid repeating the same point.

Ví dụ: Yes, I share my mother’s interest in reading. She often recommends personal-development and fiction books, so I started reading similar titles and found them very helpful for my growth.

× Yes, I have a hobby of reading books as it keeps me my mind relaxed and also helps me to gain knowledge.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby of reading books because it keeps my mind relaxed and also helps me gain knowledge.

Replace 'of' with 'because' to show reason; remove extra 'my' before 'mind'; use 'helps me gain' without 'to' for natural verb pattern. Suggestion: say 'my hobby is reading books' or 'I enjoy reading books because...'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, during my childhood I was a hobby of playing cricket and I am very fond of cricket and it also helps me to keep my body fit and I like the cricket a lot that time.

✓ Yes, during my childhood my hobby was playing cricket. I was very fond of cricket, and it also helped me stay fit. I liked cricket a lot at that time.

'was a hobby of playing' is incorrect; use 'my hobby was playing'. Remove unnecessary articles 'the' before 'cricket'. Change tense to past ('helped', 'liked') to match 'during my childhood'. Use 'stay fit' instead of 'keep my body fit'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Yes, one hobby that I have been since my childhood and it's a watching movies and I like watching movies and it gave me more a different interest and also give me more joy when I watch a new types of Marvel movies and another.

✓ Yes, one hobby I have had since my childhood is watching movies. I like watching movies; they gave me different interests and bring me joy when I watch new Marvel movies and others.

Sentence was ungrammatical and run-on. Use present perfect 'have had' for a hobby continuing from childhood. 'It's a watching movies' is wrong; use 'is watching movies'. Use consistent verb forms: 'gave' (past effect) or better 'has given'/'bring' for present. Correct 'a different interest' to 'different interests' and 'new types of Marvel movies and others' to 'new Marvel movies and others'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, of course, as my mother is also, uh, fond of reading books and I also adapt that hobby from my mother and I like that she read a lot of books and also suggested me some new books that I liked and also suggest my for a personal development book.

✓ Yes, of course. My mother is also fond of reading books, and I adopted that hobby from her. I like that she reads a lot of books and suggested some new books that I liked, and she also suggested a personal development book to me.

Use 'adopted' (past tense) instead of 'adapt' for taking up a hobby. 'From my mother' can be 'from her' for naturalness. Use 'reads' (present) to describe her habit and 'suggested' (past) for specific recommendations. Correct object placement: 'suggested a personal development book to me'. Fix pronoun and preposition order. Grammar problem type ID:11