Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır ancak birkaç dilbilgisi hatası, anlamsal belirsizlik ("videos activities"), tekrar ve gereksiz kelime kullanımı var. Cümleleri daha kısa ve net tut, dilbilgisi hatalarını düzelt ve bağlaçlarla akıcılığı artır. Örneğin: hobilerini listeledikten sonra her birinin sana ne sağladığını kısa bir neden-sonuç bağı ile açıkla. Ayrıca "self confident" yerine "self-confidence" kullan ve "videos activities" yerine ne demek istediğini netleştir (ör. video düzenleme veya izleme).

Ví dụ: Yes. I enjoy playing tennis and running. I also like editing short videos in my free time. These activities help me reduce stress and improve my self-confidence because they keep me active and creative.

Gợi ý: Cevap samimi fakat dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi zayıf; tekrar eden ifadeler ve akıcılık eksik. "reading book" yerine "reading books", "very shy person" yerine "a very shy person" kullan. Ayrıca bağlantı ifadeleriyle neden-sonuç daha net kurulabilir. Kısa ve farklı cümlelerle açıklama yaparak tekrarı azalt.

Ví dụ: When I was a child I liked reading books and watching TV. I was quite shy, so I preferred solitary activities. For example, I often read adventure stories and watched family films instead of playing with classmates.

Gợi ý: Cevap net ve uygun içeriğe sahip ancak zaman kullanımı ve dilbilgisi hataları var ("plays", "it's it is"), tekrarlar bulunuyor. Süreyi ve başlangıç nedenini kısa, doğru zaman ifadeleriyle belirt. Bağlaçlarla akışı yumuşat ve tek cümlede maksimum üç kısa cümle kullanmaya çalış.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have played tennis for ten years. I started when I joined a local tennis club with my father in secondary school, and we still practice together. Tennis is a very absorbing and rewarding hobby for me.

Gợi ý: Cevap düşünceyi veriyor fakat kelime seçimi hatalı ve bazı ifadeler uygun değil ("prone to" yanlış bağlamda; "vicious activities" tamamen yanlış anlam oluşturuyor). Tekrarlar ve konuşma dolgu kelimeleri var. Daha doğru kelimeler kullan, nedenlerini ve örnekleri bağlaçlarla kısa şekilde ver. Örneğin "we enjoy" veya "we like", "outdoor activities" veya "physical activities" tercih et.

Ví dụ: Yes, my family and I enjoy similar hobbies because we all try to stay fit. For example, we often go running together, play tennis and sometimes football on weekends.

× I engage in videos activities and these hobbies are help to reduce my stress and build my self confident.

✓ I engage in video activities and these hobbies help to reduce my stress and build my self-confidence.

The noun 'videos activities' is incorrect pluralization and word order; use 'video activities' or 'videos' alone. 'are help' is wrong because 'help' is the correct verb without 'are'. 'self confident' should be the compound noun 'self-confidence'. Suggestion: use 'I engage in video activities; these hobbies help to reduce my stress and build my self-confidence.'

× To be honest, when I was a child my hobbies were reading book and watching TV because I was very shy person and I avoided to communicate with my peers.

✓ To be honest, when I was a child my hobbies were reading books and watching TV because I was a very shy person and I avoided communicating with my peers.

'reading book' requires plural 'books' (quantifier/number). 'very shy person' needs the article 'a'. 'avoided to communicate' is incorrect verb pattern; after 'avoid' use the gerund 'communicating'. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns and use correct verb patterns (avoid + -ing).

× Because of that reason I interested in reading book and watching different kinds of movies also series.

✓ Because of that reason I became interested in reading books and watching different kinds of movies and series.

Missing auxiliary verb 'became' for 'interested' requires a linking verb. 'interested in' is correct but 'I interested in' is wrong. 'reading book' should be 'reading books' (number) and 'also series' is awkward; use 'and series'. Suggestion: use a linking verb (be/became) and proper plural forms and conjunctions.

× Actually, I have been playing tennis for 10 years because when I was in secondary school I joined a local Tennis Club with my father.

✓ Actually, I have been playing tennis for 10 years; when I was in secondary school I joined a local tennis club with my father.

The sentence is mostly correct but capitalization 'Tennis Club' can be lowercased unless it's a proper name. No tense change needed. Suggestion: keep present perfect continuous for duration and join clauses with punctuation. (Note: this entry addresses present tense usage and minor style.)

× Still, we plays tennis for 10 years and it's it is very absorbing activity for me.

✓ Still, we have been playing tennis for 10 years and it is a very absorbing activity for me.

'we plays' is incorrect; subject 'we' requires the base verb form 'play' or the present perfect continuous 'have been playing' for duration. 'it's it is' is a repetition; use one. 'very absorbing activity' needs the article 'a'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and appropriate tense for duration, and include articles where needed.

× To be honest, my family members prone to staying fit and being healthy because of that reasons we are engaging different kind of activities, especially vicious activities such as running, playing tennis, also football and yeah.

✓ To be honest, my family members are prone to staying fit and being healthy; because of that, we engage in different kinds of activities, especially vigorous activities such as running, playing tennis, and football.

Missing verb 'are' after 'family members'. 'because of that reasons' mixes singular/plural; use 'because of that' or 'for that reason'. 'engaging different kind' needs preposition 'in' and plural 'kinds'. 'vicious' is incorrect word choice; should be 'vigorous'. 'also' and 'yeah' are informal and unnecessary. Suggestion: include the verb 'are', fix number agreement, use correct prepositions, and choose appropriate vocabulary.

× We engage in same hobbies.

✓ We engage in the same hobbies.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'same hobbies' is an article error (but here treated as singular/plural issue relating to noun phrase). Use 'the same hobbies' to refer to specific hobbies shared. Suggestion: include the definite article 'the' when specifying shared items.