Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with grammar, plurality and word choice; make your response more concise and add linking words for flow. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct 'one of my favorite hobby' to 'one of my favorite hobbies' and prefer either 'films and TV series' or 'movies and web series'. Use a linking phrase to add reasons and keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I have several hobbies, and one of my favorite hobbies is watching films and web series. I enjoy them because they offer different storytelling styles and help me relax. Moreover, they let me explore other cultures and ideas, which I find both entertaining and educational.

Gợi ý: Good content and details, but adjust tense consistency and keep sentences varied and linked. Use past tense throughout when describing childhood and add a linking word to show sequence or result. Combine short sentences to be more natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child I enjoyed drawing, especially nature, animals and cartoon characters. Drawing helped me express my creativity and imagination, so I often spent hours after school with pencils and colours practising my sketches.

Gợi ý: Correct tense and word choice errors and be specific about genres. Use consistent tense (present perfect for ongoing habits), fix 'love' to 'loved', 'children's books', and 'novels' instead of 'nobles'. Add linking words to contrast past and present.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have enjoyed reading since childhood. I loved children's books full of adventure and fairy tales because they sparked my imagination; however, these days I prefer novels with deeper characters and more complex plots.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use 'my family and I' not 'me and my family', and avoid long, repetitive clauses. Be concise and use linking words to explain benefits. Provide a specific example of a shared hobby to strengthen the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, my family and I share some hobbies, such as collecting stamps and watching films together. Sharing hobbies makes the experience more enjoyable and helps us bond, learn from each other and build shared memories.

× One of my favorite hobby is watching movies, drama or web series.

✓ One of my favorite hobbies is watching movies, dramas, or web series.

'One of my favorite' requires a plural noun after 'of', so 'hobby' must be plural 'hobbies'. Also 'drama' as a genre countable here should be plural 'dramas' to match 'movies' and 'web series'. Use commas before 'or' in a list for clarity.

× I find that both mediums offer unique ways of storytelling and offer relaxation, entertainment, a chance to explore different cultures.

✓ I find that both mediums offer unique ways of storytelling and provide relaxation, entertainment, and a chance to explore different cultures.

The sentence mixes verbs; use parallel verbs for clarity. 'Offer' can work but repeating it is awkward; using 'provide' creates parallel structure with a correctly punctuated list. A comma is needed before 'and' in the list. This is primarily a present tense/verb choice and style issue.

× When I was a child, I had a hobby of drawing.

✓ When I was a child, I had a hobby of drawing.

No grammatical correction needed for tense; sentence is acceptable. (Included to show checked — no change required.)

× I like to draw nature, animals and cartoon characters.

✓ I liked to draw nature, animals, and cartoon characters.

The question asked about childhood hobbies, so past tense 'liked' is appropriate. Changing tense to past keeps the sentence consistent with 'When I was a child'. Add a comma before 'and' in the list for clarity.

× It helps me express my creativity and imagination.

✓ It helped me express my creativity and imagination.

Referring to a childhood hobby requires past tense; change 'helps' to 'helped' to match context.

× I spent hours with my pencils and colors after school.

✓ I spent hours with my pencils and colors after school.

This sentence is already correct in past tense and needs no change. (Included to indicate checked.)

× I have enjoyed reading books since childhood.

✓ I have enjoyed reading books since childhood.

This present perfect sentence is acceptable to express an activity continuing from childhood to now, so no change is needed.

× As a child I love children's book full of adventure and fairy tales as they sparked my imagination.

✓ As a child I loved children's books full of adventure and fairy tales because they sparked my imagination.

Tense should be past ('loved') to match 'as a child' and 'sparked'. 'Children's book' must be plural 'children's books' to agree with 'full of adventure and fairy tales'. Use 'because' for causal connection rather than repeating 'as'.

× But these days I prefer nobles for their deeper characters and plots.

✓ But these days I prefer novels for their deeper characters and plots.

'Nobles' is a wrong word; the correct noun is 'novels'. This fixes a lexical error (wrong word) rather than grammar type, but it falls under incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs/word choice category in the provided list. 'Prefer' is correctly in present tense for current preference.

× Yes, me and some of my family members share the same hobby, as sharing hobbies with others can make the experience more enjoyable and meaningful since they help building collection and friendships.

✓ Yes, some of my family members and I share the same hobby, as sharing hobbies with others can make the experience more enjoyable and meaningful since they help build collections and friendships.

Use subject pronoun order '...and I' instead of 'me and ...'. 'They help building' is incorrect: after 'help' use base verb 'build'. 'Collection' should be plural 'collections' to match context. Also reorder subjects for natural English. Commas adjusted for clarity.

× It allows people to learn from each other and discover new things.

✓ It allows people to learn from each other and discover new things.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. (Included to indicate checked.)