Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较自然但有冗余与语法问题。应直接用主题句开始，避免重复连词（如重复使用“And”），用连接词使细节更连贯，并提供更具体信息（例如练习频率、喜爱原因）。注意语法（如“draw some musical paintings”可改为“paint musical-themed pictures”）。句子数控制在五句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have several hobbies. I play the guitar and often paint musical-themed pictures, which helps me relax. I also enjoy coding and work on small programming projects in my free time. My favorite hobby, however, is skateboarding because it keeps me active and helps me clear my mind.

Gợi ý: 内容不连贯且语法错误明显（时态、单词选择如“kneeling”不恰当）。回答应以一句明确的主题句开始，解释具体童年活动并给出原因或感受，避免自我诊断性语言（如“I'm a little depressed”需谨慎）。使用正确时态（past simple）。

Ví dụ: Not really. As a child I preferred quiet activities; for example, I loved building sandcastles on the riverbank every summer. I wasn't very sporty back then, so I spent more time drawing and playing quietly by myself.

Gợi ý: 回答有明确主题但词汇和语法不准确（如“endure drawing”应为“have been drawing”或“enjoyed drawing”）。应用连接词丰富细节并说明为什么持续至今。注意重复单词和冠词使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been drawing since childhood. I started drawing before I learned to write, because my mother taught me to draw when I was about two years old. I remember practicing by drawing our family dog, which made me love art from a very early age.

Gợi ý: 回答信息量大但有语法问题和不必要的私人细节。应直接回答并简要解释原因，使用连词使句子流畅，避免长句中断。注意冠词和时态（e.g. “very young”→“very young age”，“never see”→“haven't seen”）。

Ví dụ: Not really. I don't know much about my family's hobbies because my parents separated when I was very young. I haven't seen my father since I was three, and my mother has always been very busy with work, so we didn't have much time to share hobbies.

× I can play guitar and draw some musical paintings.

✓ I can play the guitar and draw musical paintings.

句中“play guitar”在英语中通常需加定冠词“the”表示演奏某种乐器；“draw some musical paintings”中“some”可省略以更自然。此问题属于现在分词/名词短语使用不当，建议记住固定搭配：play the + 乐器；描述爱好时可直接用动词+名词（draw musical paintings）。

× And I can do coding too.

✓ And I can do coding too.

此句语法上可接受，但更地道的表达为“I can code too.” 原句使用“do coding”虽不错误，但建议用动词短语“code”更自然。

× And my favorite hobby is skateboarding.

✓ And my favorite hobby is skateboarding.

此句语法正确，动名词用作表语恰当，无需修改。

× Actually, no. When I was a child, I don't like kneeling.

✓ Actually, no. When I was a child, I didn't like kneeling.

句子描述过去的习惯或状态，应使用过去时，因此“don't like”应改为过去式“didn't like”。建议：谈过去时使用过去时态（did/didn't + 动词原形）。

× My favorite thing to do is building sandcastles on the riverbank.

✓ My favorite thing to do was building sandcastles on the riverbank.／My favorite thing to do was to build sandcastles on the riverbank.

句子在讲过去的喜好，应使用过去时态。表语不定式和动名词都能用，但要与过去时一致，因此把主句动词改为过去时“was”。建议：过去习惯用过去时（was/were + doing 或 was + to do）。

× And I'm not very active child.

✓ And I wasn't a very active child.

缺少冠词“a”，并且描述过去应使用过去时“wasn't”。结构错误体现在冠词和时态。建议：名词前若为可数单数需加不定冠词，谈过去用过去时。

× I'm a little depressed.

✓ I was a little depressed.

原句上下文在讲童年，应使用过去时“was”。如果想表达现在仍然抑郁则可保留“I'm”，但根据上下文需改为过去时。建议根据时间参照统一时态。

× Drawing, definitely. I endure drawing even before I endure how to write.

✓ Drawing, definitely. I was drawing even before I learned how to write.

原句使用“endure”错误，意思不符合且时态不对。应使用过去进行或简单过去的“was drawing”或“drew”以及“learned”来表达“在学写字之前我就会画画”。“endure”意为“忍受”，用词不当。建议学习常见动词搭配：be drawing, learn/learned。

× I remember my mother teaching me draw when I was two years old.

✓ I remember my mother teaching me to draw when I was two years old.

动词“teach”后接动词时常用“to + 动词”或动名词，固定搭配“teach someone to do something”。因此应改为“teaching me to draw”。建议记住“teach sb to do sth”的结构。

× She told me to draw the the female dog we had when I was an infant.

✓ She told me to draw the female dog we had when I was an infant.

句中有重复的“the the”，只需一个“the”。其余结构正确。建议写作时检查重复词汇。

× No actually it's because I don't know what the hobbies my family member have.

✓ No, actually it's because I don't know what hobbies my family members have.

错误包括词序和复数问题：应把“what hobbies”放在正确位置，且“family member”应为复数“family members”，动词与复数主语一致“have”。建议：间接疑问句用法为“know what + 复数名词 + 动词”。

× My parents divorced when I was a very young and I never see my father since I was three years old and my mother was very busy with her work.

✓ My parents divorced when I was very young, and I haven't seen my father since I was three years old. My mother was very busy with her work.

多个问题：短语“a very young”应为“very young”；“I never see my father since...”需用现在完成时“haven't seen... since...”；句子太长应分成两句。建议：表示从过去一直持续到现在用现在完成时；注意形容词用法和断句。

× I can only see her at night when she's off work so I don't actually know what she likes.

✓ I can only see her at night when she's off work, so I don't actually know what she likes.

句子本身语法基本正确，但需要在两个分句之间加逗号以改善可读性。时态使用得当：现在时描述现在的情况。建议注意标点以使句子更清晰。