Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer first, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (pluralization, verb forms) and avoid redundancy. Keep it within 3–4 sentences. Mention concrete examples (how often, what you enjoy about each hobby).

Ví dụ: Yes. I enjoy collecting stamps and drawing. Collecting stamps has taught me patience because I search for rare issues, while drawing improves my creativity; for example, I usually spend Saturday mornings sketching landscapes and adding new stamps to my album.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement about childhood hobbies, then contrast with current hobbies using linking words (however, now). Use accurate vocabulary and grammar (e.g., "used to play sports", "listening to music"). Provide a specific example or frequency and explain why the hobby helped you. Keep answers concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes. As a child I used to play outdoor sports regularly because I enjoyed running and team games. However, now I prefer listening to music and drawing since they relax me and boost my creativity; for example, I listen to upbeat songs while sketching for about an hour each evening.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly with a specific hobby that you have kept since childhood. Avoid unclear phrasing and filler words. Explain briefly how you maintained or developed the hobby with concrete actions or frequency. Use simple correct sentences and linking words (for example, since, so).

Ví dụ: Yes. I have kept drawing since I was a child. I practised regularly by joining an art club at school and drawing for at least an hour every weekend, which helped me improve my skills as I grew older.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer and describe how you share the hobby with your family using specific details (what you cook, how often, roles). Avoid repetitive words and filler. Use linking words (for example, together, so) and correct grammar ("my mom and I", "we cook together").

Ví dụ: Yes. My mom and I both enjoy cooking. We often try new recipes together on weekends and take turns choosing dishes; for instance, last Sunday we cooked a spicy chicken curry and homemade dumplings, which the whole family enjoyed.

× Then I do my hobbies is collecting stamp and drawing a picture because they have improved my creativity and my patience is for example in the weekend I do it's very usually when I do this I feel.

✓ My hobbies are collecting stamps and drawing pictures because they improve my creativity and patience. For example, I usually do these activities on weekends and I feel relaxed when I do them.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect word order, missing plural forms, redundant verbs, and run-on phrasing. Use a clear subject-verb structure: 'My hobbies are...' and pluralize 'stamps' and 'pictures'. Separate into two sentences for clarity and use simple present 'improve' for habitual facts. Replace 'it's very usually' with 'I usually' and add a clear result 'I feel relaxed'.

× Yes I did. When I was shy my hobbies were playing sport outdoors.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, my hobbies were playing sports outdoors.

The phrase 'When I was shy' is likely incorrect contextually; 'When I was a child' fits the question about childhood. Also pluralize 'sports' for general activities. Keep past tense 'were playing' for past habits. Add commas for natural pauses.

× But as I grew up, I prefer the listening to music and drawing because they not only help me feel more energetic, comfortable but also puts my creativity.

✓ But as I grew up, I prefer listening to music and drawing because they not only help me feel more energetic and comfortable but also foster my creativity.

After 'prefer' use the base verb or gerund without 'the' ('prefer listening'). 'Help' is correct for plural subjects, and use parallel structure 'energetic and comfortable'. 'Puts my creativity' is incorrect; use 'foster my creativity' or 'bring out my creativity'. Maintain present simple for current preference.

× For example, when my mouse is so good, I usually listen to happy songs.

✓ For example, when my mood is good, I usually listen to happy songs.

'Mouse' is a wrong word choice; the correct pronoun/word is 'mood'. Use 'mood' to refer to emotional state. Sentence structure and tense are fine once corrected.

× Sometimes I also draw to.

✓ Sometimes I also draw.

'To' is unnecessary and incorrect at the end. Remove it; 'draw' as an intransitive verb is fine. Keep adverb placement before the verb for natural English.

× Well, when I get older, I train my hobby very much because I feel my mature should be trained uh, they to, uh, my mature.

✓ Well, as I got older, I practiced my hobbies a lot because I felt I should develop my maturity.

The original uses incorrect tense and nonstandard phrasing ('train my hobby', 'my mature'). Use past tense 'got older' and 'practiced' for actions in the past. Replace 'train my hobby' with 'practiced my hobbies' and 'my mature' with 'develop my maturity' or 'become more mature'. Remove filler 'uh' and unclear pronouns.

× Well, I and my mom have same hobbies cooking.

✓ Well, my mom and I share the same hobby: cooking.

Word order is more natural as 'my mom and I'. Use 'share the same hobby' or 'have the same hobby' and include article 'the'. 'Cooking' is singular as a hobby rather than plural 'hobbies' unless listing multiple activities.

× We usually sell sell together a recipe, uh, cook cooking recipe to cook new foods for family.

✓ We usually test recipes together and cook new dishes for the family.

The original contains repetitions and incorrect verbs ('sell sell', 'cook cooking recipe'). Use 'test recipes' or 'try recipes' and 'cook new dishes'. 'For family' should be 'for the family'. Remove filler 'uh'.

× We feel very uh enjoy that.

✓ We really enjoy that.

'Feel very enjoy' is ungrammatical. Use the verb 'enjoy' directly with an adverb modifier: 'We really enjoy that' or 'We feel very happy about that'. Remove filler 'uh' and choose appropriate verb/adjective combination.